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Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 06:53 PM · On: The Loch Ness Monster

Well that was HORRID!  You shoudl be completely ashamed of yourself... Leading us on... making us think MAYBE there would be a happy ending... but NO, you have to go and kill BILLY (what did he ever do you you?!)... and REN?! wtf... only Stephen King kills off his MAIN characters... Well CRAP... The story better not be over!  Your tiny ass author's note of hope!  Sheesh... it is a good thing I trust you :p  Thanks for updating, btw >.< bleh



Author's Response:

I've getting a lot of heat for Billy's death. xD I was sort of surprised that it seems like Billy's often a victim in peoples' fics? xD Buuut, umm... though I am a tad bit horrid, I promise to make it up to you? The story is definitely not over! And hopefully you won't hate me as much as the story continues. The next chapter has been submitted already, and it should be up soon. Thanks very much for reading, reviewing, and rating!

Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 06:24 PM · On: The Loch Ness Monster

Craziness! Cant wait for more!

Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks for reading, reviewing, and rating! The next chapter has been submitted already.

Reviewer: mtoldme (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 06:04 PM · On: The Loch Ness Monster

YOU ARE SO MEAN.

I loved this line: "I was going to kick some serious Volturi ass in a few minutes."  I wish you would have let Jake do just that.  I want the werewolves to be stronger or just as strong as the vampires.  I must admit, I am a little worried of how things are going to go from here.  I don't like the turn of events.  Am I still going to be able to read?  I don't know, I hope so.



Author's Response:

I knooooow. xD I figured a few people would be a tad bit upset. You'll still be able to read though. Just wait until the next chapter. ;) It's been submitted already and should lighten things up for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twilighter008 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:17 AM · On: Paradise Nonexistant

omg what a chapter, jane,felix, using poor old billy as bait for jacob, and poor jacob he took a right beating from the volturi vamps, hope billy and jacob are going to be ok, and oh dear they have managed to get ren angry i do hope she doesn't do anything stupid,

Reviewer: twilighter008 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:52 AM · On: A New Taste of an Old Thing

omg of course it was better than you think, it was romantic, funny, and to top it off it was sexy in the rain, excellent, sorry i just love the line, well, except with edward, i didn't really believe i'd ever even be able to fake friendship with that bastard. lol

Reviewer: twilighter008 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Sam Sees What I Don't

omg, what way to leave a chapter, i can't wait to read the next one lol, i loved this chapter, all jacob, i just love how you write about how he feels,  you really draw me into his character, and i just love him, and to think he might have to take on the alpha roll as well.

Reviewer: twilighter008 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Up In The Air

another great chapter as always, poor jacob still struggling with imprint, but very slowly coming around to the idea, i guess both of them are, loved the reactions from edward and bella to jacob imprinting on ren, had a little bit of a chuckle at that, can't wait to find out what aro is really up too.

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 10:47 AM · On: Paradise Nonexistant

I am a Nessie and Jacob fanatic, and I read your entire story so far today.  I neglected New Moon extras for this because I couldn't stop reading! :) 

I really like how you didn't make Jacob some "whipped" wolf.  It's important that he questions the imprint even though it's fate and all that.  

I can't wait to read more! As much as I can't stand Liam for what he's doing, he's a great character! :) 

Reviewer: katieishere (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Paradise Nonexistant

I'm glad you updated, but I don't get why Jacob was such an idiot. He's run into Jane before, so it's not like he didn't know what she could do. Also, I don't understand why he didn't phase as soon as he realized there was more than Liam there. He's an alpha. Phasing is the first thing he should have done. He's a lot of talk and absolutely no action. It's rather frustrating.

Reviewer: toothpick (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Paradise Nonexistant

Great chapter and another cliffhanger! You love to do that to us don't you?! I get the feeling Rens about to do something wreakless. I hope the pack gives those Vamps what for. Can't wait for your next add I love this fic!

Reviewer: Natalina (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 12:35 PM · On: Paradise Nonexistant

I am confused I read and re read that last couple of paragraphs and I cant seems to get it Why is she angry



Author's Response:

She's angry because they've hurt Jacob, and he's her mate. ;)

Reviewer: lavender sky (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Paradise Nonexistant

Don't leave us hanging for long! I'm just glad the cliffie wasn't right before Leah showed up!

Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Paradise Nonexistant

Intense! I love your writing...it's so unique and poised and well thought out. Keep it up!

Reviewer: sim777 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 06:53 AM · On: Paradise Nonexistant

Oh my word - this chapter is not what i expected! I hope that Ren and Jake will still be together!!!! I just dont know what Ren has in mind!

Reviewer: BeHowlin (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 02:21 AM · On: Paradise Nonexistant

O my gosh...well, that's just mean..now I want to know what happens!!Quite a chapter!!! Is Jacob ok?Is Billy ok? What took everyone so long?

I guess I have no choice but to wait for the next one!

Good job, honey!

Bianca.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Paradise Nonexistant

AHHHHHHHHH! I need to breath......breath......breath......Ok I'm calmer...

WHAT THE FUCK!!!!! ARE YOU KIDDING ME!!!!!  GOD, HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO US!!!!! YOU ARE SO EVIL!!!!!!!

Way to go Jake, you get so into your day dream that you let 3 vamp's come into your house?  Were the hell was the pack?  was no one on patrol?  What the hell was Alice doing?  why didn't she see anything?  Poor Billy is he dead?  Oh and the last question .... Is Ren going to get into the fight and if so what the hell can she do except get hurt or taken? 

Please update soon .....Please, please, I'm not above begging.  Pretty please?????? With sugar on top?  How about with Jake on top?! lol

Great cliffy by the way, oh ya I hate you!

Dixie

 

Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Paradise Nonexistant

OMG...wow....what is Ren going to do....I can't take this....I need an update....

Reviewer: DazedNCnfused (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Paradise Nonexistant

Ah, you can't stop it there! We need to see what's going on around them!

Reviewer: lestev (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Paradise Nonexistant

Excellent action!  I hope Ren kicks some ass - I can't wait to see what she can do!  Maybe later they can make s'mores over a nice fire of burning Volturi :-)

Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Paradise Nonexistant

Whew!  You said you had trouble with this chapter? Psshft!  You did GREAT!  The fight scene was intense!  My heart broke for Jake (daydreaming is bad - especially when vamps are after you and your imprint)!  Poor Billy, didn't stand a chance! *sniff* 

It didn't seem to terribly long in btw updates, I didn't doubt you would continue at any rate!  Thanks for updating :)  Your writing is fantastic

Reviewer: wordslinger (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Paradise Nonexistant

wow! That was pretty intense!

Reviewer: toothpick (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 04:01 PM · On: A New Taste of an Old Thing

Great chapter, I loved it! I'm so glad Jake and Ren's relationship is moving forward in a great way!

Reviewer: twilighter008 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Step Into the Sunlight. I'll Be at the Clocktower

another awesome chapter as always, don't worry you really did do edward justice in his pov, i loved it, and as for the rest of the chapter, stunning as always, you set the scene is this chapter brilliantly, all i can say is i was right there with ren, 

Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 05:35 PM · On: A New Taste of an Old Thing

Well.. I think it was way better than you apparently thought it was!  Dork, you shouldn't doubt yourself!  You're awesome!  I loved the rain lemon, it totally worked for them!  I liked this dynamic of their relationship starting to come together.  Thank you again for the quick updates!!!!! Totally rocks my weekend!



Author's Response:

I know, I know! xD I felt like there was a lot riding on this rekindling scene, and I wanted it to be perfect, but I'm very glad that it's met with great reception, so I feel much, much better now! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it! Thanks very much, as always, for reading and reviewing! ;)

Reviewer: twimom_la (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 02:24 PM · On: A New Taste of an Old Thing

AAAAHHH!!! Make-up sex outside in the rain in the mud! HOTNESS! =)

I loved both POVs and knowing how in awe Ren is with Jacob is just so sweet. I'm glad Jacob is giving their relationship a chance.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! ;3 And the changing POVs. I wasn't going to do that at first, but it felt like it'd been awhile since I'd been in Ren's head. =/ Lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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