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Reviewer: peygan (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2014 02:41 AM · On: Epilogue

This was an awesome stry..

Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hiya, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I love your writing. I actually read Blood is Thicker first and liked it so much that I thought I'd check out anything else you have written. This was great and I'm now going to start on Guarding Edward so you may be hearing from me again :D



Author's Response:

Thank you, lil_jess!  Makes my day to hear that!

GE is a very LONG story, hope you enjoy it too!

Kathie

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 12:41 AM · On: Epilogue

It really was worth the wait, for Bella and Edward. Their lives have turned out exactly as they wished. His family is happy, her family is happy and they are too, forever.



Author's Response:

SO glad you like where they ended up...I like EVERYONE to be HAPPY...yes, I am a FLUFFY writer!

Thanks for your support, Kathy!

Kathie

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 6

Ingenious, that Alice! Carlisle too, figuring ways for Bella and Edward to be skin to skin as much as possible. Hope that holds them until he's of age. His gift is sure going to come in handy when they are truly mated, keeping the family at a distance, sort of!



Author's Response:

Skin on Skin can  be FUN...lol

<3

Kathie

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 5

I can hardly wait to see what kind of solution Carlisle has come up with, to ease their suffering and let them be together. It's so impressive how well Edward takes to all this supernatural stuff.



Author's Response:

Edward really was calm...much better than when he RUNS AWAY!

Thanks, again!

Kathie

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 4

Boy! Talk about not being able to keep their hands off each other! This Bella and Edward are having such an easy time  of it, compared to SM's couple! I kind of like it for a change.



Author's Response:

LOL...sometimes a bit of ANGST can be fun to read...but sometimes...well, we just need EASY!

Kathie

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 3

I love the way Edward accepts the information Bella conveys, about her, her family and all things vampiric.  Why wouldn't he, if they are soulmates, be okay with what she is? Simplistic, I know, but I'm a simple old woman, after all !



Author's Response:

Sometimes EASY is good!

And neither one of US is old!!!

Kathie

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 2

What a cool way to find the love of your life! The descriptions of the smells make them both sound delicious. Fate strikes again. Edward is looking for romance with a brainy girl, Bella is looking for her match, like her 'siblings' have , sounds perfect to me!



Author's Response:

I think they should start a MATCH MAKING company!

LOL

YOU write it, okay?

Kathie

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Sounds like imprinter and imprintee have met! I couldn't find anywhere listed in my favorites or the reviews, that I had already read this story. It sounded so familiar, and I've read a lot of your stuff, but could not remember. So, just in case I'll read it , maybe for the second tim e. No hardship, I love your stories!



Author's Response:

Kathy, you need to whup me with a wet noodle!  How did these reviews slip by me????  So sorry!

You are so sweet...I think you actually read this at ffn, maybe? Or TWCS?

BUT, thank you for reading it again!

Kathie

Reviewer: VirtuousBee (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 01:26 AM · On: Epilogue

I really enjoyed your story.



Author's Response:

Thank you, VB, I appreciate you taking the time to say that!

Kathie

Reviewer: Olive Oil (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2011 06:48 AM · On: Epilogue

Thank you. The angst free, human edward gets to have his cake & eat it too plot was very refreshing!

 

I'm off to read Guarding Edwarding now! xo



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading IMMERSION, Olive Oil!

Glad you enjoyed it...hope you enjoy GUARDING EDWARD...looking forward to hearing what you think about it.

Kathie

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 04:11 PM · On: Epilogue

Wow this was a very interesting story, lol. I loved how connected they were and how much they loved each other. I also loved how edward told his parents and that they were fine with it, even though most parents in real life wouldn't be i would think, lol
Once again your an amazing author and i look forward to reading more from you. : )
until next time

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, sweetie...I appreciate it!

And the stars were lovely!

Kathie

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 6

Hi again, lol this story is so cute, lol. I really like and i'll be reading the epilogue tomorrow bc now i have to go to bed. : )

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, mbellaandedwardm!

So glad that you are enjoying it!

Sleep well!

Kathie

Reviewer: fourshotchild (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 5

Well, I just started reading this story and it's pretty good. It's faster than most of the fanfiction out there which I kind of appreciate. The grammar and structure are wonderful too! It's different. I've never read a Bella and Edward swap story before. I know they're out there, but I've never taken the time to read them. I think you did an amazing job. The fact that you put your own spin on the mating situation is great! Most of these stories fall along the original lines. I hate that! I mean the whole point of fanfiction is to write something different! Any who, thanks for the story so far! I'll continue onward! *wink* And, good luck for any future stories!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I enjoyed your words!  Yes, I tried to swap things around...I have three daughters so I'm all about the GIRL POWER...lol

I have another story, GUARDING EDWARD, that also swaps things around...

Glad you approve of the spelling and grammar...I really work for that!

Hope you enjoy the rest of IMMERSION!

Kathie

Reviewer: 4padfoot (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 10:49 AM · On: Epilogue

Congratulations on the Shimmer Award, it is very well deserved. 
Yes, Edward helped Jasper out.  I always wondered why no one ever figured out that if Jasper fills everyones emotions, then he had to also feel all of Edward's feelings for Bella even her being his singer.  Which had to just suck since he thought he was always the weakest, but in my opinion that made him even stronger.  Ah the power of the storms. 

Excellent story. Hope to read more in the future.

Robin



Author's Response:

Thank you, Robin...I appreciate that!

I'm actually working on the next chapter of DRAGON STONES right now...so lots more writing to come...

I've loved your reviews...made me smile a LOT this morning!

Thank you!

Kathie

Reviewer: 4padfoot (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 6

Yes, I always wondered why they never had an electric blanket in the original stories, I mean they were rich and super smart, but something so simple was over looked and never used.  LOL.  Eight more months...this story could have gone on for a while.

Thanks
Robin



Author's Response:

I know!  An electric blanket!  But that would have allowed SAGA Edward to be able to be closer to Bella...and HE was the one that didn't think he was ready for that...

My Bella IS ready...LOL...

Got to say, Robin..I'm loving your reviews!  Thank you!

Kathie

Reviewer: 4padfoot (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 5

Perfect, I love Emmett's character, he is so under appreciated most times, and very few author's use him except as a back up character for comic relief but you worked him in with the rest of the family.  And I'll just say I can breathe now with the rest of the chapter.

Robin



Author's Response:

Emmett...sigh...he can be a handful...

So NOW you can breathe?  Told you...HEA all the way...lol

Thanks for reading, Robin!

Kathie

Reviewer: 4padfoot (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 4

Best. Sound. Ever.  I'll just leave it there.   Nah just kidding.  I do enjoy the twists that you are giving, Bella as the mind reader, hoping that Edward becomes the shield, that just seems to fit their personalities better.  And then the extras benefits they get for being mated.  Alice does know how to interupt.  Sending in Emmett, that's just not fair.

Hope you keep up writing.

Robin



Author's Response:

Alice is really GOOD at interupting...LOL...

Glad you like Bella as the mind reader...had to shake things up...

Thanks, again, for all of your lovely reviews and stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: 4padfoot (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 3

Yes, consider where you are, but it was Biology class.  Immerse yourself of your own free will.  I'd immerse myself in that scent or at least try to. Thank you again for using a different lab than normal, nice change.   Love at first sniff...excellent twist in the story. 

Robin



Author's Response:

Told you...LOTS of sniffing...lol...and no puppies... ;D

Kathie

Reviewer: 4padfoot (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 2

OH my that is a twist Bella's the mind reader.  Okay lots of places this could go....I'm trying to resist jumping to the last chapter.  Agh, Mike's thoughts never a place ANYone wanted to be I believe.  Oh I bet Edward would visit her in the psycho ward...

As usual excellent chapter. Next?  HE HE

Robin



Author's Response:

Not to fear, Robin...this is ALL about the HEA...and the fun getting there!

Yes, Mike's mind...not a fun place to be...

Thanks for reading and those stellar stars!

Kathie

Reviewer: 4padfoot (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

Okay thought I would try this story never read a Vampire Bella/Human Edward story.  Part that made me laugh out loud was where Edward was sniffing the air and hochie woman perfume.  A geekward story?  More sniffing.  I'm still laughing.  Perfect cliffy there.  Next chapter next chapter.  I got lucky here the story was finished before I started.  SOoooo on to the next chapter.

Love your writing

Robin



Author's Response:

Hi Robin!  LOTS of sniffing in this story...LOTS...lol

Hope you enjoy it....it was a lesson in limes, lemons and and actually writing THE END...

There will be no angst, just loving and being loved...yeah, so it's not one of THOSE stories...LOL...sometimes one just needs some fluff... ;D

Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy the rest...

Kathie

Reviewer: FRK921 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 3

GAH!
LOVE it



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Nice to hear...

Kathie

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Epilogue

I can't even tell you how much I love you right now.  So funny.  Just great!



Author's Response:

Why thank you!  It's funny, I got a lot of reviews that said:  I LOVE THE LIST...

Glad you enjoyed IMMERSION...your story helped my ExB get through that last several months... ;D

Thanks for letting me use it...

Kathie

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Epilogue

Beautiful ring.  I enjoyed this story, you were right.  No angst and a they got what they wanted.  I love that vampire imprint idea, it's very strong.  I almost felt their need. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, cbell...glad you enjoyed it!

Kathie

Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 02:50 AM · On: Epilogue

This is a wonderful story. I love the idea of vampires finding the one that is their mate by smell. :-) I love the idea of the pairs being able to talk to eachother silently after being mated. Again this is a wonderful story.



Author's Response:

Thank you 78slayer, for both the review and those stellar stars!

Ah, had to tweak canon just a little bit!

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

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