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Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 09:20 PM · On: That Kind of Man

Absolutely gorgeous chapter. Heart breaking, romantic, beautiful. 

Is there any hope of one day perhaps gracing us with an EPOV chapter? I think this one in Edward's pov would be stunning. I just loved how he laid his head in her lap.

STUNNING.

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Travelling Ink

jasper seems interesting/

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 3 Welcome to Forks High

the way you wrote jessica i dont dislike her,,,she seems cool but trys to please and doesnt stand up for herself as alice said,,,i like alice,,,definitely a different alice then normal...what is her last name brandon or cullen>?

Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 08:56 PM · On: That Kind of Man

So sad but glad to see him being honorable, but was there not another way to handle this?  He also left being her therapist....

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Meeting Charlie

poor bella...charlie seems like a great guy

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 08:40 PM · On: An Ending and a Beginning

That is the most depressing thing ever...poor bella,,,what a way to live but i realize it happens everyday to kids out there

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 08:14 PM · On: That Kind of Man

Wow! So that cat's out of the bag.

Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 06:06 PM · On: That Kind of Man

well it was inevitable really..... hopefully they will still be single in a few years time..... though surely they would move on a little....

Reviewer: jinlor2 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 05:38 PM · On: That Kind of Man

Poor Edward, I can feel his pain but he did the right thing.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 04:02 PM · On: That Kind of Man

This was a great chapter!

I'm sad that Edward left, but I do understand. He probably feels that he is taking advantage of her and thinks that the only way to protect her innocence is to leave. So, that's what he did. I don't like that he left and I hope he comes back. (But from your summary, I think that he does come back, so I'll trust you.)

Looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: ifka (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 12:07 PM · On: The Inside of a Kaleidoscope

Not to put pressure on - because you really shouldn't publish it before you finish it - but I just think you should know that somebody out here eagerly awaits your next chapter...

Reviewer: ifka (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 12:06 PM · On: The Inside of a Kaleidoscope

Not to put pressure on - because you really shouldn't publish it before you finish it - but I just think you should know that somebody out here eagerly awaits your next chapter...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review, ifka!  It's taking a bit longer to produce these chapters because they are so heavy and dense with info, but I am going as fast as I can.  The next chapter is in the queue and should be posted any day now.  I can't wait to hear what you think!  

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 04:45 PM · On: The Inside of a Kaleidoscope

How are you planning on transitioning into the future?



Author's Response:

Captivating question!  I hope it was rhetorical, because I'm sure you really don't want to know yet.  I hope that you will approve of my methods though and that it meets expectations.  We have one more chapter in the present time - it's a seriously big one. Can't wait to hear you thoughts on it!

Reviewer: ifka (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:04 PM · On: The Inside of a Kaleidoscope

Thank you for another wonderful chapter.

(Don't worry about answering this - just focus on your captivating story)



Author's Response:

I can't help myself - you need to know that you are appreciated too! :)

Reviewer: lewna (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 12:57 PM · On: The Inside of a Kaleidoscope

Can't wait to see what happens next.  Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 11:45 AM · On: The Inside of a Kaleidoscope

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!  This was a good chapter though!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: atbatbatb (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 11:40 AM · On: The Inside of a Kaleidoscope

Nice chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: ms_ambrosia (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 09:00 AM · On: The Inside of a Kaleidoscope

I saw you were at 399, so I had to review to get you to 400. I also owe you anyway because I've been total review fail lately.

I can't wait for the next section of the story, to see how the events that happened in Bella's teen years effect her later, and how her relationship with Edward will evolve. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you bb!  I always appreciate your feedback the most!

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:49 AM · On: The Inside of a Kaleidoscope

Hmmm....it must be torturous for Edward to have been staying away from Bella. He clearly wants to protect her, so finally hearing her that night, scared and terrified by her nightmares....

Esme is such a dear - she clearly feels a responsibility for how Bella was injured and it's great that they were able to take Bella in, so that Charlie wouldn't have to manage all on his own.



Author's Response:

Such great observations about the story!  I couldn't have said it better myself!  Imagine if Bella were injured when Renee was still her primary caregiver - who would have taken care of her then?  She is in such a better place at this point in the story, with friends and a father who truly love her.  And a protector, in Edward, that even she is not entirely aware of.

Thank you for the review and the perceptive thoughts!

Reviewer: ardnaskela (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 12:16 AM · On: The Inside of a Kaleidoscope

Glad that Bella is recovering, Edward works like a security blanket for her,does he not? Thank you!



Author's Response:

Edward is just doing what he thinks is best for Bella.  He is ultimately her protector, putting his own needs and desires above hers.

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 12:03 AM · On: The Inside of a Kaleidoscope

Can't wait for the leap! How sweet is Esme. Alice is just adorable :) And Edward...always the protector.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much HockeyChick!  I always look forward to your reviews!  :)

Reviewer: Sarina_B (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 09:41 PM · On: The Inside of a Kaleidoscope

this is a really good story! it's so sad but i know that there must be some sort of happy ending! may i ask why edward still lives at home?



Author's Response:

That is a good question and I'm surprised you are the first one to ask it.  Edward is just recently back from medical school, just starting his residency in his hometown.  He hasn't had the time, the motivation, or the opportunity to look for his own place yet. He is somewhat transient - which is an important element of the story.  Even though he is older, I want him to seem unsettled, unrooted, as if he doesn't quite have his own life figured out yet.

Thank you for the review and the great question!

Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 09:11 PM · On: The Inside of a Kaleidoscope

Yay!  He shows up again, sigh



Author's Response:

Yes, he will be a huge part of next chapter too!  I can't wait to post it and to hear your response!

Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 05:35 PM · On: The Inside of a Kaleidoscope

I am glad that they Cullens are helping to take care of her.  I am surprised that Charlie didn't throw a fit because she got hurt on a bike.  Can't wait to find out what happens next.



Author's Response:

Hi vampiremom!  Charlie's reaction will be explained a little more in the next chapter.  We'll also get more insight into Edward's perspective on everything!  I can't wait to post it - it's almost ready!

Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 04:55 PM · On: The Inside of a Kaleidoscope

This story is still awesome :) I love it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! :)

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