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Reviews For As the Sun Rises
Reviewer: OCDvampire (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 06:45 PM · On: As the Sun Rises (One-Shot)

Lovely. I swayed from Bella to Edward and back again until I stuck on the narrator being Bella, only to get Edward!!! Very emotional!

Reviewer: Natty_K (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 08:35 PM · On: As the Sun Rises (One-Shot)

Holy F*ck! I always just assume the pov was from Bella...I was shocked to my bones when Jasper said "Edward" LOL....Anyway good story!

Reviewer: laylak (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 02:28 AM · On: As the Sun Rises (One-Shot)

Great great one-shot!!!! I was in a trance reading it praying I would never reach the end.  I loved it.

Author's Response:

What an awesome review!  I'm so glad you liked it!  


Thanks for reading & reviewing!  =)

Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 04:05 AM · On: As the Sun Rises (One-Shot)

This is one of the best one shots I have ever read.  It is absolutely beautiful.  I get chills when I read it.  Very, very well done.  The frustration the narritor feels and the heartache Jasper suffers just tears at me.  The descriptions are fantastic.  And the end is oh so sweet.  It fits so well with the song.  Lovely no more can be said.

Author's Response:

{{{hugs}}} bb!

Reviewer: overthetoplessness (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 03:06 AM · On: As the Sun Rises (One-Shot)

i loved how perfect that went with the song. it's my first time reading a male/slash knowing that it was a slash, so i'm still kinda weirded out, imean it's not that i;m a homophobe, ya know, its just that im weirdly protective over certain couples when i get my mind frame around them so at the moment Edward can only be with Bella while bella can alternate between jasper Alice Emmett and leah, call me a hypocrit, i own up to it, its just how my mind works. i couldn't explain it even if i wanted to 

Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you enjoyed how I worked the song in there. 

If you're interested in a more traditional Edward/Bella pairing, I actually have a multi-chaptered fic going up.  You should check it out.  =)

Thank you so much for reading & reviewing!  =)

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