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Reviewer: kiwi vampire (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 01:41 PM · On: Escapades
FanbloodyTastic! Loving this story looking forward to next update!
Reviewer: KatieC (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 08:06 AM · On: Escapades
This story is AWESOME!!!!! I think it's one of the best ones I've actually read. I stayed up all night just to finish, so you must be doing something right! :) Can't wait t see what happens next!!!!
Reviewer: Robin Jeannene (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 12:02 AM · On: Escapades
When do they kiss?
Reviewer: ctfan (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Escapades
What a great chapter! So well written, and detailed. Love the way their relationship is finally getting somewhere. Nice to see your Bella able to take better care of herself. Edward is so loving and protectiive as always.
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Escapades
Lovely progress in their tenuous relationship. I just don't get those bad guys though. How did they know she was at the zoo? If the first 2 were hotel guests can't the hotel provide information to get them detained and/or arrested by the police?
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Escapades
It's interesting and creative. Not something I've read before with all the twists & turns.
Very happy to be through all of the pissing each other off so much.
I look forward to your next chapter.
Reviewer: ifka (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Escapades
Fantastic chapter!
Reviewer: tigger62 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Escapades
bastards..
Edward.. sigh..
Bella- go girlfriend
great chapter... I am enjoying them getting closer, but not losing the slightly rough edge to their relationship.. love the back and forth...Keeps them both on their toes...
If I knew how to make a banner I would.. but I am totally technically stupid. I am lucky I figured out how to save something as a favorite...
Reviewer: tigger62 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Beginnings of a Bond
and the lamb laid down with the lion....
great chapter...
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 02:58 PM · On: Civility
you are so mean....is he her brother?
Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:16 AM · On: Behind Closed Doors
Heads up- version 2.1, which I'm honestly happier with. Changed the text, darkened the forest, added the outstretched hands:
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Author's Response: Ooh, that's cool. I'll alternate between the two. Thank you. :]]]
Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Escapades
Version 1.0 for you:
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Author's Response: Ohmygoodness, that's awesome! Thank you very much! I love how you incorporated the dominos. :]]
Reviewer: tigger62 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Secrets Shared, Memories Awakened
holy shit
honest to god did not see that coming... thought it would be Carlisle
Bella... and Edward..... what history
ok really good story really brilliant
Reviewer: tigger62 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 08:01 PM · On: The Heart of a Fighter
oh nurse Edward....
hmmm I have a cut on my hand.. can you spare him ??/
Bella- she can open up a can of whoop ass when she wants to...
like Ms Independant
Reviewer: tigger62 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Deceived, Betrayed, and Broken
ok totally confused but still loving this
excellent twists I do not expect... but I suppose if I expected them they would not be twists then right ??
excellent
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Escapades
Fantastic chapter, when will Bella find out that Edward was the one that had saved her 3 yrs prior?
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Escapades
oh my goodness. i like this chapter very much.
Reviewer: lilygirl88 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Secrets Shared, Memories Awakened
Omg I so did not see that coming I was expecting Carlisle to be the one who had saved her not Edward.
Reviewer: tigger62 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 06:55 PM · On: Regretted Confessions
wow this is really twisted... in a bizarrely cool way...
I am liking this alot....
good stuff
great writing
love the angst
Reviewer: tigger62 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 06:18 PM · On: The Rescue...Attempt
wow mega mega angst... love the twist..
line line between love and hate.....
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Escapades
I like that they are getting to know each other and getting closer. Dominic's story is what I thougth because Bella couldn't have a child his age.
What's this with Edward leaving? Why would he leave? Bella obviously is a danger magnet and he had to save her about five time already. Besides, she's just starting to be a little normal. If he leaves she'll goback to angry Bella. He has to know that.
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Beginnings of a Bond
I love charlie in this story. He has so much more understanding of his daughter than in the books.
She holds her own with Edward. Esme likes that and so do I.
I'm looking forward to Seattle.
Reviewer: Nights Eternal Dream (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Escapades
*WHINY VOICE* No, please don't make Edward attempt to leave!!! He does that too much!
*NORMAL VOICE* It was a great chapter though. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Escapades
I knew he was her brother!
Glad the two are getting closer!
Reviewer: x-Silly-Caitlin-x (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 04:44 AM · On: Escapades
One thing: if Dominic is his son why did he call Charlie grandpa?
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