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Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Secret. Stolen. Safe.
I never thought of Embry and Bella as mates...so this could be interesting....guess I'm reading on....Good story and idea...
Author's Response: Hello!
Thank you for taking a chance with this story! I'm glad you thought it was a good enough idea to follow through with, here.
Thanks for reading!
LJ
Reviewer: PerfectMeadow (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Closure.
oh geez. I'm frickin' crying again. It was a good story LJ. I liked Bella coming back to life and Embry being so understanding...but I think I'm just a too die hard Edward girl. Although I will admit it was easier for me to read about Bella with Embry as opposed to Jacob.
very good overall. : )
Author's Response: Greetings!
Sorry I made you cry. :( I seem to be doing that a lot, huh? Funny thing is, I prefer to make people laugh. I'm just not apparently very good at it!
Thank you again for taking a chance and reading something so far from your usual comfort zone! You're very Brave! (Speaking of which, BRAVE, by SunKing, is here at Twilighted, if you haven't read it already. It's All Human Edward and Bella and only five chapters. I just LOVE it. It's amazing. http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=7252)
Thanks again!
~LJ
Reviewer: PerfectMeadow (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Hope. Kiss. Triumph.
I'm kinda glad Bella had her moment, I thought she was brave in Eclipse...stupid but brave.
good chapter.
Author's Response: Hello!
I heartily concur. I'm glad she had her moment, too, but yeah, it wasn't perhaps the wisest course. If you do decide to be bold and daring and read Bella's Moments, then you can find out what she was thinking. :) All of them aren't up here @ Twilighted yet, though. I'm working on it.
Thank you for reviewing! :)
~LJ
Reviewer: PerfectMeadow (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Meeting. Time. Wishing.
Awww, they're actually kind of cute. It's sort of canon Bella, with the way she came around when Jake took care of her after Edward but then she's different probably because Embry isn't as controlling as Jake was, as demanding as Jake became. I guess the alpha gene was hard to put down.
Reviewer: PerfectMeadow (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Changing. Ruining. Howling.
Ok, so I'm not as put off as I thought I might be. I like the way Embry's handling everything.
Poor Jake. God I never thought I'd say that.
Author's Response: Good morning, PerfectMeadow!
I have to say, your review made me smile. I got a Team Edwardian to say "Poor Jake." *Does a quiet little Snoopy Dance.*
Embry's a cool guy. I think he was in canon, too, but here I made him fall in love so he's better. :D
Thank you so much for reading!
~LJ
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Closure.
Damn you know how to end a story with a bang!!!! That was just freaking awesome!! Beyond words!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, EverlightGirl14!
I'm so pleased you enjoyed my story! :)
Thanks for the wonderful rating and all the reviews! I appreciated them all!
~LJ
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Closure.
Amazing. Made me want to kick Edward again of course for being a self-involved jackass. Wonderful story, I really really liked this Embry. A guy who actually just made her happiness his priority.
Author's Response: Greetings, Siamecho!
I'm so glad you liked my Embry. :) So did I. lol I didn't know how much I'd like him 'til I got to know him. lol
Edward I think just over-thought everything. Stephenie Meyer said that is his "tragic flaw." He forgot that Bella was able to think on her own. Embry doesn't do that. Or at least...not for long. ;)
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I appreciate hearing from you.
~LJ
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Hope. Kiss. Triumph.
Embry is fucking stupid!!!!! And Bella is being so bold!!! Oh I love it!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hello!
*grin* Now why would you say Embry was stupid? Protective, yeah. A little slow... Well...he's being careful. ;-)
Bella is doing her best. If you take the chance to read Becoming Whole, which just had chapter two go up last night, then you'll have a clearer idea of what was in her head. And maybe what was in his! :)
Thank you so much for reading and for your smile-inducing reviews!
~LJ
Reviewer: DreaC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Closure.
This was a perfect ending! You did it beautifully. Great Job!
Author's Response: Hello, DreaC~
Thank you! I rather liked the ending myself. *smile* It seemed the best way to close the story.
Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and rating! I do appreciate your having taken the time to do so. :)
~LJ
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Meeting. Time. Wishing.
Damn you know how to hook a writer!!
Author's Response: Greetings, EverlightGirl14~
I tried! *grin*
Thanks for reading and the lovely rating! I appreciate them both!
~LJ
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Changing. Ruining. Howling.
Well damn dude. This officially rocks!!!!!!
Author's Response: Good evening!
*laughing* Did you just call me a dude? *laughing*
I'm really glad you think this is worthy of the rating and the !!! :) ! The howling part is the idea that started me on this story in the first place. :)
Thank you for your enthusiastic review!
~LJ
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Closure.
I love this chapter. I like to think that Bella got a little of her own back and Embry is amazing.
Author's Response: Hello again, emma austin!
I do think Bella is getting herself together, yeah. And Embry is wonderful. :) I think he's just perfect for her.
*grin* I might be a little biased...
Thanks for reading!
~LJ
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Secret. Stolen. Safe.
Damn that's good.
Author's Response: Good evening, EverlightGirl14!
Wow, thank you. :) Glad you think so!
Thanks for reading, reviewing and leaving me such a shiny rating!
~LJ
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Meeting. Time. Wishing.
They are soo cute! I am loving this story.
Author's Response: Good evening, emma austin!
I'm pleased you think they're cute! :) I enjoyed writing it a great deal.
Thanks for reading and taking the time to drop me a line. :)
~LJ
Reviewer: Ned Flow (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Changing. Ruining. Howling.
omg I friken love this! its sooo good! :)
Author's Response: Hello, Ned Flow!
I'm so glad you've enjoyed this story! :) I really enjoyed getting to know "my" Embry while I wrote it and the other parts of this series.
Thank you for reading and reviewing and the lovely rating! :)
~LJ
Reviewer: NicNic (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Secret. Stolen. Safe.
Aww I loved this! I'm a Bella/Jake'r at heart, but I could accept Bella/Embry in this because you wrote it well. Plus, I love me some wolf pack, so when it comes to fan fic, I think I could handle Bella with any of em lol
I too wish this was longer but I guess if there's a series, I won't complain too much. As long as Bella/Embry are featured prominently :p
Nicole
Author's Response: Good evening, NicNic!
I'm so glad you enjoyed this! I was initially a little leery of presenting a Bella/Embry story...
I have submitted the first part of Bella's POV, Becoming Whole, so it should be up eventually. :) It'll totally be featuring Embry. lol And then there's The Imperative, which is all about the two of them, too. I hope you're not disappointed!
Thanks so much for reading and sharing your thoughts! I really appreciate it!
~LJ
Reviewer: EmberRayne (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Closure.
what?????
only five chapters, really??
argh!!!
i LIKED this one! a LOT!!
Author's Response: Hello, EmberRayne!
Yep, only five chapters... Isn't it better to stop when people still want to keep reading? lol
I'm so pleased you liked it and hope you'll come by when the other parts of the series are posted!
Thank you so much for reading and your enthusiastic reviewing!
~LJ
Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Hope. Kiss. Triumph.
SO SO good! ahh! im in love with this offically. thank you for liking my screenname! my real name is Lysa though.
Author's Response: Hello, Lysa! :)
That's a lovely name and a terrific spelling of it. :)
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. :) I appreciate your reading, reviews and the stellar rating!
~LJ
Reviewer: eegottaloveumalljj (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Closure.
Great finish to the fic. I'll be reading the rest of the series!
Author's Response: Hello, eegottaloveumalljj!
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the ending. The series should be continued relatively soonly. Is that even a word? *grin*
Thanks for reading and for your comments!
~LJ
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Closure.
I do feel bad for Edward, but I'm so glad she chose Embry. He is the one she needs. He is the one that can and will always be and do everything she needs from him. Edward could never get past those over-protective compulsions of his. Anyway, how could someone possibly give up the man that is Embry Call?
You already know how much I love this and how much I love your Embry, but I'll say it again! I have absolutely loved this story! Thank you for opening my eyes to this remarkable character!
Author's Response: Good morning, Val! :)
I really do feel that Embry and the imprint are exactly what Bella needs, yes. Because Embry is protective, but doesn't think he knows it all, which is a big thing for Bella. (Okay, I interpret it as being a big thing for Bella. lol)
Thank you SO MUCH for your enthusiasm for this story and for my Embry. :) You are inspirational!
~LJ
Reviewer: EllaB (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Closure.
Wow...I didn't know whether to feel happy or sad for Bella in the end. Embry is wonderful, but it's clear her heart will always be conflicted. Very good story...wish it were longer!
Author's Response: Good morning, EllaB!
Feel happy. *smile* I do, anyway. I do believe she has some conflict, but in the Saga, she says that once she's made a decision, she's fine with it. It's the process of making that decision that was so hard for her! I hope that, if you take the opportunity to read her side of the story, you'll have a better sense of her inner peace with everything. :) And, too, I am sure that time will go a long way toward lessening any residual conflict for her.
Thank you so much for reading and your generous reviews and ratings! :) I have really appreciated them all!
~LJ
Reviewer: Jay Middle (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Closure.
That had to be hard to write. I'm glad you ended it the way you did. I didn't want her going back to Edward. I really like the fic and will check the others you mentioned at the end.
Thanks,
Brandon
Author's Response: Good morning, Brandon! :)
It was a touchy chapter to write, yes. I wanted to make sure to be true to everyone, be true to my story, and be fair. (I didn't want her going back to Edward, either, obviously.)
Thank you for reading and for your kind comments. :)
~LJ
Reviewer: wuogkat (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Closure.
This is a hard chapter. I know, I'm Team Edward and I wear it on my sleeve.
This story really does stick with me. I absolutely love that you've gone with the unique angle of Bella and Embry together.
Author's Response: Good morning, Kat!
You are SO Team Edward, so I am doubly appreciative that you still read and appreciate this story. *grin*
Thank you so much for your support with all of it! :)
~LJ
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Closure.
great story!
Author's Response: Greetings, JuliannaOphelia!
I'm glad you liked the story! :)
Thank you for reading and dropping me a line. :)
~LJ
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Closure.
i love it.
Author's Response: Greetings, wendeline!
I'm so glad! :)
Thank you for sticking with the story, your reviews and the stellar rating!
~LJ
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