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Reviewer: CandyS216 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2011 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 9
Oh good grief....you're killing me!!!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2011 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 3
glad he didn't just drop the obvious attraction between them!
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2011 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 9
loving it! Made me hungry... Forgive the short review, i'm still catching up :-)
Reviewer: sundevil (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2011 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 12
Loved it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2011 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 8
Really enjoying your story - i'm sorry for not reviewing sooner! I decided to try it and got captivated and it's just soooo easy to push 'next'... but I promise to be a better reviewer since I have decided to be loyal and read the whole thing. Love this Bella! Confident but not pushy, sweet but not saccharine - thanks for a great story!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2011 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 2
she's about as dumb as a box of rocks.....how did Edward date that????
Reviewer: beachlover (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2011 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 12
Just when she was ready to give in Blocked
lovely story
Author's Response: Thank you! Blocked for now, but just wait :)
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2011 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
great beginning! damn that kiss was hot!!!
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2011 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 12
So glad that Renee is okay. I loved how everybody was so supportive of Bella at the hospital. Excellent chapter, can't wait to see what happens next. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I just couldn't find it in my hurt to seriously injure Renee. LoL.
Reviewer: wifie_b (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2011 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 11
That was dirty!! And not in a good way ;)!! Keep up the good work; can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: :) I just submitted Chapter 12 last night so it should be posted soon! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 11
i swear to the TWI-GODS! that you have the worst timing for these two, you know the general concensis for this kind of thing is not to have sex AT ALL!!! they will think it's cursed or something ...!!!!!! But hurry and update, i love reading this bed time story, that's not for me kids ... I dont think i've ever read to my hubby and you should think about having this one on mp3. that would rock!
LOVE MAC!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! Chapter 12 should be posted really soon!
Reviewer: beachlover (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2011 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 10
awwwwwe!
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2011 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 11
You are wicked.
Author's Response: *nods* Very! LoL. I hope you're enjoying the story, and thank you SO much for all of your reviews. They mean the world to me :) Chapter 12 is in the hands of my oh-so-talented betas as we speak, so it shouldn't be long til it's posted.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wow
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 3
Why must they be so difficult? Jasper and Ali, Rose and Em just seem to go with the flow.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 2
Didn't Edward just get there? Tanya is really unstable.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is a hellova first chapter. This is best first chapter I have read in a long time. That was some freaking chemistry.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 11
cliffie whore ;p
Author's Response: LoL! Wanna make me another banner? :) :) :)
Reviewer: twilight_illusion (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 11
I really like this so far! It's a shame they keep getting interrupted! I hope Bella's mom is okay!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story, thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Rogue Reviewer (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 11
Ahh, sigh... the typical cock-block. No offense to you and your cute little Britward, but that ending is so, SO overdone. I, personally, am really tired of it and if it's going to be a pattern in this story, I'm probably not going to keep an interest in it.
Don't get me wrong, this is not a "there should be a lemon in every chapter" comment. Not at all. It's just that the way you start one and then force a cliffie (well, you and 10,000 other fic writers out there) is an obvious ploy to get more reviews. ANd oh, look... it worked.
Anyway, best of luck to you. I'm sure there are tons of people who eat the cock-block crap up.
Rogue
Author's Response: Well, not much I can say to you, is there? I'm all for constructive criticism, but you really felt the need to add that last bit? I truly cannot stand passive aggressive comments, so please refrain from leaving any further reviews if that's all you want to say.
Reviewer: chellecameron (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 11
Really enjoying the story clify end to that chapter. Poor B & E they can't catch a break.
Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you for reviewing :)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 11
As much as I hate that they were cock-blocked, I have to say it was a great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. Excellent job. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Next chapter should be up fairly soon :)
Reviewer: archy (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 11
ah,that was good.satisfying,sweet,totally worth the wait.thank god you write long chapters!i must admit my favourite is the 2nd chapter somehow.first kiss and all.
i agree with your recs.i am already reading the 1st three,and all of them are good.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the story :)
Reviewer: Marrojeanne (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 2
So much fun to read. It seems the whole bleach in Tanyas hair also affected her abilty to think. She didn't get it, that she was unwelcome.
Really nice chapter..
Author's Response: LoL! Yeah, Tanya's not the sharpest tool in the shed. LoL. Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying the story! :)
Reviewer: Marrojeanne (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
That's a way to meet new people. Who wouldn't be in the place of Bella.
Alice tirade of loosing the opportunity to meet the hot guy was really funny, especially when said guy was standing behind her.
I am really curious, what will happen next, with bella and Edward and of course how Tanya will react. I can imagine, that she will throw a tantrum.
Although the reaction of Bella and Edward towards each other will also be intersting. Perhaps they have met/saw each other before.
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