damn. sucks to be edward. lol

bitethebullet, i have several options for you:

1) get a job

2) enter therapy

3) TAKE A CHILL PILL

i fear for you mental health. it is a story. fanFICTION. as in NOT REAL. you spend far too much time giving input to a write who, quite frankly, doesn't need your lame advice. from what i can gather from twighlit (not that i know her very well) she is not going to change her entire brilliant plotline because you have some odd obsession with her story.

say you like it or say you hate it. end of story. you're going to give yourself carpal tunnels with your ridiculous reviews that are falling on deaf ears.

COOL OUT.

 

b, you ma bitch!

Also I suppose people who like Bella and Edward as a couple,
I suppose this story to them may seem like it's going in a very predictable fashion. I don't know whether you've read other stories, where Bella and Edward aren't an item. But usually it's the female who suffers, and has to watch say the love of life, like Edward for Bella, be with someone else. In the end it's usually the female ex, or yeh just the female who never has it easy.
It'd be different if Edward suffered in so many ways, because yeah he's the male in this.

Also, for people to say that Bella should just move on. Well I try and imagine, as weird as this sounds...Throughout Twilight anyways...basically you have a boyfriend as a vampire. And a vampire is something more than human. They live for like ever, an eternity. Being dumped by a vampire is something more I'm guessing. When they offer an eternity of love and being together, you go along with it, I'm guessing the female character goes along with it. They believe it. But then when it ends, it's so strange that it can end. Vampires live for eternity, when they meet their soulmate, they stick with that human. It seems that way. So to just be dumped and have that person never return, I don't think it would be simple right.

Now if Edward was human, I'd understand people who say Bella should move on and stay with Jacob and realise what she's got. She doesn't have much. He seems so bitter with her, but that's not the point. But yeah, if Edward was human and pretty much gave Bella the impression he'd be with her forever, then dumped her. She'd be able to move on, but he's not a human, he's someone who lives forever. I don't know, I'm rambling.

I'd understand people though, IF Edward was a human. Then I'd think Bella's being stupid about Edward being with Emma, and that she should indeed move on and just focus on what she has.

You really do make me think a lot with this story.
And I guess you don't like my reviews, 'cause you don't reply anymore.

Author's Response:

it's not that i dont like your reviews. i just feel like you are trying to turn this story into something that its not. im not trying to please exb people or exe people, im just trying to write what i feel is best, and i dont want to argue or leave you disappointed about plot points, so i just stopped answering. as you can see, you are no longer alone, people are coming out of the woodwork to express their distaste for my story, and thats ok, they dont have to like it. but its sort of wearing on me and making it harder for me to write, im losing a little vigor and passion everytime it happens lol. concisely, i appreciate you taking the time to review, but i dont want you to be disappointed when the story doesnt go your way.

yoooo girlll!!! eddie dont even no who he fukkin?! dat shyt is messed ^ but it happens ta me all da time. dat's da lyfe of A ho turnin tricks to make that dolla dolla bill!

he rill confused. i feel bad cause belluh came back and fukked him up when he was happy n shit! i hope he drinks her bluhd.

but for rill i luh dis story u a good writer dont let da haters get you downnnn you da fukkin best. xox drake

yo... i fukked ma man in ma mom's bed. it was fun n shyt but she got mad cuz she was trying ta sleep so me n ma man went outside behind a bush to get dat nuttt.

How the hell can you unfavorite a story like this! Amazing chapter, glad to see that Edward finally feels how Bella felt when he left her, but it's sad that Emma and Jacob are stuck in the middle. Love it, update soon.

Author's Response:

thank you thank you, im working on the update now but it might be about 2 weeks because i have like... 3 chapters going simultaneously.

I'm not sure why people have expressed distaste for this story - I love it!  I've been reading since the beginning and I think it's an intriguing, original premise that's very well written.  At first I was surprised when Edward truly fell in love with Emma and seemed to be over Bella - it went against the whole, traditional idea that Bella is his soul-mate, the only one for him, but you made their love work and it seemed perfect for him.  But now, it looks like maybe he's not over Bella as much as he thought he was.  This last chapter has left me completely intrigued and wanting for more ... soon! 

Author's Response:

thank you so much. comments like this make me want to keep writing.

Wow..I liked this chapter, it showed Edward in a different way. He was  passionate and aggressive but still angry. And thank you for reminding me whyI like your story so much, the pop culture refrences make me giggle.

Author's Response:

im so glad you like my pop. its pretty much the only thing i have going for me right now lol.

I have read the story before but only a chapter here and there - It is a hard one to read because what makes Twilight so heavenly is the pure love that it represents ...yet of course it doesn't really -  I've had to leave the story before because it just seems so harsh that it can't be true but today I took the time and read it all the way through ( even though it makes me alittle sick to my stomach) because I just want that happy ending for bella and edward and it isn't coming (much like the real world) - the chapter where bella confronts edward is fabulous - she is strong and in my mind I was jumping around trying to figure out where you were going and what i would do and i actually saw her killing emma rather than letting her go with edward - schocks me GREATLY but that is really where i thought for a minute where you were going - in a horrible way "saving" her - this whole thing is about stalking and strange anyway - i enjoy the different stories and am enjoying yours even though I must admit I HATE it too!!  I want the happy ending and this one isn't gonna have one!!!  thanks for writing   Regards, Debbi

Author's Response:

i feel like you really hit the nail on the head with the happy ending shit.

we, as women, are bombarded with stories from the time we are old enough to listen about princesses that kiss frogs and get princes and live happily ever after, when the harsh reality is, that RARELY if EVER is the case.

it makes me feel jaded and cynical to have grown up expecting the fairy tale only to be left crazy and alone like scarlett ohara at the end of gone with the wind.

for me personally, i think its important to stress the idea that the universe doesnt play fair, and sometimes you just have to use the hand youre dealt and make it work from there, you know?

it's not very twilight-y, as far as themes go, but its a grip on how the world works lol.

yea i'm glad he's being tortured...bitch ass vampire.

but in all seriousness..i was afraid to read this update because I was in so much hurt and pain from the last update....but i'm glad i read, and i'm happy that edward gets his. That this isn't just some easy thing for him to "let go" or w/e

Can vampire's lose their minds...yes, yes they can, and I'm grateful.

Now onto the details...you wrote this exquisitely I must say. This chapter takes on a different air, and different style than what you've been writing. I can still tell you wrote it, but it's like Edward grew up or something...realized that it wasn't going to be all roses. I was at the edge of my seat reading this. His emotions were all over the place.

I loved how you wrote it.

Author's Response:

thank you. the writing is really what matters to me, and i appreciate you saying you like it.

This ends up disturbing me and making me slightly mad, but I still keep reading.  I won't take you off my favourites or abuse you - at the very least you have bravery to tackle the taboo and desecrate the holy grail! :-)  Don't let the PC-army get you down!

Author's Response:

ppppppppffffffff.... that was the sound of me exhaling deeply. thank you for understanding me, even if you dont completely love it. thats very objective and diplomatic of you, and i appreciate it fully.

I have no words. I just don't. I hate him and he deserves the emotional turmoil and I can not stop reading this story. Even when it pisses me off.

Author's Response:

people say that a lot. im like a trainwreck in slow motion. or britney spears.

Hey sweetie, I love your story. I have been hooked since chapter 1.  I look forward every week for an update.  It is an excellent story because it is different.  Love it, can't wait for more  :)

Author's Response:

thank you so so so much. your review really lifted my morale.

Wow. Why would someone leave hate comments? This is a great story! Unless they are a crazy ExB fan. I am too, I wouldn't be here otherwise, but darn it, I myself...need a little variety. In fact I have two stories on TTS that are Edward/OC I thoroughly enjoy yours and some others. I love ExB, but like I said I also love variety and uniqueness. So, here's some love from a fellow Edward/OC fan who does the happy dance and adds a fist pump when you update!!!!!! 

Okay, enough of that rant! About this chapter....God, please don't break up Emma and Edward....I love them!  Shit, I'm petrified that he said Bella's name during the sex or something....IN this story, Emma is far better suited for him and well, let's face far more entertaining!!!  Hurry up I'm dying here, I want happy, snarky, Emma and Edward sex!!!!!  LOL!!!! Alright, I'll shut up now!!!!  You are a genius, don't let some morons tell you otherwise!!!

*hugs*

Tracey

 

 

Author's Response:

thank you love, it means a lot right now. im trying to get back in the ZONE for writing, and i think i might have struck a match tonight. i guess well find out lol.