love it

It was beautiful. I love Emmett!!!!

What an interesting story! I wasn't expecting to like it at first, but now I'm enthralled.

Wow! Your story is fantastic. I have read all 21 chapters in one evening finding it impossible to stop reading. I love the way you portray the different characters. I am generally pro Edward but admire the way you portray him as selfish, childish and egotistical. I love your Jake (mmmm!) and the ever more powerful Bella.( Go girl!)

Your storyline is so inventive -please keep writing- thank you

This story is absolutely wonderful! I can't wait for the update!

wow that is a good story, I want to read more.:) 

Hey, so I just reread your fic, secretly hoping that at the end of ch. 21 there would magically be a next button. I'm patiently waiting on real life to slow down for you, so that I can feed my addiction. Your story is so beautiful...I adore your Jacob, he's exactly right in every way...I feel his torment, and his love perfectly. It makes me ache to read about him catching Bella and saying, "I've got you." Or when he kissed her, the moment couldn't have been more perfect. Just wanted to encourage you, and let you know I'm here anxiously waiting to solve some of this fics little mysteries.
PS. If I haven't mentioned this already...you're an amazing and talented story teller...my fav by far.

Author's Response:

Wow!  Thank you so much!  I don't even have words for how happy this review made me.  It  gave me the warm fuzzies and put the biggest, goofy grin on my face. 

I'm totally stoked that you like my Jacob so much.  I worried, initially, that readers wouldn't warm up to him because he's been on such an emotional roller-coaster.  It warms the heart that he has been received well.

Unfortunately, things are still pretty hectic but, if it helps any, I'm happy to say that chapter 22 has some outlining in the works.  I hate that I have had to put this story on hold for so long because it's my baby.  I'm not sure when the next chapter will be up, but I sure hope you'll be around to read it, when it does.

Thanks, again, for making my day brighter.

:-D

ok so i literally said no outloud when i realized this was the last chapter you had posted so far. I really hope you put up another one soon and dont leave me hanging like so many other fics.

Author's Response:

Yeah, it has been a while since I have been able to churn out another chapter for this fic.  Unfortunately, RL has a way of conflicting with the muse at times.  The only thing I can say for certain is that I DO plan on continuing the fic.  I just don't want to give any false hopes as to when the next chapter will be up.  It could be anywhere from a week from now, to two months.  As a wife and mother in the middle of moving mayhem finding writing time, much less the calm it takes to get into the mood, can be scarce.

On an up-note, I'm thrilled that you are enjoying the story so far and hope that you will still be around when I manage to get the update out.

Thanks so much for the review!

:-)

Anddddd.... cue mushy sighing and grinning. Oh yes, you have unleashed romantic me. Bravo. You just made my day. She dumped, rejected Foolward with his own words, practically decided to admit her love to Jake and became BELLA! Feisty, stubborn, proud BELLA. Thank you! Love this. So much. Please update soon.

I listened to Micheal Buble - Home during this chapter, around 3 times, and it's perfect. I don't know why, it just is and I recommend it.

Thanks so much for writing this very satisfying story--I love that you've created a Bella who's beginning to get her feet under after so much insecurity. Please, please keep writing it!!

Author's Response:

You're quite welcome and tahnks for the review!  I promise, as soon as RL stops kicking my butt so much, I'll be posting more chapters.  I am determined to finish this story and not let it hang forever.  :-)

I love your Emmett!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I loved Emmett and always thought he deserved more face time in the TS.  I'm so glad you like how I portrayed him.

:-D

Ahhh! No more chapters yet. Ahh this is sooo good. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Proud of Bella for standing her ground.

Author's Response:

Sorry about the lack of updates.  I hope you'll hang in there because I DO plan on finishing the fic, I just haven't had a lot of time lately.  RL is kicking me hard and my computer went kaplooey!  Now, I have to take over my daughter's just to check stuff and respond to the occasional review.  As for Bella, yeah... It has certainly taken her long enough to realize that she's worth more than she usually gives herself credit for.  Thanks for reviewing.

:-)

AHHH! That was the best chapter so far. So intriguing. Can't wait to read more.