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Reviewer: Stormsongwitch (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 02:57 AM · On: Crossroads

I really, really like this story. Hope you get around to finihing it someday, or writing something else.

Reviewer: DeltaFC101 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Crossroads

please write more!!!!

Reviewer: Alizabeth Roc (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Crossroads

I am really enjoying this story and the whole twist is a great attention getter but your writing is definitely living up to it. I loved "mission neurotic". I loved Rose calling Bella a creepy stalker.

totally not plot-centric, but I always wonder how much Alice influences the future. Would Bella have even attempted that visit without the coat and ID? Alice butterfly effect..

I'm glad I found your story via review4review, please check mine out and review when you can. Thanks. I'm on live journal too as alizabethroc.

http://www.twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=9164 A Place Under Heaven

Reviewer: Elaine (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Crossroads

You've got me hook line and sinker more pleeeeeeasssse.

Reviewer: DeltaFC101 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Crossroads

Please write more.

Reviewer: VampireWolfQueen (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Crossroads

Awwww man that was so good i cant wait to read the rest of it. I looking forward to it. If i had to rate it would rate it 100 out of 10.

Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Crossroads

This is really good.

Reviewer: just1morechapter (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Crossroads

I really like your story! The switch is great and I love that you have kept them true to character. Bella is fierce! I am curious how her vamp confidence is going to play with his Edward arrogance! I'm not sure I see her being able to control the situation between the two of them like Edward does in Twilight. It will be interesting to see how/if she keeps him in line (in the romance dept.), or if he will still be the one putting the on the brakes.

Great fic! Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Regan Sinclair (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Crossroads

omg! keep writing! it's so good! i love it that bella is so fiesty and not so stupid! i love edward as a human:)

Reviewer: jct2004 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Green Eyes

I like vamp Bella--looking forward to seeing how she fares in Bio class. I like the switch-up concept to your story!

Reviewer: ShOrTy0890 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Crossroads

i like this story...its like edward still has his vampy mindreading n driving only he's humanized...i really hope ur goin to write another chapter soon..i really look forward to it =]

Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Crossroads

sorry i didn't comment from the get go i was just sooo intralled with the story i didn't wonna stop! but the whole thing has been AWESOME so far! i've loved every word just amazeing and soooooo well written keep up the amazeing work im dying 4 the next update!!! please hurry!!!!

Reviewer: Alizabeth Roc (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Green Eyes

I love the twist! This doesn't feel like a first try for you. Great physical descriptions and really nice flow with the language. Bella's accent feels very authentic.

I admit the prologue left me a little confused, but it quickly cleared up. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work. Found you on review4review. If you want to swap reviews my first try at fanfic is A Place Under Heaven http://www.twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=9164

Reviewer: huntergirl89 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Crossroads

Update sooner that's my advice lol

Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Crossroads

I like it so far, keep it up. :)

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Crossroads

This is such a clever idea. I love things that are clever and since it is also well written, I'm enjoying it very much. I really like how you've kept Edward and Bella pretty much in character besides their switched vampire/human status and didn't just rewrite the story with Bella being Edward and vise versa. They are still them only in reversed sitations.

One question though. Edward obviously has his cannon powers of mind reading, even if they are diluted because he's still human, but does Bella have powers? I thought she did earlier in the story, but now I'm not sure. Can you clear it up for me?

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Crossroads

I am so happy that Bella stood up to, and threatneded that bitch, Rosalie....

"Shut the fuck up, you little bitch!"........All she did was stare at herself in the mirror, bitch and have sex with Emmett."........LOL! So True!

Author's Response:
:) :) :) haha, I know right. Poor Rose, I keep being mean to her, but she was so horrible to Bella in Twilight, and New Moon AND Eclipse, rawr. I'll have her redeem herself a bit later, but I'll still rag on her.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Crossroads

I REALLY DO LOVE THIS

Reviewer: Joey Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Crossroads

yay a new chapter I'v been waiting so long.

Love the story please update soon

Reviewer: Diana_in_Houston (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Crossroads

I adore Edward's little "blackmail" stratagem.

Of course Bella has to agree to the date, she was forced into it. (yeah, bella, tell yourself that. and you really had to sneak into Edward's hospital room in the middle of the night.)

Reviewer: Diana_in_Houston (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Crossroads

I adore Edward's little "blackmail" stratagem.

Of course Bella has to agree to the date, she was forced into it. (yeah, bella, tell yourself that. and you really had to sneak into Edward's hospital room in the middle of the night.)

Reviewer: Diana_in_Houston (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 10:49 PM · On: The Singer

"When I read Twilight I thought Edward was being totally masochistic when he stayed in Biology for a whole hour that first meeting. I mean, jeez, a more "normal" um, vampire would have bolted out of there, don't you think?"

I completely agree! Edward always did have a masochistic streak, though. Bella's reaction makes more sense.

Love your story so far ... back to reading.

Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Saved

I'm skeptical about continuing reading this... not that it hasn't been interesting so far, but your taste in music is atrocious, and I'm not sure I can trust someone who likes Leann Rymes (Rhymes? whatever.) I'm going to keep going for now. But you're on notice.

Author's Response:
Well elislyn, to each his own right? Personally I wouldn't stop liking a person much less, stop reading a story simply because I didn't share their taste in music. I would probably find your taste in music atrocious, that's why there's so very many genres to pick from. I like my readers to be open minded.

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Crossroads

Great story I love the outline for it can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Crossroads

great chapter!

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