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Reviewer: Jessie (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2013 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

did edward die?

Reviewer: kbaby (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 22

Ok, you can't leave me hanging like that!!!!!!!!! What happens next???? Please finish soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 16

I think I rather liked this conversation better when it was just the two of them in Bella's bedroom.

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 14

The wole Cullen Family's in Volterra.  So Demetri is Lazzaro's uncle.   I love how he helped the Cullens get safe in graditude for Bella not telling Aro about his nephew.

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 13

Horray for Demetri!!!  wonder way he's helping Edward & Bella.  Never expected Emmett to be the one to open the door.

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 12

OOOOO Aro is evil!!!!!!!!!! Its seeing that he's not a push over. I really curious about that last part though.

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 11

Poor Edward and Bella. I like what you did with Aro, with him not taking no for an answer.

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 10

Poor Edward, not  wanting Bella anywhere near the Volturi!

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 9

This is so fascinating! I'm dying to know what Demetri was thinking!

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 8

AHHH. I labsolutely love how she healed just hearing hearing Edward say  that he was alive!.  Thanks goodness Carlisle is there.

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 7

OOOOOO ! So he's not completely dead yet! Can't wait to see how this All plays out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 5

Bella' friend Lazzaro is quite smart!

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 2

I really like  how Lazzaro offered to help Bella even though he's human and at risk. I also loved Carlisle's letter. He is an amazing character!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Forbidden_Romance (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 22

I read all the chapters up till now.. And i thought this story is wonderful.. Please update soon. I want to know what will happen between bella and the rest of the Cullen Family.

Reviewer: glowing bookworm (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 22

I can't wait until you update!

Reviewer: vampire_pixie_17 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 22

ohmygod. wow Jax. u have come a long way. i miss u, but u probably dont remember me. im sorry. anyways, great story!!!! it'd be great if u could update the story ASAP!!!!

Reviewer: stargrl678 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 22

don't levae us hanging fot too long!! and I hope that you write a little bit about Bella in FL and what she is thinking. Please post more soon!!!

Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 21

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh my God, there must be an update.  NOW.

Reviewer: Stephanie090303 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

You have an amazing talent that has not gotten unoticed, I look forawrd to your next chapter and your fututre projects.

 

Thank you,

 Stephanie

Reviewer: Sydney (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 22

UR THE ONE THATWROTE IT SO U WOULD KNOW DUH!!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: Stephanie090303 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 22

Loved it, cannot wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: hislife (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

This story is great!  I can't wait for more.  I am happy that Edward is looking at Bella as more of an equal and told her the whole truth.  Keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 22

Great job...her pain was real and I enjoyed reading this chapter.

Reviewer: lovealways567 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 22

You rock...Big time!  I have to say, I was just as disappointed with Stephenie's ending in New Moon in which Bella gave in so easily.  I'm not criticizing Stephenie's writing.  She's a brilliant writer, but that part-I don't know.  It just didn't resonate with me.  Your ending, I absolutely love.  Keep writing!  I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: New-moon-rising (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 22

I love this story loads its absolutly fantastic.

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