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Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 11:30 AM · On: Once Bitten, Twice Shy
Oh, that was PAINFULLY delicious!!! I love how you compared his look to the one he gave her in Biology the first day - ouch! AWESOME chapter!!!
Reviewer: Mkystich (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 11:20 AM · On: Once Bitten, Twice Shy
That's one bad ass momma!
Reviewer: DreaC (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 11:20 AM · On: Once Bitten, Twice Shy
Look at Bella trying to be a bad ass! At least she didn't try to be all "oh edward I love you forget her and be with me crap." And I'm so glad that Edward wasn't a sappy do whatever Bella wants puppy that would leave just because she asked. He better hold his ground. Emma has rubbed off on him and he's truly changed since he was with Bella! I have to give it to them, they are definitely not the people they were twenty years ago! And that bit with Jacob I absolutely loved how he said he missed her, and he how he didn't press her for info. That's a very Jake thing to do. Though it pains me to say...I feel bad for Bella too, but she has to see that her little "plan" would only make Emma end up like her so many years ago. She isn't thinking this plan through correctly. She isn't thinking of how it's going to hurt Emma! She's just thinking of how much she wants him gone. That was an amazing meeting that I'm happily surprised is going to continue! I absolutely can't wait till she meets up with the family! Amazing job, as always!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Once Bitten, Twice Shy
WOOP WOOP!
I want Bella to like somehow kick Edward's ass... when he said he was glad i was all like, oh heellll no bitch! You better keep these chapters coming darlin or i think i won't make it
Reviewer: Jenny P (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 11:16 AM · On: Once Bitten, Twice Shy
She should stop by the bookstore and pickup a Danielle Steele for Esme...you know, just in case. I have a feeling it's going to be a long night. Grown up, putting on her big girl panties, ready to kick Cullen ass Bella is my new favorite thing. Although, I do sort of feel sorry for her. She seems so desperate...not just for her daughter, but for herself.
Yet again you have blown me the eff away. Would it be awkward if gave you the key to my place? (Don't mind my husband, he's just there to pay the bills.)
Reviewer: ddot (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 11:13 AM · On: Once Bitten, Twice Shy
ok......i hated edward in the beginning and then his and emma's relatinship was beginning to soften me.....and now that I really see the hurt and pain he caused, and is continuing to cause...i hate him more.
I was him to burn in a pile of ashes.
*grabs lighter*
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 11:11 AM · On: Once Bitten, Twice Shy
Somehow Bella having balls makes me like her less. The arrogance over lack of confidence is a real mind-fuck. She's icky. If she goes off on Alice and them the way she did him, I'll vomit a little in the back of my throat.
Mad is one thing, but how is a family supposed to stay out of that situation? They didn't have a lot of options. But yes, I would also want to tear Alice a new one for leaving me.
Does she not realise in trying to force Edward to abandon Emma she would be taking away her daughter's choices the same way she lamented that Edward took hers? Irony.
Brilliant. If reviews give you a boner, then your tremendously devilish imagination gives me one! Funny, it's not near as uncomfortable as I've always assumed it would be.
*prostrates self* All hail to you!!
Reviewer: KellansBBR (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 11:03 AM · On: Once Bitten, Twice Shy
I can understand how Bella feels but one can see the love that Edward and Emma share. It is unconvientional yes but still a good love. We know how the Twilight Saga ends....I want to see what is next for this story...will Bella get her way? Will Emma be heartbroken? Will Emma get pregnant? So many questions...Keep it up this is good.
Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 10:50 AM · On: Once Bitten, Twice Shy
Wow-ok that was intense and frankly I am glad that Bella got to have her say. I am sure she is not done but damn that was good. I am not sure how Edward is going to make this right with Emma and let's not even begin to think about what Jacob is going to do.......
Reviewer: skiwithme (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 10:48 AM · On: Once Bitten, Twice Shy
LOVE IT! Love it love it love it! Can't wait to see how the reunion goes. Waiting not so patiently : )
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 10:46 AM · On: Once Bitten, Twice Shy
That was amazing! So full of emotions that yes even I wanted to cry. Cant wait to find out what Emma is gonna to do and say once she finds out about Edward and her mom.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 10:46 AM · On: Once Bitten, Twice Shy
I'm actually appalled at Bella, here. The vitriol she displays is off-putting. Yes, she was wounded by him, but damn, it's been more than 20 years!
I can see her totally wanting to protect her daughter. Ugly as it'll be, Emma deserves to know about the past. Too much history there to hide forever. So, fine. Warn Edward. Bella SHOULD get to tell it her way. I am in agreement with that.
But I think she's being ugly about it on her own account, too. Which is childish. So much for being the grown up. At least, for me. lol (And for the record I have, of course, suffered devastating heartbreak. At the age of 18. It is something one needs to move from.)
Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Chemistry
i already like emma better than bella!!
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Once Bitten, Twice Shy
Now this, this is how I always wanted Bella to react to Edward reappearing. Your Bella has balls and I love that !!! Never let him see you sweat and hand him his heart in the same mangled conditionn he handed you yours. Well done....LOVE LOVE this story. I can't wait to see how she handles the family.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Recipe for Disaster
!!!! How did I miss this. THIS was the chapter *I* was waiting for, anyway.
Well done! Nice and smooth and communicative.
And I would have paid money to be a fly on the wall!
Reviewer: Russet_Jacob (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Recipe for Disaster
post the next chapter!! quick!! this was great, by the way!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Recipe for Disaster
Oh for the love of...! I am calling you SO many dirty names right now! I was literally afraid to read this chapter - after the heart attack I got with the last one :)
Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Recipe for Disaster
Man! So not fair! I can't wait to see what Bella has to say!
Reviewer: coldcalliope (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Recipe for Disaster
UGH! Why do you torture me like this?!?! Huh??? LOL
Reviewer: CatierayeHale (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Recipe for Disaster
I just read this whole story and i think I'm in love with Emma! this is so good. I cant get enough its wonderful. :)
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 09:16 AM · On: Recipe for Disaster
Oh shit!
Reviewer: buff802y (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 06:39 AM · On: Recipe for Disaster
Wow.Wow.Wow. I'm sorry, but did I say "Wow"? I was unbelievably frustrated at the beginning of this chapter and I am more so at the end of it:( So cannot wait for next chapter to come out!!! Good job, btw;)
Reviewer: BiteTheBullet79 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 05:08 AM · On: Recipe for Disaster
I'm half starting to like Emma, only because she told the truth at last!
Bella's gonna be cool? Good. (: Looking forward to it then, only because your including her though - and making her cool. I know how like difficult it is to actually try and give a character you dislike an easy time and make them come across as cool. I did a story including Renesmee, and couldn't stand her in Breaking Dawn, so made her a hated character.
I wonder if Emma knows in the next chapter that Bella was with Edward?
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Recipe for Disaster
I liked this chapter. It was good to see how Bella found out about the relationship. The mother-daughter moments were touching.
Reviewer: JJPattz (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 11:07 PM · On: Recipe for Disaster
You hate me. I don't know how or why, but you must. Please, for the love of whoever the hell you think is out there pulling the puppet strings, do not make me wait for what is to come. I simply cannot stand it.
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