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Reviewer: theswissmiss (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Drawing Limits
I can't believe this story is almost over! I don't want it to end- ever!!! I have been following since I believe chapter....6?
Can we expect any sequels? I don't think I can live without updates on the lives of this crew :)
And, I can assure you I too will be crying when I finish the last chapter- this fic has me totally "whipped", if that makes any sense :)
Reviewer: 2loveybunnies (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Drawing Limits
Wow, I can't believe their father would be such as ass! Well, yes I can, but why on earth do they put up with that? He wants to be challenged and Rosalie was the only one who stood up to him. You could tell by his reaction he knew she would not be backing down.
THe skipe sex scene was interesting - damn, wish there was a video of that! This chapter seemed to be one that moved things along, I miss the personal contact between Edward and Bella though. I hope you'll give us a nice lemon to send them off!
Loved this story and looking forward to what you might write next!
XOXO,
Lori
Reviewer: cruiz107 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Juicy Fruit
I think this is one of my favorite chapter too.
Jeez...eight people?!?
Reviewer: cruiz107 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Juicy Fruit
I think this is one of my favorite chapter too.
Jeez...eight people?!?
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Drawing Limits
Wow that father of Edward and Emmett is a total asshole isn't he. What a prick!
I am so glad that the boys stood up for themselves but I feel very very sorry for them too!
Reviewer: Sarah_Edwards (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 03:47 AM · On: Drawing Limits
smoke weed??? is that normal? hahahahaha aside from that you did an awesome job with this story, love it.
Reviewer: cruiz107 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:39 PM · On: Catharsis
NOOOO.....NoT MIKE!!!
Reviewer: kaylamarieswan (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Drawing Limits
emmett sr. is a dick. you refered to him as edward sr., though in this sentence; 'When I turn back to Edward Sr. the anger has evaporated, and he's staring at the empty space in front of him.'
Reviewer: jrbirdy (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Drawing Limits
loved it
Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Drawing Limits
Fantastic!!! Edward Sr made me really sad. What a motherfucker. You have to wonder what Esme ever saw in him.
Poor Emmett and Edward.
Holy Skype sex!!! HAWT!
Reviewer: Livie (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Drawing Limits
This chapter tore me up, I can't imagine what it must be like for you as the writer to see it coming to a close. I have enjoyed every single chapter of this story and am so sad that the ride is almost over. You know those stories where there is that one line that you remember well after the story is finished and put away? Like The Submissive with "turpentine", or Hide and Drink with the line "You are no longer welcome in my family." Well you have left a mark with me with your own gut dropping line, actually it's a couple of lines, but you get my meaning.
Chapter 7-
“Oh my god. You fucked her. Now? Here? Didn’t you?” I hate the sound of my voice. It’s high and shaky, when I need it to be strong.
He just fucking stands there.
“I thought…” I start and he turns to face me. His eyes are dead, but he’s smirking. I feel like someone is stabbing me in the heart.
“I told you I was a prick.”
I leave the next day.
And I cried like a baby, great job with this fic, I can't wait to read future stories from you!
Reviewer: cruiz107 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Fried Chicken and Chainsaws
I like the style of writing. I'm not sure what you would call it but it's like she is reading from her diary or book that she has written about the past. The story is very interesting so far even though I'm only on the first chapter. I also like how you mixed up character relationships..as long as canon couples remain :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Drawing Limits
hard to believe this is coming to an end
Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 06:12 PM · On: Drawing Limits
Very but nice. Hate for this to end, then all good things must.
Reviewer: busyreading (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Drawing Limits
It's over already??? Aww, can't it go on a little longer??? Please?
I love these guys!! I want to know how the baby is and how Emmett is
as a dad, and when B and E get married and have their kids...etc.
C'mon.....you know you want to.....:)
I just love this story and hate to see it end.....
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Drawing Limits
They faced down the beast and they made it. I think that it is for the best in the long run. I loved the video chat. Modern technology is just wonderful isn't it. Looking forward to the next chapter. It is a shame that it will be the last one. I have really enjoyed this story.
Reviewer: Kay Maria (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Drawing Limits
I can't believe it's ending! This chapter was great and I love how you wrote the interaction with their dad!
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Wherever you go, there you are.
I think he's moved on from Prickward to Idiotward. tbh.
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 02:54 PM · On: Stranger Danger
No! Ok, not surprised, but big BOOOO! to Edward, all the same.
Despite my annoyance at your Edward, I am enjoying this very much.
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 02:43 PM · On: Slippery When Wet
I don't think this is going to end well....
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 02:25 PM · On: PBR and Pills
I have never found a hangover cure that works for me, I just go with puking until I wish I was dead, then sleeping with my head in the toilet bowl.
Yeah, why do I drink again...?
Oh, Edward's such a turd. Why did my mate tell me to read this...? Liking the imagery of the cabin though, I wish I was there.
Reviewer: deliac (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 09:04 AM · On: The Snap
OMG I started this story last night at 10:30 and didn't go to sleep unitl I was DONE! This is a great story and Thank you! I love it and I cant wait for the next update! I hate to see it end!
Reviewer: angelchicken (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 07:09 PM · On: The Snap
This is SO wonderful and I don't want it to end, but it seems like it's headed towards a perfect ending so it's okay, but I will still miss it. I just read the whole thing today. It made my day.
Thank you for sharing such a fantastic story!
Reviewer: 2loveybunnies (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 01:28 AM · On: The Snap
He wants to marry me.
Reviewed over on FF, but I always check here to see if you're updating faster here. I know, that never happens! Oh, well, this line slays me... damn! Hurry fast, I need more!
XOXO,
Lori
Reviewer: RiRi (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 10:36 PM · On: The Snap
Awww...I am glad Em and Rose worked it out and are moving in together. I am bummed this is coming to an end though!
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