I loved getting Wesley's story! This was great and gives us insight into why he is the way he is.

Awesome chapter!

Author's Response:

:) I'm glad. His chapters are taking a bit longer to pull together but I'm glad they're coming out well. He's my baby;) The next chapter is the rest of his backstory. I hope you continue to enjoy!

Thank you for reading and taking time to review:) I love these!

with the way this fic started i wasn't sure if i would like it but gave it a try. i am liking it better now, because i am definitely an edward girl all the way, and it would be nice if wesley got a happy end. can't wait to read more of edward and bella!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking a chance on this:) I'm glad you stuck with me. I hope you continue to enjoy the ride. Wesley's happy ending is out there...he just hasn't found her yet:) The next chapter is more about his past, then back to Edward and Bella.

It's good to hear some of Wesley's backstory. How old was he when he was changed? I'm glad that Wesley realizes that it's Edward tyhat Bella Wants. I'm also glad that he's aware that it's more that Bella reminds him of Aislain than anything. Bella belongs with Edward.

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking time to read and review:)

I'm glad you liked hearing from Wesley. The next chapter has more from his POV. He was forty-three when he changed (yeah, I know...kind of weird that he's basically the same age as Charlie). In my mind, he has a youthful look (boyish features). Combine that with transformation...and he looks ten years younger.

Wesley's just a bit confused by emotions he hasn't felt for several decades. Nothing will come between Bella and Edward:)

I like this chapter and as i said i am excited to learn  more about wesley. oh and those sex toys. hahhahahaaaa

Author's Response:

:) I'm glad. Wesley's chapter is almost ready. I had a few items to re-align...

First of all, a confession: I've been very sloppy with praising your selection of lyrics at the start of each chapter. I'm a little embarrassed to tell you that I haven't always listened them... but I'm going to remedy that! Oh, and nowadays, whenever I listen to Depeche Mode I'm thinking of you :)

Feisty Bella, a good padawan of Jake :) And poor Edward. He's just too easy to mess with. I bet that if he could actually blush he would. All the time.

And how I enjoyed the dialog - again. You write Edward so well, it's like he's the master of deception and can - and will - distract Bella again and again... oh, and I bet she doesn't have a clue :D Well, at least not all the time. But then again, there are times when Edward is unable to withhold information he is unwilling to let Bella know. So, basically, he just sidesteps her inquiries but when she really wants to get to the bottom of things, she will. So, I guess Edward's kinda pussywhipped? :) Big, bad vampire, my ass *laughs* ...seriously, I like that you are able to bring some badassness into Edward's character. He's not such a total wuss that I've been reading around. And I like that! At the same time Bella's not a pushover but not a total bitch, either. Like that, too ;)

I'm rambling again...

Quote: I was thinking about him pleasuring himself, and it aroused me.
Sue me.

Still loving you <3

Hey, do you think that when Edward bites his own hand, so that his own venom enters his system (which is, of course, already full of his venom 8)), a scar appears? I mean, didn't it say in the books that only thing to scar a vampire is another vampire's venom. Or was it just the venom without the definition "another vampire"? But it just doesn't make sense because if vampire's skin consists of those sparkly things, like diamonds, that are "cemented" together by his/her own venom and if then the same venom breaks the skin, there'll be a scar. So, to answer my own question, there'll be no scar for Edward even if he almost removed his thumb :P ...maybe he should bite his whole hand off when he leaves to hunt. That way Bella wouldn't be so lonely *laughs* :D Then again, she does have her Mr. Sparkly ;)

One more thing. I think I almost mentioned this earlier, but probably forgot or thought otherwise, but I was wondering howcome Bella never said anything to Edward about the fact that he actually pleasured himself during their "session" on the couch. Then again, maybe it's for the best that she kept her mouth shut. Otherwise there might not be the next time x) ...who am I kidding, of course there'll be the next time!

Where was he going to take her? To the Cabin? O.O And what was it that he was going to do, that old - 100-years-old - pervert :P

Btw, I'm with the whole "pop the cherry before the big event" but isn't it like cheating? I mean they agreed that they won't have the actual intercourse before she's a vamp but then again, she has to have "the thing" taken care of before she is changed. So, okay. I guess this is the compromise they need. But still, I think it's cheating if Edward does it :D ...though I don't see a way to keep him away, no matter what :P And maybe, just maybe I'm too obsessed with the mechanics. After all, their first time is going to be their first time whether or not she's having all her places unbroken or not. Stupid me. Sorry, rambling :P ...lets carry on!

Well, well. I must say I can't wait to see how Edward reacts when he learns that Jasper told Bella about Wesley. Oh, wouldn't it be great if Bella'd mumble something about Wesley in her sleep! Although, that might drive Edward over the edge... so maybe that's not a good idea. Jealous Edward is fun but over-jealous Edward not that much.

Like I've said, great work again! I'm happy to have found this story and extatic to be able to help you with it :)

- B

Author's Response:

Depeche Mode is my absolute favorite. To be honest…I could write an entire fic based off of their lyrics. Granted…it may be a bit sad as I lean towards two of their darker albums :P

I’m not 100% on the scar thing. I guess to me, it would leave a bit of a mark…perhaps only visible to other vampires.

On the pleasuring aspect… In my mind, though Edward is coming around (so to speak:P), he still holds onto some of his old-fashioned ways. He’ll get better at verbalizing things down the road. I think for now, she’s content with the fact that he’s finally breaking off a little somethin’ somethin’ and doesn’t want to push it. He seems to do better when he doesn't overthink things or talk about them too much.

On the mechanics of their first time… I consider their “first time” to be the act of intercourse itself. The “popping of the cherry” as it were, is more of a means to an end. Edward will be in on that action though…how could he not? :P To be honest, it’s something that I wish I had thought of that early on in life:P

Thank you again for all your support and for keeping me honest! Have I told you lately that you rock?

I'm loving it.  I can't wait to get some more answers.  And I'm looking forward to "Mr. Sparkles".

 

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking time to read and review:) I'm glad you're enjoying this. The next chapter will hopefully answer some of your questions. "Mr. Sparkles" will be making his reappearance soon. Poor Edward doesn't know what's coming;) Thank you again:)

The action was amazing! You're doing great. Wayyyy more people should be reading this. I'd plug your story on my own but I don't have one just yet....sorry. You are a great writer though and I love your character Wesley...fits in very well with the canon ones! Can't wait to read more :) I'm also interested to see what Bella's turning into considering her weird behavior and such...

Author's Response:

Wow! Thank you for the compliment:) I'm glad you think it's worth the read. Wesley returns in the next chapter.

This was such an enjoyable chapter.  It was nice to see them both have that shared experience of intimacy and release together.  It helped them with their confidence.  Now that they have crossed that line, it will be difficult to NOT climax together....   ;o)

Author's Response:

Thank you:) There's a lot more where that came from.

I so love Jake....

Author's Response:

I have a soft spot for him myself. I hope I'm doing him justice.

I enjoyed the fluff.  They needed to spend some quality time together.  It sounds like now that the actual sex pressure is off, Edward is eager to push his boundaries a little  more... I am looking forward to that!

Author's Response:

:) I'm all about pushing Edward's boundaries.

LOL it's okay..I like hearing Edward's POV.

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He had a lot of things to "get out", so to speak;)

I am loving this.  So, what happened?  How did she survive that?  Edward should have bitten her!!!  I can't wait to read more, although, I need to go to sleep!!

Author's Response:

Wow! You are rocking me with all these reviews. Thank you:)

You'll see...

Finally she sees reason!!!

Author's Response:

Yeah...it's Edward all the way:)