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Reviewer: ashelin321 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 01:00 AM · On: Evolve... O

reallyy good. cant wait for next chapte. =]

Reviewer: merelade (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 12:46 AM · On: Evolve... O

haters, BACK OFF.


xoxo miranda

Reviewer: esce (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 12:07 AM · On: Evolve... O

edward is a prick

Reviewer: Cadybearsmommy (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Evolve... O

OMG, that was just heartbreaking! Poor Bella!  I hope that Edward is hurting by seeing her more than he is letting on, hope his POV is coming up soon. 

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: alyssamay (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Evolve... O

oh my god i love you! more please:)

Reviewer: Cloudie day (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 08:38 PM · On: Evolve... O

BB YOU HAD ME BAWLING MY EYES OUT THE ENTIRE CHAPTER!!!! you are the sparkly vampire in my dreary day! I want to bask in your awesomeness!!!! You are the second fic author to make me cry! YAY YOU!!!

Reviewer: withfrosting (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Evolve... O

I am crying like hell right now... You HAVE to make Bella happy! I love Emma too, but oh my god... Please?

Reviewer: saucyiscrazy (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Evolve... O

first off this is an amazing story! When i was reading this, i was a little annoyed that bella still hadnt let go. It shows( in my mind) how selfish she is. She had a life given to her by jacob, and then she still always thought of edward. Everyone gets dumped in their lives, but bella was weak for not letting go. I like how she finally grew up and decided not to tell emma. and I like how edward will have to face her personally. Ok im stoked to see where this story goes!

Reviewer: mcnavy (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Evolve... O

First of all, why do you hate Bella?  Why write about her with no compassion? How can the Cullens be so callous it's very OOC of themAlso, you are going to have Jake find out correct?  Obviously he is the father and should have some say as to the fate of the his daughter...

Reviewer: JJPattz (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 02:45 PM · On: Evolve... O

* sob *  You are killing me!

Reviewer: LaughingWithEmmett (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Evolve... O

OK I was seriously in tears reading this chapter. Such an interesting story.

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Evolve... O

i am stumped i dont know which way to turn   1st option run to her take her in your arms tell her you will always love her   2nd let her go back to jacob where she belongs ????? dont hurt her   dont hurt emma   which door to choose   either way tears will fall                  you decide

Reviewer: XFireandIceX (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Evolve... O

Ouch...that was painful to 'watch.'  I  have to admit, I had my reservations about this story when I started it...the whole falling-for-the-daughter-of-your-true-love thing was a bit creepy, but WOW!  This is good stuff!

Reviewer: BiteTheBullet79 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Evolve... O

That's horrible. :(
The whole that she loves him still, but he doesn't love her...not that I know of. It'd be nice though if he loved Bella still. But I'm not sure. For the Edward/Bella shipper it's be nice.

Reviewer: zahir (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Evolve... O

you are killing me... i cried since last chapter and now it is even worst..

i dont now how people took Edwards decision to leave Bella but for me it was awful. maybe because me as Bella we both lost someone for ever.

i suffer for Bella and i am kind of scare what is going to happen when Emma knows the truth.

i really was agaisnt Edwards-Emma realtionship and i am still but i cant wait to hear what happens next...

What about Emmett and Rosalie?  i would like to know Rosalie opinions of this situation and if she would agree with Bella or not.

GReat work

Reviewer: StingrayCullen (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 09:43 AM · On: Evolve... O

Oh, Bella. As much as I adore Emma, she sure does pull on the heart strings :P
Lovely chapter!

Reviewer: jodie1 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Evolve... O

please keep going, please please!!!!!!

Reviewer: maddylyn (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Evolve... O

Oh my what a twist.  I am usually a big
fan of Eddie and Bella but Emma just rocks it with Edward.  I really like them together the wolf girl with the leach.  Kinda kinkie. *wink

I love Emma's character she is like the female version of Jake and Emmett put together.  How is she Bella's daughter???

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Reviewer: krazyk85 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 05:17 AM · On: Evolve... O

im on the verge of tears here. this chapter breaks my heart. even though i love emma i just cant forget about bella. the one thing she has ever wanted is gone. sad sad story indeed. im going to go cry now. for my heart aches for bella.

Reviewer: jmahina (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 05:01 AM · On: Evolve... O

Okay so i have been following this story for awhile but haven't left a review but i just had to now. I love how you wrote Edward in the last chapter, to me he wasn't smug, he was just confident in his love for Emma, which is great because to me Bella is trying to manipulate him. I do hope your keep this a Edward/Emma story becuase i love the relationship you developed between them. This chapter was good but Bella just annoyed me, she found love with Jacob and should be happy she moved on long before Edward did, plus is just seems like with the how the chapter ended that she is about to majorly try to mess things up between Edward and Emma, which i hope doesn't yes i completely love your story as you can probably tell.

Great writing!!

Reviewer: Kaiser (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 04:59 AM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

Love the Wayne's World references.

Reviewer: Mirabella Jamison (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 04:50 AM · On: Evolve... O

I'm generally not a Bella fan but my feeble retarded heart broke for her in this chapter :((

Reviewer: pinkaquaclouds (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Evolve... O

I feel so bad for Bella. This was one of the hardest chapters to read since I wrapped my head around Emma being Bella's daughter. I can't see Emma reacting well to this news. I honestly never expected to like this story so much! I am usually a E&B kind of girl but wow it's so good!

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