oh no- is edward no longer going to be her doctor?

I so want Bella to report the guys who drugged her.  Hope she can grow some confidence and come into her element.  Love this story.  Thanks for the update!

I worried about the cookies... poor bella!  She thought she was avoiding the drugs, but they put them in the cookies!

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I know, doesn't that seem especially evil?  What a way to ruin an innocent cookie! ;)

I loved how you described everything.  It was perfect!!

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Thank you so much!!

ummm...so how about that next group therapy session...? Awkward!

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You will just have to wait to see!

I attended more than my share of those scary parties and am just thankful that I am able to write the words that I was there. It was a wonder I survived my idiocy.

I'm really glad you got Bella out in time. Great story you have brewing!

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Three cheers for surviving adolescent stupidity!!!  Thanks again for your review! :)

Okay, that was a nasty party. Just got to luv a party where u almost get date raped:( Thank God Victoria, at least called, someone to come get Bella before abandoning her. I can't wait to see what Edward thinks about this situation.

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Yes, a totally nasty party.  I've been to worse actually.  I hate to admit to my own stupidity at this age, but we all learn from our mistakes!  I hope you enjoy reading the rest of the story and how all the characters deal with the aftermath of the disaster of a party.

Well, yes - Bella was naive - BUT at 16, you don't know how to handle being in that kind of environment.  And she certainly doesn't have the background to be able to correctly judge her surroundings.

Anyway, great job with this story - can't wait to see where it goes from here!

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Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and leaving a review!  I really appreciate the support and hope that you continue to enjoy the story!

I just read this story and really, really like it. It's well written and true to the real life but not too depressing, but giving hope which is important.

Thank you so much for sharing.

As for the last chapter, I kind of wonder whether Bells did not suspect there was something in the cookie she was given? After all you hear like from little kid not to touch such things at the parties, or perhaps her sheltered life has prevented her from such a knowledge, the fact she didn't have friends her age before to tell her about it.

 

Author's Response:

I so appreciate your review!  Yes, Bella was pretty naive about the cookie.  I explain her thoughts about this in the next chapter. As you can imagine, she can't believe that she was so naive either and beats herself up about it.  Her situation is unique, because she's been exposed to many unsavory things, but not participated herself.  She's both savvy and naive all at once. And most importantly, she's eager to be normal or what she thinks might be normal.  

Thanks again for sharing your thoughts!

Oh no :( Poor Bella being so naive and trusting Demetri & Felix, despite how uncomfortable she felt under their attention. Thank god that Victoria took enough care of Bella to make sure she called someone for her - thankfully it was Edward answering Alice's phone or heavens knows what would have happened.

What will the aftermath be, and is Bella really ok, given that she's just closed her eyes with all those drugs in her system.

Author's Response:

All such great thoughts and comments!  I'm sure that the next chapter will answer all of these questions.  Bella will be forced to deal with the aftermath of her poor decisions.  And of course, she is confused as ever!  Thank you so much for your review!

Quarterback huh.  That's cool. 

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Yes, my Jake's a little different.  I keep telling all the Jacob haters not to worry!  There won't be any love triangles in this story!

Thanks again for the review!

I've fallen in love all over again. This story has really piped my interest, and captured me. The skillfull plot line is just keeping me going. Update Soon.

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Thank you so much for your comments!  I'm so glad that my story is holding your interest!  I will try my hardest to continue to write a story worth reading! 

lol she was naive to go to a party with some of the dropkicks from therapy.. hello?? lol

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Yes, you are so right.  Isn't it always the kids of druggy fuck ups that generally have all the access to drugs?  She is not just naive, but eager to do what is normal.  She'll learn really quick!  Thanks for the review!