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Reviewer: elsiemanville (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 18
I'm hoping Maria is a doggy patient of edwards :) Love the story.
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Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 3
now I want to see a recipe for the Brownie bits ,,,
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 18
That was a great chapter, and so emotional. Edward and Bella both clearly feel something very special for each other, and I would believe it is Love, but since it has only been such a short time, I see why they are so afraid to admit those intense feelings. You can feel the magnetic pull between these two. Damn, Esme feels it for sure. By the way, love your Esme, I mean, I of course adore your Carlisle too, but there is just something about your Esme. Love her. Of course Bitchoria had to be there, and she brings her scummy James with her. Trouble, of course. Love Emmett and Jasper's parents too. They are a riot!!! Now, Bitchoria is in the bathroom with the girls, and comes out with screaming behind still...Edward knows it's trouble. All of the girls are angry...really angry...over MARIA??? Yeah...won't it be funny, but I think it's a cocker spaniel...haha. Would make sense that Bitchoria saw his talented hands all over her. Time for Edward to get some make up sex from his Bella...haha. Also time to maybe neuter Bitchoria. I bet Bella would even help with the operation, well, maybe she wouldn't want to neuter that bitch because she would have to touch her at all...hahaha. Great job.! Dying to hear the next conversation!! YAY!
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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 18
Well whatever the case I am sure Bella will find the comedy relief in it hopefully lol...
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Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 18
quickly explain yourself...Edward!!!! What is that psycho bitch trying to do!?
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Reviewer: Chope (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 18
Wow that was great. Please update sooner..... Got all excited when I saw you had added a new chapter. Thanks
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Reviewer: stormy315 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 18
great chapter....victoria seems desperate...but edward will fight her....can´t wait for more....
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 18
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what will happen next!
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Reviewer: Jessa1326 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 17
I'm hooked! I hope to see an update soon!
Author's Response: Sorry it took me this long to respond, but thank you!!! Next chapter will be up very soon!
Reviewer: wifie_b (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 17
I am a little late reading, but I love it!! I am really enjoying this story and can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm sorry it's taken me this long to respond, but I really appreciate you taking the time and I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: JaobsStephanie (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 17
I ran across your story while purusing the catagories. I am totally hooked!!! I am on the edge of my seat and waiting with baited breath to see what is going to happen.
Will there be anymore Tanya trouble or will it be bitchtoria to cause the angst? (because the sailing has been too smooth so I know something is on the horizon for us readers :) )
Keep'em coming doll!!
Stephanie
Author's Response: I'm so happy you are enjoying my little endeavor! :) Thank you for taking the time to review, and yes, I think it's safe to say that bitchtoria has some skanky plans up her sleeve LoL
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 17
Uh, oh, what's she up to???? Thanks for the update, most appreciated. Can't wait for the next one. Oh, and I love dirty-talking Brit Edward.
Author's Response: Me too! LoL. Thanks for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: Tana (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2012 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 17
Uh oh! Bitchtoria spells trouble! Can't wait to read what she gets up to!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review! Yeah, Bitchtoria has her plans. . . . :)
Reviewer: Chope (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2012 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 17
Absolutely fantastic. Couldn't put it down or even manage to review until now. Wishing there was more. Please update soon!!! Best non vamp fic ever!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story :) I'll update as quickly as I can, though real life does have a way of kicking my ass sometimes LoL. Thank you for taking the time to review, it really means a lot xoxo
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 17
damn, that boy knows just what to say...i'm melting over here...lol and Ew! James and Victoria..drama and trouble rolled into one!
Author's Response: LoL @ drama and trouble rolled into one. I love it! LoL. Thanks so much for taking the time to be such a faithful reviewer, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 17
OMG OMG I found t his story and have been reading like a mad woman desperate to click next! I am truly loving this story!!! Its teh perfect awkward fairy tale hehehe I love the first chap and how they came to be and then wow the lemon was just to die for!!! Youhave me hook line and sinker..sigh Post again soon I am so excited to see wherethe read headed BIOTCH comes intoplay hehehehe
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story :)
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 17
That chapter was a wonderful treat. We got to see how this relationship is continuing to grow, and I am sure Edward feels just as in love with Bella as she is with him! The way Edward wants her to stay the night with him, wants everyone to know that Bella is his girlfriend. How proud he seems of her. Emmett and Jasper's parents already seem like great additions to the story, and I can't wait to hear whT they have been saying to Alice and Rose, LOL, especially how you explained Emmett looking so uncomfortable. LOL!!! Love Dirtyward's mouth...yum. Hahahaha. Wouldn't mind being locked up with him for a night, especially when Bella explained to Rose and Alice tha it was the best she's ever had!! Hell Yes! It was a perfect meeting for Esme and Bella. Very much a surprise, so neither was nervous or uncomfortable. Esme seems happy with Bella so far, so hopefully things will be OK with being accepted by his family!! (crossing fingers). I wonder if Edward will ever share with his parents the exact circumstances of Bella and his meeting the first time. Hmmm?? Now the new addition of the skank at the party?? Hell no. Bella isn't dressed for a rumble fight so I hope she can keep calm. It would be bad to spill blood on The shoes she borrowed from Alice. Alice might turn into a screaming lunatic and scare her new boyfriend's parents, hahaha. Na, it could get scary in there!!! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much for such a detailed review, I loved it! Yes, it would indeed be bad to get blood on Alice's shoes! LoL
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 17
Excellent chapter! I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review, it means a lot! xoxo
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 17
Shame they didn't make it to a quiet corner! So, trouble ahead with James and Victoria? I hope they don't ruin the party!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review! Hmm, yes, I foresee some trouble :( But don't worry, I'm definitely a HEA kinda gal :)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 17
Love the party so far. Can't wait for more! Edward and Bella are just too cute together. I want to jump Edward's bones lol
Author's Response: Don't we all? *sigh* LoL. Lucky Bella :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and thank you so much for taking the time to review! xox
Reviewer: wifie_b (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2011 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 16
Great chapter. So glad to see all of the couples out together :). Edward and Bella are too cute and completely head over heels for each other. Can't wait to read more. Keep up the fantastic work :D!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 16
Hurray for update!! Thank you so much. That was both HOT & sweet. Best wishes!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2011 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 16
Whew! Round two was hotter than round one! I'm sure that they had the better morning out of all their friends! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for leaving a review! :) I think they had the best morning too. Although, you never know what Rose and Emmett had gotten up to before they arrived at the diner *wink* He did look AWFULLY tired :)
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2011 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 16
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2011 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 16
Loved the morning after! I need to find this Edward in real life because I want one for my own :) Keep the updates coming when you can :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the morning after :)
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