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Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2011 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 16

These two together and sex....damn...they could steam anything up...LOL!   So so much hot desire...you can really write a wonderful scene.   So great!    Now...when they got to the diner, and saw their crew waiting...LOL!   Unbelievable.   Not sure if the overeating diet is a hangover cure???   Have you tried it??   Love this story and any update you have will be appreciated.   Thanks for giving us more. 



Author's Response:

Awww thanks for such a wonderful review! I'm not sure if it's a cure either, I do NOT feel like eating when I have a hangover LoL, but it seemed like the right thing for our Alice. LoL.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2011 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 16

they are so adorable together :) i hope they keep making each other very happy!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2011 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 2

wedding cake for rpatz well that is just to funny ....and very creative .....we could sub title this as............. it started with a kiss....... heheh



Author's Response:

:) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Tifclark69 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2011 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 3

**pant pant**
I love this Edward and Bella. Wish I were her right now...

Thanks for another great chapter!
Tif

Reviewer: Tifclark69 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2011 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

One of the best-described kisses, ever! I really liked this chapter and am looking forward to reading your fic.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the rest of it :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2011 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 16

Great chapter! I loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2011 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 16

That was so much fun to read ! Nice to see you back. know all about RL so write when you can . Thanks so much.

Wish I could still eat like Alice!

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! And I wish I could too! LoL

Reviewer: wifie_b (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2011 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 15

Awww...finally together!!  I am glad that she went ahead and laid out everything about Jake in the beginning.  I thought you did a fabulous job with this chapter.  I am excited to see them growing closer and closer emotionally as well.  Great job and I can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 15

Very nice. Yum.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 9

ARGH!  It is such a shame at what KOL sis to us Texans at their show in Dallas!  I hope they get their shit straight!  I hate to dis on them, but come on...some of us spent a lot of money on tickets, gas, parking, drinks, hotel and arragning a babysitter just to get a night out with the hubs.........to have it all go to shit!

Loved the chapter!  The cliffie....eh...not so much but I can hit hte next button and not have to wait!  LOL!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 8

thanks for the recs!...another good one that I stumbled upon is City of Sin...here on twilighted...it s a mystery romance that is awesome!!!!!

And in TWCS there is peoplelikeus....same author name........FUCKING INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Love your story so far!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all of your reviews! I'm answering them all in this one. LoL. I'll definitely check out the stories you recc'd! As for sushi, oh my goodness, I can't live without it! LoL. We eat it all the time and everyone always says "write what you know" so I did. :) About Tanya, I didn't have the heart to make her really mean, so I tried to just pull off a ditzy, yet mostly harmless, fairly slutty sort of gal. LoL. Hope I did okay with that. Thanks again for the great reviews and I hope you're enjoying the rest of the story!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 7

never had sushi...don't live in a big city so don't have any restaurants that offer it....even if we did...I wouldn't know how to eat it or what to order!

I like the story....it seems a bit different than the summary on the story page....so glad I checked it out.

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 2

tanya is a nut case... hahahaha!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

hot!  freaking despise tanya!

Reviewer: beachlover (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 15

Wel finally no cock blocking. I am happy for them :0)

He really is a sweet sexy Edward!



Author's Response:

Awww thanks! I think he's pretty sexy too :) LoL

Reviewer: TwiHeart13 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

I read this story quite a while ago. This is one of the most eloquent fanfiction pieces I have ever read, and deserves much more fame.



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much! Feel free to rec it to whomever you like! :)

Reviewer: timi55 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 15

update soon plez!



Author's Response:

LoL, I'm trying here!

Reviewer: jinlor2 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 15

Wow, that was hot!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 15

Holy Jebus....that was hot. I need a cigarette and I don't even smoke. Love the post-coitus talking :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 15

This is a wonderful story! I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 15

OK...so can you say HOOOOTTTT!   That was incredible, sexy and hot!    Bella and Edward are moving in the right direction.   They are obviously in love, and it seems like it will only be a little while before they are willing to admit it to each other.   Emmett, Jasper and Edward...the three musketeers.   I can see it.    Love the story and love the updates.   Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Wow thank you so much for for such a nice review! I'm glad you're enjoying my little story :)

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 15

Helloooo! Hot, steamy, sexy, smokin', and any other euphemism you can name! Wow!

Author's Response:

Thank ya! :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 15

whew! no wonder she's tired....lol, thank goodness no interruptions

Author's Response:

Yay for no more interruptions! LoL. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 14

whoa, that was Hawt! i mean, damn!

ok ok so no more cock-blocking, Girl! anymore would just be criminal! lol



Author's Response:

:) No more, I promise!! LoL

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 14

If there are those reading in this forum who don't know The Black Keys then they are not true Twihards. True Twihards know The Black Keys from the Eclipse soundtrack. Agreed?



Author's Response:

LoL! I don't know because I don't actually own the Eclipse soundtrack. LoL. I just LOVEEEEEE the Black Keys :)

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