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Reviewer: cb81594 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2011 10:47 PM · On: End of the World

More more please!!

Reviewer: mona123 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 01:45 AM · On: End of the World

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

This story is my life...i'm dying to read what happens next.

I LOVE THIS STORY! It's amazing so pleeeeeeeeeeease update!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 06:42 AM · On: End of the World

i just read through and see it been months since your last update please do so soon

Reviewer: sophilus (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 02:45 PM · On: End of the World

pleeeease update soon! I love this story

Reviewer: Pennyxoxx (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 04:37 AM · On: End of the World

Please write again!(:

Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 08:22 AM · On: End of the World

Aw sad. The really REALLY sad thing is, the way people reacted (or didn't) to her at school is how it really goes. Everyone is so wrapped up in their own lives in HS that someone could be clearly in trouble and no one even notices. Except for Edward. But besides him. lol

Anyway, this story's really good. A lot of time passed in the last chapter but it was needed and it didn't seem rushed. The story is really realistic, that's what I love so much about it. Good job, and thank you for the update!

Author's Response:
thank you!

I agree 100%. People in school get wrapped up in the stereotypical things and don't see what's right in front of their faces.

I'm really glad you like my story!

Hope you keep reading!

Reviewer: wickedtorch (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 05:03 PM · On: End of the World

its really good! now hurry up and get the next chapter out!

Reviewer: cranberryblue (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 12:15 PM · On: End of the World

WANT MORE. This is one of my favorite stories and whenever you update I actually smile. How sad am I? Nah, this is a really good story and I love it because it is realistic and you have a way of making me feel what the character is feeling when they are feeling it.

It was a bit fast but that was okay. I always love Bella's point of view for this one, it is the best.

Thank you for your writing.

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 05:56 AM · On: Confessions

That chapter may have been short but it was more than enough. That chapter was filled with emotion. Too much for me to handle. i hope someone will help her. GOSH!!!!! This was definitely a hard chapter to get through.

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all of your reviews! I worship every one of them (:

Ecstatic you like my story!

Please keep reading!

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Breaking

Ok I am now worried about her skipping school. I have a feeling Charlie will not like that very much.

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 05:38 AM · On: Turtle Shell

Wow Renee, really. What a jerk off mother. I would have hung up on her too. I want Bella to visit Tanya but really I think it is too risky. I am afraid Charlie will find out and kick her ass some more. She is bold.

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Ring Ring. Who is it?

Wow Renee called. Maybe she will come to save Bella from her life with her worthless piece of shit dad. I thought for sure it was going to be Edward calling. I wonder how long it will take for them to realize what is going on with her and Charlie???

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 05:20 AM · On: Death Row

I see why she does not like southern comfort. He made her pass out!!! Damn Charlie. What a waste of space. That is sad that Alice knew somehting was wrong. What about Edward??? What was up with him when she left???

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 05:04 AM · On: Afraid

So far so good. I was afraid this was going to be a sad story and I would cry the whole time. Bella is strong and has adapted to her life. I hope Edward will not get her into any trouble. Charlie seems like a royal ass. I like the Cullens in this story. Not typical at all. I am very interested in this story. So far so good!!

Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 01:52 AM · On: End of the World

omg, poor bella.

that has got to suck

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 09:11 PM · On: End of the World

great chapter! update soon!

Reviewer: Olinka (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 08:19 PM · On: End of the World

Great chapter, very realistic way to describe what Bella felt

Reviewer: Jaymes Miorano (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 06:49 PM · On: Give Me A Sign

Just one thing. Please change your use of the word "gay," I know you're trying to be in the head of a teenage boy, but it's offensive to see it used with negative connotation.

Otherwise good chapter. Edward's intuition is great. I'm glad he's realized something is up with Bella.

Reviewer: lovebug90 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 08:13 AM · On: Give Me A Sign

i like EPOV in anything i read...keep them coming

Reviewer: samanthayh (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Give Me A Sign

is the story on fanfiction the exact same? because if soo, im gunna start reading it there too.

Author's Response:
yes, it's on FF (:

Reviewer: samanthayh (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Give Me A Sign

awww, soo sweet,

Reviewer: ashleyr132002 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Give Me A Sign

lol the Edward on top did it!! lmfao.. haha so uhh it wuz good!! i liked it !!!!! lol

Reviewer: Camash (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Give Me A Sign

im loving this story..and this chapter was really good,,,keep it going please!

Reviewer: laced (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Give Me A Sign

his is a hard pov to right but you did well keep it coming

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Give Me A Sign

This is really some serious subject matter and I think you're doing it well. I'd like to see Edward catch Charlie ready to slam Bella and come to her defense. ;) I hate guys that think they can beat the crap out of a woman and blame it on her to boot. great writing.

Joanie

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