soo worth sticking with

Author's Response:

im so glad you think so. ill try not to let you down.

A) You must not be blue! If someone doesn't like your writing, it's their loss. They can go lament over Mopey, Spineless Bella!

B) The beauty of fan-fic is taking the theme, and varying it. Which you have done. This chapter is creepy in the throw up a little in the back of my throat, licked by a homeless person kind of way.

It's a devilishly clever, fucked-up situation. That's what makes it great. Being weirded out is part of the fun. =] Keep writing! Being challenged and exploring the what-if of the universe is what keeps it interesting.

Write-on!!

Author's Response:

oh this chapter was whacked off the fucking wall for sure, dont think i dont know it. but its whats in my depraved brain lol. thanks for the encouragement, your comment made me smile.

Sugar to you! Please don't wait long for an update. I love your writing.

Author's Response:

thank you very much. im working on some stuff now :)

oh foolish dragon64... thou hast made a grave error in insulting this gentle tale for you hath provoked the wrong reader... i am merelade: dragon64 slayer!

prepare to be slain!!

ps

thou hast seen too many moons to be mingling amongst us lovers of fanfic... get thee a job and a real life!

Well, if you don't like negative reviews, I'm giving you fair warning to quit reading. Unlike you not giving us fair warning that you were going to completely humiliate and destroy Bella. Not that I'm a big fan of her's in SM's world, but you gave her a second-best life (clear in her inability to handle the supernatural or anything out of the ordinary), a daughter that barely tolerates her and has no respect or little love for her (because Bella's not "tough enough"), and now when she tries to protect this same shit-headed daughter from what Bella assumes is going to be as bad a heart-ache as she received at the hands of Edward and the Cullens, these supposedly compassionate and loving creatures prove to Bella just how unworthy she really was and is. Good job; going to have Bella finally jump off that cliff for an encore? Because the way you've written this story, the only one that is going to suffer any consequences is Bella: Emma doesn't care enough to worry about or "avenge" Bella's past, especially if it interferes with Emma getting in bed (or mud, or elsewhere)with Edward which means Edward gets what he wants (Emma in the sack) and the Cullens get off completely. While I like happily-ever-afters as much as the next girl, I'm much less thrilled with hyprocisy and self-absorption being unjustly rewarded.

After nearly 10 years of reading fan fiction, I'm doing a first: pulling the plug. I've removed you from favorite story list and I will not read anything else with your name on it. You've wasted enough of my time.

Author's Response:

you are, of course, entitled to your opinion, which is meaningful and valuable. i appreciate you taking the time to critique my work.

i'm sorry that i let you down. it was never my intention to waste anyone's time. and i promise that im not just tossing around bella's misery all willy-nilly, i have a master plan for how the story goes.

in my own defense, i am a satirist. i work in irony and sarcasm and i truly never expected my dweeby little story to elicit such a response, so im sort of impressed that it made anyone feel anything, even if they hated it. im also kind of proud to be the first person you ever deleted from your favorites... mediocrity disgusts me, id rather go down in history as the worst author you ever read than some schmuck caught in the in-between. im being completely legit, by the way... you know, its better to burn out than fade away and all that.

i was never trying to ruffle anyone's feathers or make them hate me. im just a writer who took a shot at fanfic for the first time.

i did the best i could.

ROFL  I love Jake!  That was priceless!  LOL 

Now that would be interesting! Emma imprinting on someone! =O

And pretty much another user has summed up what I think too, the meeting with Edward and Bella, it like lacked how much he was affected, it was like...to me, if you'd have done his pov of the meeting. I'd get the impression he'd have been thinking "Oh hi Bella I'm dating your daughter", "I'll kidnap her", "I'm taking her away from you", "your an ex, who I didn't and don't care about one bit". He seemed so cold, and so wrapped up in Emma, so callous.

Don't you agree twighlit?? I mean I suppose you have to imagine being Bella, or at least having a boyfriend yourself, who ups and leaves you without a good reason...who has given you all these promises, and then falls for your own daughter and makes it seem like he'll just one minute soon snatch her away. I suppose you have to think about that a lot, to understand why some readers are against Edward. And we've all read the Twilight saga too.

Anyway, I'm actually liking this story. very much. Well I like Bella a lot. :) You've hit the right note with her.

i fuckin love this story!

wow i love this story so much you are an amazing writer this is the BEST plot ever!! i love it Keep writing your awesome!!

OMG this chapter was good. So good. Poor Bella. And boy, are you funny! :-) Excited to read the rest!

XX Kari

like she said what her and edward had was in the pass so she just needs to leave it there. she needs to go to jacob and look him in the eyes and let him know how much she loves him an make love to him like she never made love to him before like her life depended on it because he took her broken and all with no regrats.

haters, BACK OFF.

 

xoxo miranda