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Reviews For The Lucky Charm
Reviewer: EdwardsLife (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi! I was just curious if there were plans to finish this story?

Reviewer: BrownEyedGirl15 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2011 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 3

Are you guys gonna update? I really love this story and I hope you continue it.

Reviewer: gwilliamson (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 3

I just came across this story and think it is one of the better one's i've read.  I checked the last date it was updated and saw it was in December.  Please don't give up on this it is really good.

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great story... you guys are amazing writers and I am so enjoying your Bella and Edward.. even cocky Jasper.  Looking forward to the next update... keep up the great job!

Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 3

Please update when you can....This is a fantastic story!!! :0)

Reviewer: mrsmitchell (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 3

I love this story so much, please update it soon!!

Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 3

The story keeps getting better! Great job!

Reviewer: bebe5975 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 3

ahhhh IM SO HAPPY you updated it!!! :) I cant wait for more :) please hurry!!

Reviewer: Katrela (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 3

OMG I can't wait to go to Texas!


Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 3


Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 2

I am glad you didn't have her sleep with him at this point - I can't stand stories where they meet and screw the same day and then end up being in love --- yeah, that is so reality (rolling eyes),

Great writting

I think Jasper needs to find Alice LOL to tame that wild boy

Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 3

Is Charlie Bellas father in this story? That cou;d make things interesting!

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 3

What's with the cockblocking you two?  That's a bit unfair.  I was all worked up and anticipating a bit of shmexing and you pull the plug.  I'm glad Bella's decided to just go with it and see what happens.  It should be interesting.

I'm an Aussie and not really that familiar with baseball.  I have watched it before but I don't understand it so I'm struggling with some of the terms, but I'll manage, I'm sure.  Now, if you were writing a story on the NFL I'd be fine.  I love that game and have been following it for years and years which is not always easy from over here.

Thanks again for your fun story.


Reviewer: bosoxgirl3358 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 3

Awesome, as usual.  I like how you touched up on the Manny stuff. I was heartbroken when Ortiz was named as one of the 104 players that tested positive for PED's in 2003.  It didn't really take away from 2004 for me because over half of the Yankee roster was on them too, as were the Cards.  But it was still hard!


The only criticism that I have is the note at the begining.  Tito doesn't have any power over who is signed.  That would be Theo and the ownership. They offered Bay a 4 year/60 mil deal which should be enough. But Jason wants to test the market.  I'm not sure that he'll get more money but he may get more years which might be what he wants.  Sorry about the tangent!

Keep up the great work, gals.

Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 3

God I love the intensity between them!!! Bring on Texas!!! ;0)

Reviewer: spacecadet81 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

As a born and breed Red Sox Fan I have to say I love your story idea!!!! And despite how badly our team did at the end of this season I am going to love reading more of your story.

Reviewer: amandatory (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 2

aw man!

you're gonna finish this right?

ha! cos i love this thing

even though all my knowledge of baseball and the redsox was obtained from george costanza

haha god bless seinfeld.

god bless you lol.

well, fuck.

Reviewer: AuroraJean (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 2

holy shit this is good!! :D

Reviewer: xgemini6990x (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 2

No seriously. Well, fuck.

Reviewer: marvar (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

Love it.  Baseballward is hottttt.  I want to collect his jersey.

Reviewer: bebe5975 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 2

hot hot hottttt

Reviewer: Katrela (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 2

Well who knew just kissing someone could be so hot!  Poor Edward! Loving the story!


Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

Damn you guys are good!!! Loved the door slamming...Way to keep Sexward waiting!!! Loved it!!! Can't wait for more..;0)

Reviewer: ikss (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 2

Well, I have to admit that, as a fan of the ANGELS I am not at all upset about how the season is ending...however, will continue to root for your guys here because this story is just oodles of fun! :)

Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start, ladies! As a huge baeball and huge Edward fan, I can't wait to see what you have in store!

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