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Reviewer: KimiD (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 10:57 PM · On: Inextricably Tied

Bonny~ that was GREAT!  I loved the APOV so many insights into that pixie mind.  I go along with you, she is much deeper than others give her credit, she has a reason for everything she does.  Her visions, like you said, show here things to anticipate and "dream" about.  She already loved bella before she met her. both her & in SM's book.  She is perpetually happy because she is always looking forward to the next "adventure" so to speak.  Loved her mind & yours.  KimiD

Reviewer: AubreyRose (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Inextricably Tied

Its interesting to read Alice's perspective about Edward and Bella's relationship, especially as shes a psychic.  I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: writegina2 (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2010 07:29 AM · On: Inextricably Tied

This was an interesting outtake. It was to good to see things from Alice's POV. I imagine it will become more important to see alternate POVs as the story progresses. :)

Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Inextricably Tied

I have really enjoyed reading both this out take and Lost Cause. Your writing style flows well and is enjoyable to read. I must admit Im a little confused about how and why Bella is the way she is however Im sure it will become clear as I read further. I look forward to your next chapters, both out takes and story



Author's Response:

Hi!  Thanks for the review.  I am happy you find my writing enjoyable.  The mystery about Bella's previous life will slowly come to surface. I just hope the reason isn't too thin in the end. I hope you the rest of the story.

 

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