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Reviewer: Nano Annis (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 03:26 AM · On: Far From Apathy
I have been complete review fail of late, but I couldn't let another chapter go by without letting you know how much I'm enjoying your story.
Your Bella is so well drawn that she practically leaps off the page and I love how five years has seen her grow and change, but still hold onto so many of the insecurities and foibles that make her who she is. I was on tenterhooks for this first meeting with Edward and you didn't disappoint! Once again, your attention to detail is excellent; your characterisation is strong and you really have a talent for setting the scene - I almost felt like I was in Alice and Jasper's house myself.
Thank you for giving us another update and I cannot wait for more! x
Author's Response: Thank you so much Nano Annis! Your review renewed my inspiration. I'm incredibly thankful for readers like you!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 12:00 AM · On: Far From Apathy
I want to punch Heidi in the face. Oh please, can I? I'm a good reviewer, can you give me this? I won't ask for anything again lol Wouldn't mind kicking Garrett in the balls either :)
Author's Response: Sure thing, HockeyChick! I had another reviewer who wanted to slap both Heidi and Garrett upside the head with Bella's bloody steak. I had a good laugh off that one... Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Far From Apathy
Great chapter!
It's safe to say that Heidi and Garrett do not belong with Edward and Bella!(In fact, I think Garrett and Heidi belong together.) I hope that before the night is through Edward punches Garrett in the face....I know he wants to.
I can't wait to see what happens next! Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. We'll catch the rest of the dinner party in the next chapter.
Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Far From Apathy
Heidi is vapid and sad replacement of Bella for Edward, what is he thinking?
Author's Response: Maybe Edward isn't thinking!
Reviewer: meesh430 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Far From Apathy
I'm dying over here!! I can't wait to read what happens next mmmm love it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: flagrad (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Far From Apathy
AHHH... a cliffie?... really?... your killing me. ;) I hope you update soon! And I really hope Edward kicks "daddys girl" to the curb w/ lightning speed. I can not wait to see how Edward & Bella's converation goes.
thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much flagrad!!!
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Far From Apathy
Talk about awkward. I think I might have had to tell Garrett to take a long walk off a short dock. He is too annoying. Oh and that uppity Heidi I might of had to tell her off too. Bella is too nice or too insecure one. She needs to man up and do what she needs to do. Can't wait.
Author's Response: Thank you vampiremom!
Reviewer: ifka (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 08:42 AM · On: New Torture
Thanks for being a perfectionist and for not giving in to any pressure of urgency.
Reviewer: irishgirl23 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 03:22 PM · On: New Torture
Ahhh...in answer to your question...yes! You have me very anxious for the next chapter! I can't wait! I was anticipating this moment the whole chapter. I was all worried that Edward's girlfriend would turn out to be Kate. I guess she still could be. Update soon!
Author's Response: Ooh, good guess, but wrong. You will see next chapter. Thank you so much for the review! And I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: irishgirl23 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Just the Same Old Bella
Wow! You did so well with this chapter. You've captured a lot of pain and intense feeling in a genuine way, which reflects the struggles of transitioning into new stages of life. I can't wait to see where this will go.
Reviewer: irishgirl23 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Just the Same Old Bella
Wow! You did so well with this chapter. You've captured a lot of pain and intense feeling in a genuine way, which reflects the struggles of transitioning into new stages of life. I can't wait to see where this will go.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, irishgirl! The next chapter is almost done and I'll post it as soon as I can!
Reviewer: fretgirl (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 06:02 PM · On: New Torture
Awesome chapter! Well worth the wait!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 03:14 PM · On: New Torture
yes
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: ifka (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 04:03 PM · On: New Torture
To answer your question: yes, and you better update soon.
The anticipation for the reunion of Edward and Bella has been almost unbearable, and as I began reading this chapter it became almost torturous (don't know if that is even a word in english). You let us read two thirds into the chapter, before we know, whether there will be any meeting between the two at all in this chapter, or we just have to learn about her friends an her preparations, and then when we know, you continue piling up the anticipation until they just lay eyes on eachother.
Honestly, I am a very patient person, but I just can't wait another month for them to speak. So Lislar please, pleeeeeease put everything else aside and WRITE.
Author's Response: I always like what you have to say, ifka! I am so sorry about the torture I put you through in the last chapter. I can't help myself; the story just spills itself from me in this way. I do promise though, that Edward and Bella will be interacting quite a bit in the rest of the story! The next chapter is almost done. I'm a perfectionist, but I'll post it soon! Thank you so much for reading and for reviewing!!
Reviewer: I laugh I hope I love (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 06:44 PM · On: New Torture
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!!:)
Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 04:48 AM · On: New Torture
WOW WOW WOW
this chapter was beautiful, though i must say for as much as i love angela and tanya, i hate garrett
please dont make me wait to long for more.
Author's Response: Thank you amber! I am almost done with the next chapter and it should be posted soon! :)
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 04:04 AM · On: New Torture
Arg! Yes, Yes you do. More soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's great!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter is almost ready!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 11:33 PM · On: New Torture
Nice to get a background on the others. I can't wait for more of the meeting :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much HockeyChick! I always appreciate your reviews!!!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 09:16 PM · On: New Torture
I am definitely anxious for the next chapter!
I can not wait to see what happens next!
(btw, I loved this chapter! Excellent job!)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! :)
Reviewer: rosy (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 09:12 PM · On: New Torture
ohhhhhh, i cant wait next chapter!!! my heart is trembling now!!!
yes! yes! you make me so anxious for the next!
edward... ummmm its gonna be very interesting for sure....
love this story so much, plz do not make us wait too long!!!
love & hugs oxox rosy
Author's Response: Thank you so much rosy! I especially appreciate the love and hugs - you're so sweet! I promise to post the next chapter as soon as I can! It's almost ready! :)
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:48 PM · On: New Torture
Wow that was some reunion. Oh and I agree with the girls. Garrett is an asshat.
Author's Response: Thanks so much vampiremom! I appreciate the review!
Reviewer: peculiar_warrior (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:00 PM · On: New Torture
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is almost ready!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 07:39 PM · On: New Torture
I really love how romantic you make everything. It's wonderfully hypnotic to read, and I cannot wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I am very much a romantic - probably to a fault! But I can't help myself. What is life without romance? without passion?
Reviewer: ear906 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 07:30 PM · On: New Torture
I'm so excited to read this new chapter! I can't wait to see what Edward has been up to in the last 5 years & how long he's been in Seattle. I would love to hear his thoughts on this reunion. I'm glad Bella has such a strong support system too.
Author's Response: Hi ear906! Thank you for the review. It was really important to me to show how Bella is the kind of person who, despite the hardships in her life, draws people to her. Her friends and family are a pivotal part of her life and growth. Her situation is very different now from when we first met her. Now, she has a support system that has allowed her to blossom in ways she wouldn't have otherwise.
Reviewer: flagrad (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 06:54 PM · On: New Torture
:) Can't wait for the next update
Author's Response: Thanks so much flagrad! I appreciate the review!
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