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Reviewer: ohhcullenbabbii5 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

fucking amazing. I was waiting for that to happen. I thought that there would never be another chapter, but you came through!! Yaya.

And I deffinatly can't wait till the next one!

What's poor Emmett gunna do now? Stick to just Rosalie now? :)

 

Reviewer: asoulenchanted (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

i fucking love this so bloody much, cannot wait for more :D

Reviewer: hunnibunni210 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

YAY!

Reviewer: LadyOracle1 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Good chap!!! I love the ending.

Reviewer: bonz245 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Thank God!  Great chapter.  Thanks. 

Reviewer: BlueBerryKitten (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Awwww! It was about time these two pulled themselves together.

Thank's so much for the chapter ;)

Reviewer: Nielle (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

I fucking love this story, and I love you! Thank you so much for making my day! *sighs* I really wish we didn't have to wait so long for the next update, but as long as you keep this story alive I will keep a smile on my face as I patiently await the next chapter.

Until next time, I leave you with another 10. Love ya woman!

Reviewer: jbnns (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Sweet.. more please!

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!

Reviewer: 3crookedhearts (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Awwwwww! Loved it!

Reviewer: Elysia23 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

YESSS! *fist pump* lol. Great chapter as usual. :)

Reviewer: Genny (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Awwwwwww! I'm not sure there's really any other response to this chapter, is there? Seems like they both cracked, there at the end.

Reviewer: TrueLovEph28 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

It's about damn time! Those two are just infuriating sometimes! But I love it. They just needed to get it out there. Great chapter!!! Can't wait to see what you come up with for the next one!

~Rachel

Reviewer: VampiresHaveLaws (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

"I stared back at three freshmen skanks who were failing to work the bleached blonde, panda-eyed look, and instead just came across like they were in desperate need of a chemical wash, a tan and an exorcism." - I laughed so hard at that... just reading it again now is making me cry... exorcism, omg.

"I'm far too emotastic for that!" - I want that on a t-shirt. I need to find one.

I loved Bella basically flipping the bird to everyone by kissing Edward, it made me smile. I also want Jasper as my go-to man. He is awesome.

"I forese smut!" Why could Mystic Meg never say this? loll

Great chapter, looking forward to nekkid Edward next update - om nom. :)

Reviewer: FrancescaOCD (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

aaaawwwwwww..... ; )

I love you, that shit would have gnawed on me if they had kept it up!!! I think i was actually scowling at my lappy....

They don't really care anyway, so what?! Thanks for keeping it up a little longer...

 

Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

I was hoping Edward would go give her the kiss. Bella doing it was a twist! Take that Mike & Jessica!! Thanks for the chapter, Nancy

Reviewer: emilyw513 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Because you started it "Awwww". I thought he was gonna grab her first. For kicks, I'll say he goes caveman and pulls a "get your hands off my girlfriend dammit" move.

 

-Profitina

Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

awwww, very cute

Reviewer: karene (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

*squeals*!!!! lol i hope this is not one of their imagination, because this chapter ending was fantastic! lol

loool she elbowed Emette in the nuts and Edward didn't see it?

Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Oh yay!  It's about damn time with these two!

Reviewer: SabrielBlack (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

yay!! my crappy day at work just got better!  makes me wanna go back to school and find some jerk to make a stupid bet with and fall crazy mad in love with! ugh

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

AT least they are starting to see how things goes now if they just would give into their feelings and tell each other how they truly feel about one another it might go a little smoother.

Reviewer: twicrack83 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

awwwww is right! so glad they made a scene! it was a long time coming. imma thinking edward will crack first, but that's just me. bella's too stubborn and when edward wants something bad enough, no one can stand in his way. can't wait for the update! love BDR!!!

Reviewer: michangelina (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

well thank the fuck for that!! Awesome chapter.. I am so glad that Edward decided to man up.. I don't want it to be the ending I want so much more you totally rock!! Please continue..

Reviewer: jarielynn (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Yeah, Bella!! The girls always have to make the first move- gesh! Jasper should have hit Edward a littel harder to knock more sense into him. I loved it! Ans thank god for Jas and the kiss because my thought were exactly the same as his. WHat are they waiting for? Who cares what people think? And coe on announce it already!

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