well, damn! these two are cmpletely screwed up! any chance you will continue this story? i would like to know what terrible thing bella did that he can't forgive her for. and, why the hell wouldn't she be scared of him? he's emotionally abusive and it has started to bevome physically abusive as well. how many timed has he grabbed her so hard she was sure he was trying to hurt her? and the tomato soup thing? he threw it at the wall that time, but how long before he is pressing her hand to the hot stive instead?

Goddammit! Just when I have decided I'm never starting another Fanfic, ESPECIALLY one that isn't compete, that bitch MyCleverAlias make an impassioned recomendation on Twitter about this "gorgeously conceived and written" thing she's reading and I have such respect for her that I click over here and fifteen frigging chapters later I am just about to rush out the door after Bella and, and, and... Shit.

So listen, chrometurtle, I have read most of all the major Twilight FF's and a lot of books and yada, yada, yada. This story is easily better than 90% of the fiction on the NYTBSL. This makes the Hunger Games (and I love HG) look like a casual stroll in the park.

Here's the deal: You must stop doing whatever it is that you do other than writing. You must write professionally. You must share your talent, your craft, your imagination, your fucking superb mastery of words with the world.

 We will have it no other way. Amen. That's it. Just.Do.It.

Please Please Please finish this story.I need to know What happens!!!

wow , i cant wait for the next chapter please let me know when it is. abk

Alright..the important question:

Where are her panties now?

 

Sticking with it, though not understanding either of their behavior. He is cruel and abusive, without any seemingly good reason for it, and she is meek and victimized, but also at times self-centered and non-sensical, and the brief history of their relationship (that he became disinterested and she became frustrated) doesn't seem nearly enough to explain/justify all this. Curious to get to the bottom of the mystery.

Still trying to figure out what Bella had done....but the ache you created is just beyond pale.  Hope you don't drop this story!

Do you have any intentions of finishing this?  I am so caught up in the story and have quit checking every day for updates, but I still really want to complete this...please give it a go!!

I love this story and I miss it! Will you be finishing it?

I've been following your story from day one and I love it, just so you know you are not sending this out into a void...I am here anxiously awaiting chapters but alas they never come! I am guessing you got discouraged because ppl choose to read petunia poopy about Edward being a serial killer or Bella a rogue CIA agent haha but you are really very talented. I am studying to get a degree in literature and I must say you Missy (I am assuming you are a Missy but if not my sincerest apologies...I am sure you are very manly...this does not read like a girl at all...kinda) are AWESOME! So write more please because I just got dumped and my life is really quite depressing.

That said please let there be some hope of reconciliation...this is rivaling my love life in terms of hopelessness

OMG! What an awesome story! Each chapter rivets me to my seat and wanting to read the next! Please, please update soon! I need more!!!! So much different than the others...... great story!!!  Thankyou! I bet the reunion sex will be HOT!!!

PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE! I'M DYING HERE!!!

I swear to you, i check this damn thing everyday to see if you've updated!!!

 You haven't disappointed me so far...why start now? :)

 

 

 

UPDATE!