I can't wait until they do meet up.. well if they meet up. =)  This was a great chapter.

Ouch. Brutal with the hair. I think Edward's going to kick his ass.

I'm glad Bella's going to fight for her man ;)

 

I was so happy to read your update, it was great. I loved it. So happy that Garett is gone...please, please dont bring him back ;)

What a super nice surprise!! I've missed reading this so much!  Wow, Edward and Bella's little conversation in the hall was INTENSE!!  Along with the staring over dessert. Can you say UST??? LOL  I'm so freakin' glad that they finally are getting their chance!! *throws confetti*  Now I'm overly anxious to get my hands on the next chapter but I'll wait as patiently as possible. :)

XOXOXO

 

This was a great chapter!

I hope Garrett is gone for good this time...He is annoying. (Just like Heidi.)

I'm glad that Bella is going to fight for Edward!!! I can't wait to see what she does!

Looking forward to your next update!

 

That was so good! Garrett is such a jerk. I'm gladd he'll be out of the picture now! (I assume). I was actually just thinking about this story earlier today and I was wondering when it would be updated. And then I checked my e-mail an hour later and there it was! What a coincidence, huh? Anyway, I really like this entire story and I don't think I can explain it very well at all but something about it is just so touching and sad. But why is Edward with Heidi at all? She's so obnoxious and rude. I guess the opposite of Bella? Anyway, I can't wait for the next update! Good job!

Wow, I've read up to here in one sitting and I got to tell you this is a really good story - I adore the way you write Edward - hmm.. "raw manliness" oh yeah, I can just see him, hear him - really yummy. 

All your characters are great, they all fit so well and I'm hanging out now for the next installment which I'm hoping is not far away.  I respect you're busy and have a life other than entertaining the likes of me as a reader so I will be content to wait until you write another chapter.

Thank you so much for the great read :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review Stormhunter!  I'm glad that you are enjoying the story so far.  The next installment is on the way.  Not only have I been swamped with holiday activities, but I got a new laptop and I'm in the process of installing all my programs and transferring files.  I can't write until I get my word processing program going!  And I couldn't even find my password for Twilighted until tonight.  Ugh.  Next week, life should return to normal.

Oh please get rid of Garrett. What an annoying, egotistical bastard. Bella doesn't need someone to degrade her and shoot down any self confidence she has managed to gain. Edward is back!!! I can't wait for the fireworks.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. And don't worry, Garrett won't be around for long!

:-)

Who says you have to stop somewhere?? lol Love it!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

ugh.

this chapter made my week.

i am a lover of tension and, this tension was epic.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

Wauw what a marvelous chapter!

Honestly the best news I had today was when I read that you are far from finished.

Though you insist on torturing you readers with cliff-hanger endings and a loooooong waiting time between chapters, it is a delight to follow your characters and the unfolding of your story. Since I live in Copenhagen where the next four to five months are going to be dark, cold, windy and wet, wet, wet  - its is nice to have you updates to look forward to.  So  I may be childishly eager to read your next chapter, but I certainly don't want it to be over too fast.

Author's Response:

Oh ifka, I so wish that I had more time and that I could write faster so that I could get my updates out to you more frequently in dark, wet Copenhagen.  I will do my absolute best to update as soon as I can.  Thank you for being a faithful reader and for your continued support! If I could, I'd bottle up some sunshine from California and mail it to you. :)