wow..i am glad that they talked and i am glad that edward realized he was turning into his father

ouch...atleast bella didnt see or hear the gory tanya fucking,,,poor edward,,,but i think he gets it..what she went through....but bella may be going a bit far with the punishing,, as much as i would be upset i couldnt hurt someone i love like that....i think that poor mike needs jessica lol he needs someone good to love him...he seems cool

lovin it so far,,,

i think he should remain a bit cocky but i wanted to cry when his dad treated them like helll...he should legally have to give his kids money either way...dammit i felt so bad when edward said at 8 he just wanted a hug or something nice said to him..that is sad

i seriously hope some guys hit on bella and she doesnt even acknowledge edward ,..for real this freakin time....he needs to work for her,,,,dont get me wrong,..love edward and bella and want a happy ending,,,,but he better fucking work for it!!! hardcore...and that bitch tanya needs a asskicking,,,what girl would admit to a threesome in front of strangers.,,,does she realize she sounds like a whore?

oh my god!!

she needs to act a liitle more aloof

I couldnt put this down once I started reading it last night.  At 4:30am I finally gave in and got some sleep but I have read most of the day today to finish it.  I just last week finished another cocky prickward fic that ended up with his notorious ways changing the moment he meets bella.  Didn't think I would like to go straight into another one but I just couldn't stop.  Strange!!!  So all in all I really enjoyed reading your wonderfully written fic and Im anxious to see what else you have written if any!  Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing your fic and your talent with us readers who wish they had a smidgen of that gift!!  Wonderful addictive story!

Hugs, stephanie

Hello. I'm a bit of a lurker on this site, but I wanted to pop in and recognize your fic because it absolutely deserves it. Your writing voice is easy and unique and flowed perfectly with the tone of your story. You had me hooked from the first chapter, after which I proceeded to read the entire story over the past three days even though I've been working a crap-ton of overtime and it's finals week at my U. I think I've reviewed maybe two other stories in the past but I just had to let you know that I think your story brilliant, and that you have the most superbly written secondary characters (in Mike and Mrs, Mallory) that I have ever read in FF. Kudos to you for being original and doing it well!

Such a sweet closure.  I am sad now, but still happy.  Loved, loved, loved ths story!  Thanks again!

This was a cute story. I loved all the characters.... really like Rose and Jasper's bond

great story - i like how you incorporate characters that no one really likes with a positive spin.

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