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Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 03:57 PM · On: The Welcome
love it
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 03:49 PM · On: The Welcome
this story has intoxicated me....I find i cannot wait to read it and you've barely begun! lol
Reviewer: BellsNWhistles (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 03:27 PM · On: The Welcome
Gah! That was short!
I want to read this ALL IN ONE FELL SWOOP! Its a perfect day for a novel and while I have my Sookie Stackhouse stuff sitting right next to me, this is my preference.
I mean, what happened to Bella that she is estranged (seemingly from the beginning) to Edward? Why is he so callous to her? Why did he "make" her come with him to that house? I wish we could hear from Edward's POV...nowhere else would I get that than in fanfiction. I'm spoiled!
How often will you update? Oh I guess I should try reading the reviews...
Reviewer: btomasko (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 03:24 PM · On: The Welcome
still loving how you're working this. keep it up and i will keep reading!
Reviewer: eridoodle (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 03:19 PM · On: The Welcome
Great chapter! Why did Bella and Edward get married in the first place, if they don't love each other?
I'm loving the quick updates!
Reviewer: puzzle fan (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 12:38 PM · On: The Train
Great writing!
Reviewer: Adele66 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 11:18 AM · On: The Train
I love this story so far! Please Update soon...
Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 06:53 AM · On: The Train
WTF is up with Edward? He needs an enema? Or just plain prozac?
And curiosity speaks louder: What time is this passing by? 1891? 1999?2005?
Reviewer: kmad67 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 06:11 AM · On: The Train
Absolutely awesome. The writing is taut, the storytelling just pulls me in. I'm impatient for your next update.
Reviewer: GigglesxGumdrops (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 10:53 PM · On: The Train
It really seems like this is a period piece, is it? Still really good, and I like how your taking time to develop the characters instead of just jumping straight in and revealing half the plot in a chapter (no matter how much we want you too).
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 09:42 PM · On: The Train
Did she cheat with Jacob? If so, she deserves what she gets
Reviewer: eridoodle (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 09:29 PM · On: The Office
Wow, this is so well-written, it's really good! But, I'm really confused right now. If Bella hates Edward so much, and vice versa, how did they end up married? I hope it will be explained soon! You've got a great start going!
Reviewer: Twilightedaddict (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 09:13 PM · On: The Train
Hmmm...so she had an affair with Jake and she absolutely hates Edward. Does he hate her as well? Will we find out his feelings? I really like the mystery you've painted here. It's different to read a story where Bella isn't in love with Edward.
Look forward to seeing where you take this.
Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:55 PM · On: The Train
Ooooh!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:48 PM · On: The Train
I'm going to make a guess that Bella had an affair with Jake shortly after getting married to Edward?
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:14 PM · On: The Train
wow - these two really hate one another...can't wait to see where u take this!
Reviewer: snarkytalk (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:11 PM · On: The Train
This story fascinates me! I can't wait to read more...a couple of questions...is this set in a different time period? And will we ever see Edward's point of view?
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:01 PM · On: The Train
i read a few people reviews and i also wondering what time period this story is set in ,i suppose all will be revealed as to why they are married and why they despise each other
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 07:45 PM · On: The Train
This story is definitly interesting. I'm curious as to if were in the current time period. Traveling cross country by train and some of the other story details makes me think were more in Edward's time period. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 07:16 PM · On: The Train
Okay so now I have to wonder if he just woke her up because she was dreaming of Jake. It almost seems as if he doesn't want her to have a moment of happiness. I am eager to find out how she ended up with him and why.
Why is there no one left for her? Is there a Charlie in this story? Is there an Alice?
Reviewer: butifuldevine (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 06:48 PM · On: The Train
Damn Edward's Mean in this one! I love it. It's so....un-Edward-like lol. Please PMS I cant wait for the next part.
Reviewer: blkeyes_redlips (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 06:43 PM · On: The Train
I so want to know what's stuck up his ass. Gah. And to know what the hell happened to everyone in Bella's life. Gah, again. <3 can't wait.
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 06:29 PM · On: The Train
Edward's an asshole. That is all. I hope Bella destroys him.
Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 06:27 PM · On: The Train
Could you tell us what time era they are in? The train for 2 days sounds like a lot, unless of course this is not present day.
Reviewer: lifesaver918 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 06:22 PM · On: The Train
It's killing me that you're giving us all these puzzle pieces but I can't make out the main picture yet!!! Why does Edward hate her? Why did she marry him? Why is Jake no longer a part of her life? Great update, please post another one soon!!
Heather
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