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Reviewer: dlb2546 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Edward & Jasperagon

Definitely worth the wait! But I have to admit, I can't wait for more! I hope you can update soon. This is a great story, keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: TheLambToHisLion (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 03:28 PM · On: Edward & the Double Date?

its almost adoreable how oblivious edward is (:

i loved his little 'isn't it?' at victoria

i don't typically read slash as a main pairing, but this fic has me charmed



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like and that you're giving slash a chance. I'd love to hear more from you. :)

Reviewer: chele the original (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Edward & Jasperagon

excellent chapter. naked is good;)



Author's Response:

I concur. lol. Thanks!

Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Edward & Jasperagon

*Need water now* :)  very thirsty here... :) 



Author's Response:

Now, don't get all dehydrated because of these boys... ;) Glad you liked it. Thanks!

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Edward & Jasperagon

Another well written chapter.  Thanks so much for sharing your lovely writing with everyone.



Author's Response:

Aw... thanks for this sweet review. :)

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 07:10 AM · On: Jasper & Tanya Wit De Big Tits

Nice chapter, I am glad Edward is starting to open up.  Thank you for wariting such a nice story.



Author's Response:

Thanks! This is a sweet review. You're sweet. Did you know that?

Reviewer: Puddinpop72 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 05:14 AM · On: Edward & Jasperagon

Definately worth the wait!!!

Author's Response:

Why thank you. I'm glad you are liking it. :)

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Edward & Jasperagon

Still delicious after another reading.  Yum!  

xoxo Sarah



Author's Response:

Thanks girl for everything. :)

Reviewer: Mickster (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Edward & Jasperagon

This is so hot. Then hysterically funny (Bella...bathroom) I laughed so hard tears ran down my face, then hot again. If you had some emotion monitor on me reading my emotions while I was reading this I would look like a psycho the way my moods were flipping all over the map. I love this story. The dynamic between them is truly amazing. I can't blame Edward for being totally in love with Jasper even if it is soon because their connection is so deep. It is so cool that you can evoke such strong emotions in your readers with this, even if it would make me look crazy on paper... :)
This was an amazing update.
Thank you for the update!
Micki

Author's Response:

I like that I can take you all over the place emotionally. ;) That's what I'm going for! You don't look crazy on paper. I'm glad you are liking it.

Thanks!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Jasper & Tanya Wit De Big Tits

Oh where, oh where has my Jasper gone?
Oh where, oh where can he be??
With his bod so hot and his schlong, so long
Oh where, oh where can he be???

hehe...hoping for a new chapter soon. Have a great day!!! :)

Author's Response:

lmao. nice song. Did you like the new chapter?

Reviewer: Fesh (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 03:00 AM · On: Jasper & Tanya Wit De Big Tits

-sigh- I love this fic. I only read it last night (had me up allnight getting through it!).
I don't usually read slash but I just adore this. The make-out scenes are some of the hottest I've read in any fic. I also love Edward's innocence - it brings a whole new side to everything it's like you experience all these things for the first time right along with him.
Jasper is just...Jasper so in otherwards AMAZING I adore him n feel so bad for him with his troubles - damn his father. I like how he always tries to control his temper - dunno why but it's really hot!
Anyway thanku 4 writing such an awesome fic n I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you decided to give it a chance and that you like it! :) You're making me blush with all you're sweet words. Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: Andre (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Jasper & Tanya Wit De Big Tits

I love it when edward acts all ashamed and everything... and when Jasper have thoughts that make him such a girl.

This story is definitely becoming one of my favorites... Good Job!



Author's Response:

I don't think Jasper has thoughts that make him a girl, at all. They're just people. Gender roles have too much of an impact on relationships. Why can't a dude be sensitive?

I'm glad you're liking it. Thanks!

Reviewer: Andre (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Edward & the Wet Dream

That was mean!! That's all...



Author's Response:

I'm very mean. It's just how I am. ;)

Thanks!

Reviewer: Andre (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Jasper & the Psychic Pixie

Finally the wolf is out of the bag.... I know its cat but I prefer wolves. I'm glad Jasper was able to come clean to his family and decide that he needs to show everyone who he really is. Now I don't really know how Edward is going to react, but hopefully he won't freak out...

Great Job!!



Author's Response:

Wolf? Cat? lol. Who cares, right? I'm glad you enjoyed Jasper's coming out. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Andre (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Edward & the Long Ride of Richard

I like that they both had complicated pasts, but I've read before in other stories something similar. Jasper having an abusive father while Edward is anti-social and lost his mother...

Anyways great chapter and keep the good job!



Author's Response:

There are similar pasts, true, but it's hard to be completely original when dealing with fanfiction, sometimes. The thing about my story is that, yes, their pasts have shaped them into the people they are, but it's not the main thing that defines them.

Thank you.

Reviewer: Andre (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Jasper & the Cockblock

And things are getting interesting... poor Jasper lets see if he can keep his friend inside his pants, or at least under control.

It was interesting Jasper's POV and see why he lost his roommate... great chapter!



Author's Response:

In his pants, yes. ;) lol. Thanks!

Reviewer: Andre (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Edward & the Urinator

I love Jasper/Edward fics and I heard of this one through the Slash Awards, so I decided to give it a chance and I'm already liking it a lot!!

There were many funny moments, especially the Eric fiasco... that is a plus for me.

Going to continue reading the rest... Good Job!!



Author's Response:

I love Jasper/Edward fics, as well. lol. I hope you enjoy mine. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Jasper & Tanya Wit De Big Tits

those two are like sex on a stick....:)



Author's Response:

Wrapped in a pancake? God. I don't even know what that means. lol.

Thanks!

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Edward & the Eyebrow Scar

the ending is wonderfully sweet and beautiful...just the way new love should be portrayed



Author's Response:

Why thank you! :)

Reviewer: ladydread81 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Edward & the Double Date?

i just started reading and i'm liking it :)  its going to be interesting to read how J&E develop their romance......very interesting 



Author's Response:

Interesting? I hope it is. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Puddinpop72 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:51 AM · On: Jasper & Tanya Wit De Big Tits

I'm really glad I found this story--- it's not one that I normally would migrate towards, but it's great and your a great story teller! Love & relationships- the emotions are all the same, it doesn't matter if it's gay, straight,or whatever- it's hot all the same!!!

Author's Response:

AH - THIS IS YOUR FIRST SLASH STORY! RIGHT?

Well, then, I'm glad you're liking it and seeing that no matter the gender, it's still love. :)

Thanks!!

Reviewer: Puddinpop72 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 04:56 AM · On: Edward & the Eyebrow Scar

This was very sweet.......

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!

Reviewer: Puddinpop72 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 04:53 AM · On: Jasper & the Leftovers

James - what a jerk! Its hard for me to understand people who act that way, I know it's a story but it makes me sad :(

Author's Response:

I know, but some ppl are true idiots.

thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: loolupe (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 04:31 AM · On: Jasper & Tanya Wit De Big Tits

still here. great chapter.



Author's Response:

Glad you're still here. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: jlee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Jasper & Tanya Wit De Big Tits

I'm glad you're easing him into everything... it's a nice buildup. 

Missed you!!! Glad you're back.  Looking forward to more, hopefully sooner than before ;)

 



Author's Response:

Ah. I read this and I feel guilty. It's another long lapse. Though, this one won't be as long. I'm updating this week! :)

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