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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 28: Chapter 1 Edward
I have to say it was actually fun to look into Edward's mind! It's almost as if he just couldn't help himself, and he really didn't know what he was getting himself into with Bella. But once there, he just accepted as true that this was where he was going to be. I loved the line about him putting away childish things, while he wished for Alice and Bella and all the other "kids" like them that they could continue on with innocence. He doesn't begrudge it, he wants to protect it. I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed this. it was definitely harder getting in to edward's head than bella's (for me) but well worth the challenge.
and you're right, he finally gave in - unable to help himself...
Reviewer: EAC24 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Epilogue
I'm so sad it's over! Every chapter was immensely enjoyable, and you did such a good job writing this story! I loved it!
Author's Response: thank you so much, ;) i loved writing this story and was sad to end it, but it had to happen. i appreciate your kind words, and i'm glad you liked it...
xoxox
rochelle
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Epilogue
Great work is it too late to vote?!? I want an epi for the epi! Like 10 years later!!! Please pretty please POUT!!!!!!!! Great work I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: aw, i'm sorry my dear! the "vote" was actually awhile ago - on ff.net. the chapters chosen were the first one, the chapter where bella is interrrogated, and the chapter she and edward are shot outside the hospital. hopefully you will enjoy them, just the same. :) thanks bb!
xoxoxoxo
ro
Reviewer: edwrdcu77enlover (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 14
very dark times to live there... I feel totally transported to that place and time... I hear the accents in my mind even, goooood!
Author's Response: thank you, so much! :)
Reviewer: Hyla (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 17
Storys very good liking it alot keep up the good work cant wait for more
Author's Response: thank you! i appreciate that - and i hope you enjoy the rest, as well. :)
xoxo
rochelle
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Epilogue
Ah, I'm truly sorry to see this end! You just have a way to make these characters so interesting that even Edward getting ready for University and Bella making stew makes me want to read more! Well, I'll look forward to the outtakes and any other writing you are going to be putting out there!
Author's Response: aw, that's so sweet!! thank you; i tried to keep it engaging, so i'm truly glad you thought it was.
xoxo
Reviewer: ronaldannk (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 04:11 AM · On: Epilogue
Loved it. Thanks for sharing this story.
Author's Response: you're very welcome!!
xoxo
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 01:24 AM · On: Epilogue
Aw, a very fitting ending! It's a certain sort of symmetry, finishing with Bella suspecting she was pregnant (something I suspected as soon as she mentioned she was always tired); it's the end of one phase of their lives and the beginning of another. And it was nice and Em and Rose finally made it out of Ireland.
Thank you for writing this wonderful story, and I can't wait for the outtakes!
Author's Response: yeah, the epi gave me a chance to sort of tie up a few loose ends and set them up for their futures... i'm glad you like the way it all ended up. :)
also,i appreciate that you always took the time to review. thank you!! <3
xo
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Epilogue
I am so sad this story is over. Looking forward to EPOV.
Great job with this
Author's Response: i know, i was sentimental at the end, too. :/ thank you for always commenting and sharing, seriously - i love that. :)
xo
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Epilogue
*sigh* A lovely story that's kept me entertained until the very end.
Author's Response: glad to hear it, my dear... <3
Reviewer: withherownwings (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Epilogue
Thank you, thank you. THANK YOU for giving us such a beautiful story. I look forward to reading the outtakes!
-Sara
Author's Response: thank you for giving it a chance, and for letting me know what you thought! i'm so glad you liked it... *blush*
Reviewer: mari alice (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Epilogue
just wanted to let you know I loved this story and will be said to see that it is over but look forward to the outtakes.
Author's Response: i was definitely a little emo writing the last chapter and epilogue... but, the EPOV chapters are something to look forward to. thanks for your love....
Reviewer: TigerGirl (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 03:30 PM · On: Epilogue
Such an amazing story!!
Author's Response: thank you :)
Reviewer: kempe (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Epilogue
Love. Thank you so much for this story.
Author's Response: love to you too, bb. :) and, thank you for giving it a chance...
xoxo
Reviewer: Alyndriel (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 02:49 PM · On: Epilogue
::happy sigh:: Thank you so much. I really loved everything about this story. It felt...hmm. Can a story feel comfortable and homey? I'm going with it. Anyway, it was just a beautifully textured story. I happened across it one night when there were quite a few chapters done, favorited it, and have read every update since as soon as they hit my inbox. I loved it. Thank you for writing.
Author's Response: i really, really appreciate that. this story was a labor of love for me, and i'm pretty attached to it. still, it's one of hopefully many; i love to write. i'm just glad you enjoyed what i wrote! :)
Reviewer: demmy (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Epilogue
I loved every minute of this story and the gorgeous world you created! I will look for the EPOVs and any new stories, and will read this again and again.
Author's Response: thank you! i'm so happy you liked it, and liked the way it ended. endings can be tricky. :) most of my writing is posted on fanfiction.net (i'm rochelle allison over there, too), but from time to time i will post things here too.
Reviewer: Puddinpop72 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 26
Thank you for writing this beautiful story!!! I so loved it !!... and I just bought my tickets to Ireland today!! Look forward to reading more from you in the future!!
Author's Response: oh my goodness; you're so welcome! i'm glad you've enjoyed, and i've always so appreciated your comments.
Reviewer: Enya (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 26
=] Awe it's so cute.
Reviewer: Enya (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 26
=] Awe it's so cute.
Author's Response: thanks! :)
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 26
Ohhh....it's over. At least we still have the epilogue!
Author's Response: yes! :) the epilogue is with my twilighted beta as we speak...
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 25
I'm glad everything's gone without a catch so far.
Author's Response: yeah, so far so good at that point. and it's about time. life has been tumultuous, to say the least.
Reviewer: kit9216 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 26
So I've spent most of the day reading your wonderful story. What a universe...I'm so moved by your AU take on these two. The writing, pacing, and description were wonderful. I've read hundreds of authors in this fandom, and I feel you're one of the best. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: i am so glad that you liked Volition! thank you for not only giving it a try, but for letting me know what you thought. i appreciate that. such kind words!
xoxoxxo
rochelle
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 26
And we can breathe a sigh of relief for our favourite couple. They finally can life in relative peace. And why do I get the feeling that they're going to end up in Forks, WA?
Can't wait to read the epilogue and EPOV chapters! Although I am sad that Volition is coming to an end.
Author's Response: thank you, my dear, for all of your thought provokingly wonderful reviews! :) i was a bit sad as i wrapped up the writing of volition too. *sigh*
Reviewer: sunshynecullen (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 26
Oh, is that the end then? Will there be an epilogue?
Author's Response: yes, an epi and 3 chapters told from EPOV. one is already written and will be posted right after the epi, the other 2 i have yet to write, even for ff.net.
Reviewer: withherownwings (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 26
This story was so...BRILLIANT. I can't think of another way to describe it. You are truly gifted.
-Sara
Author's Response: thank you, very much. *hugs*
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