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Reviewer: JSmith9192 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 21
Hello, update? Getting impatient here!
Author's Response: Sorry! I have a lot of uh, stuff, going on in real life right now, and just don't have the time or energy to write. I promise, I'll try and kick my muse's butt into gear soon! :)
Reviewer: froggyqueen (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 9
ummm Edward......sleeping naked? *drool*
Author's Response: Hehehehe I know, right?!
Reviewer: froggyqueen (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 1
i like it so far!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 21
How generous of Edward to not expect Bella to reciprocate. I hope she returns the favor.
Author's Response: Hehehe Baby steps, yes? :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 21
hmmm.....yum
Author's Response: LOL Thanks. :)
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 21
That was cool of Rose to show up and help out on the first day. Liked the progress that Edward and Bella made.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 21
I love the little girl even if she was in here briefly. I'm a sucker for cute little kids. And damn...hot and heavy. That's what I'm talking about. Finally some of the sexual tension has been lifted lol
Author's Response: Hehehe Thank you! :D
Reviewer: Kiwibeme (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 21
Ok, that was hot and oh so romantic! I love when he cut her off and said "That was incredible to watch" and then thanked her. Kinda tugged my heart strings! =)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 21
speed up? meaning you'll post tomorrow? just kidding....looking forward to the next one
Author's Response: LOL Nope, but they will get more action soon. ;) Thanks for the review. :)
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 21
well thank you. This was probably a rare story where 'bella' doesn't offer to 'return the favor'. Nice change. Thank you.
Author's Response: Hehehe Nah, I liked how I had it ending. I thought about it, but it just didn't seem very in character for my Edward, especially. :) Thanks!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 21
A+
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 21
Nice opening day for Bella's shop. Rose coming to help her was nice as was the flowers and lunch. Of course you saved the best for last and that was a very pleasant surprise. I can't wait to enjoy more of their romance.
Author's Response: Hehehe Thank you!
Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 21
Opening day was a succes all over......Bella opened her store and Edward opened Bella!! LOL Nicely done...
Author's Response: ROFLMAO Oh My God. LOL Thanks. ;) haha
Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 21
Yay for a good opening day! And some action. ^-^
They're so cute together! <3
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 21
Very sweet of Rose to join her for her grand opening. The flowers were beautiful both from Angela and Ben as well as Edward's. Adored his note on the car. Rose is right he just oozes romance with every word, action, and moan. Truly the best of all worlds. Bringing in lunch and helping her the rest of the afternoon and then dinner to celebrate. Already having a date to attend the family Friday dinner. Edward seemed to be a little surprise at what developed between them on the couch. Not that he was complaining. He seemed to enjoy it thoroughly. Bella did as well. the two of them are getting along great with each other. Looking forward to the furthre exploits of their romance in the following chapters.
Author's Response: Thank youvery much. :)
Reviewer: withherownwings (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 21
Finally! Some almost-lemons! Great chapter. I can feel how much these two care for each other. I can't wait for the next update!
-Sara
Author's Response: LOL Yup, finally. ;) More soon, I promise. *grin*
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 21
Oh, I think Bella has some reciprocating to do! I don't think she could have asked for a better opening day!
Author's Response: LOL Thank you. :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 20
I had to laugh at bossy Bella! And how Edward was smart enough not to comment! They had a very long day together, and it seems as though they won't mind spending more time together-maybe intimately!
Author's Response: Hahaha Yeah. I loved writing the unpacking & stuff. :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 21
Great chapter!
Everything about it was excellent! Great job!
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Reviewer: biddyswife (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 21
Wow that was great. Loved the fact that Rose came to help her. Edward is such a romantic. Flowers and lunch, then dinner? Wow. And couch time with Edward yummy, lucky Bella. Can't wait for more.... hugs Clare x
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 21
So they are falling in love with each other. *sigh* That is perfect! i hope they tell each other soon!
I loved the flowers and that the opening day went well.
That citrus was hot, too!
Keep up the good writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it. Things will be becoming much more clear to them both soon, and they will get a bit more action, I promise. ;)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 19
Once again, you are making me hungry! If you really have a recipe for homemade tomato soup I'd love to have it! So, they are really very comfortable with each other. Almost as if they have known each other for a long time. I think Bella should send some red daffodils to Edward!
Author's Response: I had a link to the soup, but I can't find it! LOL I'll see if I can find it again and let you know! :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 18
Sigh. Such a gentleman! I'm going to bet that Bella has some good dreams tonight!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 17
Will he magically show up in my shower instead? Whew! He can be both sweet and romantic, and confident and a little dirty! Can't wait to see how the rest of the date goes!
Author's Response: Hehehehe That's Edward: sweet, romantic, confident and dirty. LOL I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 16
It's very heartwarming that Bella was accepted so quickly by Rose and Alice. They certainly couldn't make it easier for Bella to get together with Edward!
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