WOAH!!!

By far the best chapter. Edward what an  ass wipe. Bella what a gorgeous woman.

I annoyed everyone at home reading this chapter screaming and commenting on the whole conversation. Really enjoyed it.

Sometimes it makes me feel deep down they will get together. But I know Edward has declared his love for Emma.

ARGH!! Just Awesome. 

well, I love it and I hate it...ok thats harsh. I love Emma and you really should get an award for best original character! I wouldn't say that I am a Bella fan, however I am not sure I like what you have done to her character so far, or Jacob or their relationship. I do get that this story isnt about them, but I certainly think I would have picked up on you not being a Bella fan even if you hadnt mentioned it. I guess I just seen Bella as whimpy; yes...over devoted; yes....but I think she would have been a great mom, and a little more connected with her daughter. I also hope to see Jacob be a better husband!

enough of that; this is your story, not mine. I can't wait to see what you do next and I think you are doing a great job. 

 

wow Bella's dressing down of Edward was awesome!! Sooo looking forward to the family confrontation.

I'm impressed she hasn't threatened to bring the Pack in on things though :)

Maybe Bella's saving the cavalry for later?

I don't know how I feel about this chapter.  I feel sorry for Edward then I am pissed at him.  The same goes for Bella as well.

Damn girl you got me twisted!

Bella sure showed some back bone there bu   t why would she want to hurrt her daughter.

That was a fantastic chapter, girl!  Sorry, I could still give two shits about Bella's whiney ass.  She almost had me, but I am Team Emward all the way ;o)

Oh and, "I love black peeeeeeeeeeeeeeopllllllllleeeeeeee!

Who's your mother fucker, Shinegirl?

You my mother fucker, Twighlit!"

Well, finally Bella shows some fire but it's all too late...perhaps. She was a naive teenager madly in love with an immortal. I truly believe he did love her, loves her still, but it's different. She was so fragile and tender hearted, easily caught up in her emotions and I can understand how her entire world unraveled when you make someone the sole center of your universe. But, I like Emma. I do agree that she's his counterpart in every way. She's supernatural just like him and no, she wouldn't have changed unless vampires weren't in the area, but isn't Fate grand?? Good chapter, ma! lol

I want to see an all out vampire/werewolf war!  Then, in a bizarre twist of fate, have Bella die, but get made into a vampire to make her daughter happy and have the newborn Bella KILL the entire Cullen family and have Emma kill her and Jake kill Emma and then Jacob die of a broken heart and have a huge bonfire where all the wolves howl at the end.  OOOHHH...have Bella and Emma fight it out over Edward, kill each other and then Edward ask Jacob to kill him and Jacob tell him NO that he must live with his guilt and pain.

 

My endings.  heheh

 

Seriously though, you nailed Bella's point of view. 

 

catthomas32

aka

michelle in arkansas

 

 

I just found your story and love it so far.  I hope Bella and Jacob are still married and happy!  Emma is a hoot, I love her, so much like Jacob!

Wow!! Edward is such a smug ass.....I am so glad Bella has a backbone in this story. I wanted to go through my computer and bitch slap him a few times.  I was looking forward to this chapter but can't wait until bitchy Bella gets unleashed on the Cullens. 

oooh shit is hitting the fan!!!! haha I love bitchybella! she kicks some arse! can't wait for the update!

Bella was amazing!  But oh my gosh I want to cry for her, to throw up, to slap him if it wouldn't break my hand.  He's being an ass here.  Bad Edward.  Looking forward to grown up Bella going off on some Cullens.

go Bella.that was awesome.