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Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 08:48 AM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
Continunity, continunity, continunity.
Reviewer: Bitemeverywhere (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 03:55 PM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
That was really sweet.
I liked that.
The ending was a nice surprise.
Reviewer: farawaymomo (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:36 AM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
Cool. Watching Jake get drained... definitely not as sad or horrific as I would think (hehe).
Author's Response: Ha ha. Yeah, he was a jerk in this one. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
that was so crazy ass shyt - wow - i would love to know wat happens to bella n edward
Author's Response: Thanks, well I like to think they live happily ever after, slowly eating Jacob's tribe. : )
Reviewer: tcdwnsmm801 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
Awesome and original, I loved it!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I hope you will check out some of my other work as well.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
I like that he killed Jake..he was such a bastard...
Author's Response: Thanks, that seems to be everyone's favorite part. : )
Reviewer: evildoer (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
I like the twist at the end!
Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you enjoyed.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
Loved it!!! I'm not a jake fan at all so this was just perfect.
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed. Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: Hannah81 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
WOW!
I honestly did not see that ending coming at all.
Thanks for letting me know about this story, it is so different from anything else I have read before :)
Author's Response: Thanks Hannah, I am glad you liked. And I am super happy I surprised people!
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
I really enjoyed this! I never saw Jake being the evil bastard in the end. That was a great twist.
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Author's Response: Thanks, I figured if people are going to hate Jacob anyway I might as well give them a good reason. : )
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
haha! I loved this line and Edward's response...
“Edward, I don’t know what you are but you do what you need to do”
Edward chuckled, “I love you, baby.”
Great story!
Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you enjoyed. I liked writing a little darker and yet still romantic Edward.
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
That was great i like it alot
Author's Response: Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
Oooo That was awesome!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much I am glad you enjoyed. Reviews make me smile, and write more.
Reviewer: alaska4114 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
interesting... i gotta say, i did not see that one comming...
its really cool though! you writing anything else??
Author's Response: Yes I am currently writing another story. I have the prologue done and the first two chapters but I am looking for a beta to work with before I post, so it may take a little while before it starts showing up. I have some other one shots and stories (unbetaed) at fanfiction under the writing name readingmama so you can go over there while you are waiting. : )
Reviewer: Niques (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
It would have been a nice book but its tooo bad its completed
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I actually thought about this one being a complete story but it felt better as a one shot to me.
Reviewer: Angel Wings 113 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
That was really good. I would like to see more things like this. And it really seemed like a good Idea for a vamp romance novel.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am glad you enjoyed. I hope you will check out my other story if you haven't already.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
Is it wrong that I laughed when Jake got eaten?
Because I did. hehe.
He deserved it.
I'm thinking there should be a sequel.
Author's Response: Thanks so much I am glad you enjoyed. I did this oneshot just for fun and doubt there will be a sequel but I am starting another story that you hopefully will enjoy.
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Honeymoon in Paradise
Hee hee; Jake's dinner. I don't know why that pleases me.
Cute and creative little tale! This is better for my convalescence than the antibiotics I'm on :-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I am glad you enjoyed. Read twice and call me in the morning. But seriously don't stop taking the antibiotics. : )
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