Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
wow! that was amazing! i totally forgot Alice was having a flashback and telling Bella what happened... now where is Edward? what has he been up to? curious to see how the date with Jacob goes and what happens between Edward and Bella because of it..
Reviewer: jennifermarie (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
So now I believe we are up to where we left off at ffnet, I can't wait until the next chapter!!
Reviewer: jessicasheehan (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Go forth and dry hump? LOL That was hilarious. Another great chapter.
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Great update! Is she going to see Edward now?
Oh, btw, the old banner was better.
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Two words -Cruel & Inhuman. You know I'm dying for info on the d**khead Edward and nothing! Please post soon or I'm be crabby to my family and they won't know why.
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
great chapter love to see the new alice and jasper but i am still pissed at alice, even as a BFF she should have cared about bella when she knew what was going on. Cant wait for the next chapter. love this story, cant wait to see edwards point of view
Reviewer: gabys (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Amazing chapter as always.
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
I'm so pissed that those jealous bitches got you and so many others pulled off of FF.net It's so silly and childish. But I'm glad you were here already and I can keep reading your story. So the haters didn't win. I signed the petition and spread the word to other authors who stories I was reading. I saw what Kstew 411 wrote as well. I didn't know that there is this group that goes after FF authors. But they only go after the ones who write real person FF and something else. So they claim they didn't go after y'all. And I didn't think or know that FF.net needed hits to get paid. So that is real stupid to get rid of y'all if your story is getting a lot of hits. They are the ones suffering more. But I guess they feel they can lose a few and still get a lot of money coming in. Ignorant bastards. Whatever. The fans aren't going to let them or those heifers who turned y'all in to win. We run this and not them. It's more who love it than hate it. I hope that more just get off their lazy butts and review more. Show the sites that the story is wanted. Good luck bb. I have your back.
~Shani
Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
nice few chapters... mm, wonder where eddie went lol
Reviewer: Morbidmuch (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
Great story, update soon
Reviewer: nonetocare (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
ohhh , please keep going !
I`m dying to know whats gonn a happen :D
you are an amazing writer , congratulations
Reviewer: Ladyrose (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
again...loved it. Angsty goodness!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
Lack of smut made me sad, but still can't wait for the next update and whatnot about Alice/Jasper!
Keep up the great work!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: gojeannie (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
Folowed you here from ffn. So glad this story is continuing here. Sorry to hear about all the drama that went down over at ffn. You are terrific and this story is so hot and so lovely all at the same time. Keep right on doing what you're doing, you're putting a smile on a lot of people's faces. :)
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
Well Jazz and Alice are out now and I wonder what Edward thought when he came back home and there was no Bella?
Reviewer: MissWerewolf (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 1- Local God
You got this off of Lady Gaga's song Beautiful, Dirty, Rich didnt you? Smart...
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
can't wait for more
Reviewer: kissyfur (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
Finally, next chapter brings it up-to-date! I hope we don't have to wait too long for an "actual" update now--sometimes chapters have to wait a LONG time for validation here. Drat those FFN tattletales!
Reviewer: jasam4ever19 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
I love this. Please update soon. Although I hope Edward isn't as much of a douche as he seems right now. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing.
Reviewer: maserati (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
Great chapter. I'm wondering now where Edward went? Surely he didn't just go with no intention of returning to her? Please tell me it isn't so. They were just on the brink of something really good. Thanks so much for writing such a good story.
Reviewer: maggiemay82 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
So good!! I was wondering if Esme would make an appearence in this story! Keep up the great work! I can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: n2tatz (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
UGH! I hate waiting! LOL Where the hell did Edward go? I was waiting for him to walk through the door the whole time she was talking to Carsile. Alice should have told her about Jasper.
Reviewer: Nielle (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
W-O-W. I cannot believe he just left her! WTF! lol. Love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter! Another 10 for you my dear.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
great chapter! update soon!!
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
thanks so much for the quick update...but now im sad/anxious about whats gonna happen next...Edward just left Bella there again? I thought he changed...and Jasper confessing his love? hmmmm....so much to explain and discover whats gonna to happen....nice chapter full of angst..lol
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