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Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 17
I want Edward to show up at my door with flowers :) Where can I find one? lol
Author's Response: LOL Thanks for the review. One Edward coming up! (I wish! lol)
Reviewer: Kiwibeme (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 17
Ok...so the shower was hot! And yes, nervous Edward is adorable and totally jumpable. =)
Author's Response: Thanks! :D LOL
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 17
they are so cute.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 17
if only he would...lol
Author's Response: LOL Thanks. I know, right? ;)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 17
I think this is the best chapter by far.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! :) More soon!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 17
Here you go! Where is my red Edward rose???? (Actually, I would prefer a tulip.) Actually, though, I would like what you wrote about E: "I went to the bedroom, stripped naked and jumped in the shower." Whoo-hoo! Just give me some Edward / Showerward time!
Alice is too much! I love her! Let's see her, and the rest of the famitly, more and more, please!
Edward and flowers: Bella will be falling HARD!
I can't wait for the date! I wonder if you will borrow from the book or movie???
Please update soon! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: LOL Thanks! Edward will be there soon with a tulip, just in time for your shower. ;)
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 17
Awww I want a man like Edward. *sigh* The flowers were a nice touch.
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Reviewer: Cathitina (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 17
Love the story and I can't wait for their date!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 17
it was short... but very sweet
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 17
He is sooo perfect!!! And with him being nervous just adds to his charm... Let's get on with the date, shall we.....
Author's Response: The next chapter is full of date! :D
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 17
i'd liek dinner and flowers form edward please and can i shower with him too!!!
Author's Response: LOL Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. ;)
Reviewer: biddyswife (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 17
Love this chapter, nervous Edward is so cute. The romance in this chapter is just right. Loved shower Edward more though. Mmm naughty Edward! It would have been embarrassing if Alice had burst in earlier!! Yes, please I'd love him to visit me with a single red rose!
Author's Response: LOL Thanks! He's on his way. *laugh*
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 11
I liked both of their reactions to the kiss.
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 10
That was a great chapter. I liked how everyone were so easy together and that Edward and Bella talked about her life and her family. I know they've only known each other a short time but Edward should ask Bella out on a date soon.
Author's Response: You'll get to that soon! ;) Thanks!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 9
I stripped off my clothes and climbed naked between the sheets. Thanks for the lovely visual. Oh, and I liked the rest of the chapter too.
Author's Response: ROFLMAO Thanks. ;)
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 8
I hate wrong numbers in general but dream cockblocking calls are the worst.
Edward seems to be available for anything where Bella is concerned, even dream sexin'. I think it's sweet that he's so helpful and was not insulted when Ben talked to him.
Author's Response: LOL I know, right? Thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 7
I had to laugh at Ben getting all Dad with Bella.
Author's Response: LOL Thanks. :D
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 6
Wow! Bella literally fell into Edward's arms and she's going to cook him dinner, YAY! Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 5
It was citrusy good.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 4
The furniture sounds really nice. You have good taste.
It's funny how enthusiastic Alice and Rose are about finding a girlfriend for Edward.
Author's Response: Thank you. I had fun virtually shopping. haha Thanks for your reviews!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 3
I'm glad Bella's excitement is back. It's contagious.
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 2
I'd have felt more like a Peeping Tom than I already did.... He just can't help himself.
Happy/sad for Bella. However, If she's going to meet Alice well, she's at least three friends on her own.
Bella is sad and lonely and you can feel the emotion coming from her. I like where this is going.
Author's Response: LOL Yeah, Bella will have all the friends she needs. :)
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
"She's beautiful," I whispered, ...awww. - so cute. I love finding stories like this with 16 chapters to read.
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 17 will be up soon, too. :)
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 16
LoL...OMG Alice is definalty a force to be reckoned with. I do believe her heart is in the right place, but god lord Alice does scare me. I can't wait to hear about the girls day out. Please update soon...
Author's Response: Thanks! More soon. :)
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 15
*Happy dance time!!*
Whohoo they kissed! I'll bet Edward had a bit of a problem when he went back home...lol Bella definalty floated off to bed, can't say I blame the girl...
Author's Response: LOL Thanks! Much more kissing coming up. ;)
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