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Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 06:30 AM · On: You Can't Go Home Again.

Congrats Bella you selfish whore... I am glad you figured it out. 

I don't normally call anyone but men whores but Bella is so pathetic... and needy. Codependent slut. Seriously. She was with him for what six months. 22 years ago. 

I hope Emma tells them both to Fu** off. I wish Edward would figure out that it is not Bella but Emma that he wants. Then lose Emma. He deserves to lose her. 

I hope emma imprints.

Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Humanity

I love what Emma got to say to him. I just wish that Edward could hear it and experience it. But he is so locked into his self loathing that I don't think he can.

I want him to suffer. Really suffer. Bella too.

Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 06:14 AM · On: Unchained Melody

Please do not let Emma go back to Edward. Please.

Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Discovery Channel

I am a little scared. 

Both Bella and Edward are screwed.

I am excited I hope there selfishness explodes in their faces.

Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Bella's Bed

when Emma finds out he is so screwed.

Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 05:46 AM · On: Evolve... O

It is sad but I can't find it in me to feel bad for Bella. She is so pathetic. Seriously. What was there to fall in love with... she fell in love with the idea of Edward. She gets off on self loathing every bit as much as Edward does. I almost think she needs to feel unworthy. She fell in love with someone who was constantly telling her they should not be friends... that he was no good for her... that if she was smart she would walk away. How do you fall in love with that? So he saved her... he ignored her for a month afterward. She is an enabling codependent with a skewed idea of what a woman is. 

The situation does suck... it would be humiliating. But she isn't pissed for the right reasons. She is still at the core of it making it about her. 

Emma is awesome it is like she is disgusted by her mother's codependent behavior too. She is sixteen and is more her own woman than Bella could ever hope to be. Thank god she was raised by wolves. 

Emma is going to be... will Edward live through it??? Emma is going to break him isn't she. She still hasn't imprinted. Will she imprint in Forks?? Or will she imprint on Edward when she is walking away from him.

Karma is a bit**. Edward deserves great big bite in the a**. 

This really is a great story. I like the characters. I think your Bella is very realistic to what a grown up Bella would behave like. Jacob too. 

The sh** it about to hit the fan... isn't it.

Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Lemon

that last bit... Awesome!!!!!!!!!

 

Awesomest chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2010 03:35 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

Well he has another swan women begging... I am sure he gets off on that some how.

Reviewer: Alejandra-Loves-Jasper (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 04:13 AM · On: Full Moon

Sorry I missed your last two updates. Some asshole hit me and my laptop was in the car at the time so I've been computer deprived. I loved the chapters and I was always a firm believer in why get mad when you can get even!!

Reviewer: BiteTheBullet79 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Full Moon

I agree with SamieJamesBait, I think it is. Edward pain too, it's only fair if Bella suffers. So should Edward severely since he's the one who's had both of them. and been in the middle of them.

Reviewer: samieJamesBait (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Full Moon

Is that the end???? I mena, it was brilliant, and I almost wish I could stand up and applaud your amazing self or something, but I still kind of want a chapter of Edward pain. Bella had to suffer, why shouldn't he?

 

 

Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 04:17 PM · On: You Can't Go Home Again.

This is soooo depressing...

Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 04:22 AM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

Please let him see Bella soon!!! I really want Bella to find out... I miss him and Bella!!! sorry :)

Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 03:39 AM · On: Chemistry

AAHhhh.... this seem a bit frightening... I miss Bella :(

Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Full Moon

good story

Reviewer: Claire09 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Full Moon

Nononono. This is the last chapter. Ohhh. :( Please write more. I need to know what will happen next. Please. Pretty please with icing on top.

Reviewer: Claire09 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Ten Things I Hate About You

It's so strange. I thought about Emma having sex with someone else for revenge but I never thought that she'll use their link to torture him. Still in love with her story. :)

Reviewer: Claire09 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Humanity

I'm scared. I don't know what will happen next. What if this story isn't complete and the last chapter would have a cliffhanger which would be too much? I need more strong Emma to feel better.

Reviewer: Claire09 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Unchained Melody

It was the worst thing I have read. The chapter wasn't bad but it broke my heart. I feel so strongly for Emma that I felt like Edward is betraying me and through reading his cheating I felt like a real masochist. Sorry if it sounds irritated. I can't think clearly.

Reviewer: Claire09 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Bella's Bed

I love this chapter. You don't know how much I love this chapter. Till now it's the best chapter of this story and it means a lot because I already loved the other chapters.

This story is so packing and I love you so much for writing it. For some time I couldn't find a good story to enjoy but your story is so packing and amazing. I really love it.

Reviewer: Claire09 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Recipe for Disaster

I immediately thought NO after seeing that this chapter isn't about the restaurant. But it's nice to read what happened before.

Reviewer: Claire09 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 01:04 PM · On: Bait and Switch

WWWooooooowwwwww. Through the whole story I tried to picture how they're going to meet each other again but I wouldn't have thought that something like that would happen. I really thought that it's Emma but before reading to the end I got this feeling and then BAM Bella's name. :)

Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Humanity

still a good story....fucked up but good

Reviewer: Claire09 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 03:45 AM · On: Floored.


“I love you,” I answered. “I don’t love you ‘too.’ I love you first, and I wish I’d gotten to say so,” I spoke quietly into her ear, still clutching her face. “I love you, Emma.”

I so love this quote. And Emma's reaction to Edward's secret is so hilarious. :)

Reviewer: Claire09 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 03:09 AM · On: Stir the pot

You didn't have to apologize for anything. Amazing chapter. :) 

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