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Reviewer: Cloudie day (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Out in the Open

You made me wait entirely too long!! :( But you updated and I am happy now :) I LOVE LOVE your story and its only beginning... I can't wait until it gets really good.

Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Out in the Open

Hell no they can't fake him out hes a mind reader. Jaspers thoughts will give it away as soon as Edward is in hearing range. And as soon as he finds Bella or Jasper he'll smell them on each other. This will not end well. Edward will not be as wonderful as Alice. I know that in Eclipse he was all chivilrous and what not but I doubt hes really gonna let it happen like that. I guess I'll find out soon enough. Loooove it.

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Out in the Open

bring on the next chapter........I can't wait for the "reunion"........lol

Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Out in the Open

:)

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Out in the Open

Of course they can't fake him out. My guess is that they will try and think that he is leaving, but Edward will double back and catch them. It will be just like Alice's dream. I can't wait to see if I am right.

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Home is Where the Heart is

Alice is sounding a little bitter. I am enjoying your story. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Slip and Fall

I thought this was going to turn ugly but then you pulled back from it. I am looking forward to seeing how it plays out.

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Home is Where the Heart is

so. i was feeling all lovey-dovey for jasper and bella (by the way, this is the first bxj story that i didn't feel uncomfortable reading) when BAM! alice pov! great chapter - i look forward to the next post.

Reviewer: twicharmed (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Home is Where the Heart is

this is really good! although, i can't imagaine alice leaving jasper so easily. i can't wait to read what happens.

Reviewer: GreatEscape (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Home is Where the Heart is

Oh dear, the idea of a jealous ALice scares me. And the plot thickens...Great Chapter! Horse back riding is so romantic! Kissing against a tree afterward is so sexy! Good stuff here, good stuff.

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Home is Where the Heart is

Great chapter! I can't wait to see where things are heading for these two. The kiss was super hot. I feel bad for Alice, but honestly, she left Jasper, so she needs to get over it. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: tsarcasm (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Home is Where the Heart is

Wow, this is really intriguing. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Cloudie day (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Home is Where the Heart is

What time of year are they visiting texas? its not always sunny! but unless its winter it is always hot. Most of this summer we didnt see the sun we saw only rain... for several weeks straight! BUT STILL LOVED LOVED THE CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: debs2crazy (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Home is Where the Heart is

Wow, Alice is really bitter. I dont know why she left in the first place, she has always been able to change the future in the past.

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Scary

Great chapter! Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: GreatEscape (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Scary

Oh No! I've been waiting to catch up with Alice and Edward! I wonder what will happen! Is Alice going to go back to Jasper? I'm glad Jasper and Bella have admitted their feelings though and now that Edward is on his way, I'm things are about to get very interesting...

Reviewer: Cloudie day (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Scary

AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!! ;p ah drama! i love it!!!

Reviewer: debs2crazy (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Scary

Ooh my, why doesnt Alice try to stop them from falling in love. I know she loves him and wants him to be happy, but it seems like she brought this on herself.

Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Scary

Oh dear I see a smack down in the near future???? LOL Ummm I can't wait for more. This is great!!!

Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Surprises

Talk about the truth shall set you free. Being pissed and letting those emotions out can make a world of difference too, That I cna vouch for. i am proud of them and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Baby Steps

LOL the boy is too damn cute for his own good....duh. Like she would not fantisize about him. He was there being nice to her, being a friend. i don't blame her I'd fantsize too. LOL

Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Heal Me

How sweet. I am glad that he maned up and told her the truth. She needed to know and he needed to tell her. For both of their sakes I hope this works and that Eddie doesn't wig when he finds out.

Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Slip and Fall

Poor bells never gives up. In this case though I think that's a good thing. I luv Ali but I like them this way or the way I am hoping this is going.

Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Stay with Me

Wow... intence. I am happy that he calmed his thoughts but I still worry he might slip and I would have a problem with that, like I count. LOL I am anxious to see what he decides and if ALi tries to stop him.

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Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:21 PM · On: The Accident

OMG! Stupid much???? I luv me some Jazz but he is about to bite off more than he can chew and I like it. Bells watch yourself. LOL

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