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Reviews For A Kiss- One Shot
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

 I liked the story.. I wish that Bella had more totally understood whether or not Edward Liked the kiss...Maybe if he smiled or there had been more conversation about it. I did like that he was concerned about her feelings though.

Reviewer: ctfan (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed your short story!

Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

nice

Reviewer: scarlett71177 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

So lovely.  This piece has that same feeling as Twilight when their relationship was so new and playful.  *sigh*

Nice job!

Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

Awe, this was a sweet a story. I like it. :-)

Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was awesome!  You did an incredible job for such a one-shot, quick piece.  The way you described the kiss was amazing - loved when he first opens his mouth and when he picks her up.  Also loved how you descibed their usual kisses - not quite pecks on the lips, but growing in intensity.  Well done!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very cute!  And very in canon-Edward both eager and reticent in the same breath!

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