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Reviewer: EB Idealist 81 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Bella's Bed
Though I could never top the lovingly eloquent words of my TWIN Z... you are the shit and don't let some bitch with too much time and not enough common sense, get you down.
The whole point of Fan Fic is to take the characters you love and turn their world into your own little playground and if we are so lucky, you will bestow upon us that wonderful world so that we may play in the sand box and jump off the swings with you. If she wants another version of the story that made millions there are plenty out there.... I however read, loved, and cherrish the original, I don't need a remake. I was just too hooked on Edward, Bella, Alice, Jaz, Rosie, Emmett and the rest of the Twilight Saga stars to give them up yet. Thank you for keeping me interested, in love and inspired. You belong in the little ticking thing on the left side of my chest!!
Nickerz
Author's Response: how sweet! thank you. meet me on the playground.
Reviewer: Mirabella Jamison (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Bella's Bed
I'm in love with this story. I'm going to buy it chocolates and make it dinner and talk dirty to it, maybe even show it the goodies.
You are made of awesomesauce, lady.
Author's Response: bahahahaha. you dont have to waste time with the formalities, my story is a sure thing. give it a shot or two of patron and this bitch will spread like peanut butter.
Reviewer: masochisticlion7 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 10:14 PM · On: Bella's Bed
ok, this chapter was definitely better! After your last one, i was so convinved that Edward had completely forgotten about Bella and it broke my heart. Her having those "i'm not enough" feelings again and breaking down infront of everyone? Totally heartbreaking. I kind of want Edward and Bella to get together (come on...most of us here are BellaxEdward fans...) but I get the feeling that that's not going to happen.
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: i know, i think a lot of people felt that way, and thats sort of how i intended it, i was hoping you would understand when you heard his side.
Reviewer: pinkaquaclouds (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Bella's Bed
This story always makes me think about how the Jacob/Nessie relationship works out. I really like this which is hard for me to say because I really only read E/B but I am sticking with story. I am axious to see what happens next. ;)
Author's Response: aww why thank you! you know i love you for it.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Bella's Bed
lol Edward's so messed up :S
I'm still looking forward to Emma smacking him down when she discovers all the little truths that have been kept from her so far :)
Author's Response: i know, poor edwards a complete mindfuck. this isnt going to be good.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Bella's Bed
At this point, I think Edward better come clean. It's not going to go away and he needs to deal with the situation honestly and openly with Emma. She never reacts the way he thinks she's going to- why does he think he know how she'll react now. As for still loving and wanting Bella...that's fifty-shades of f*cked up..oh wait, I think that's another fic...
It's going to be damn near impossible to move past it (if he's even capable) withouth talking to Alice too. She might just be the key to the whole thing. Who the hell knows?
Author's Response: haha so youre a master of the universe fan i see? me too, its one of my faves. and i agree, edward needs to man up. he and i are talking it out.
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Lemon
I really thought Edward was going to stop when she made the biology comment. I almost feel sad for Bella having to read this. lol
Reviewer: MKT (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Bella's Bed
wow! That was unexpected! But somehow...it makes me feel better. I like that he can't just get over her--I can't wait for Emma to find out, she's gonna be so pissed!
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Durability
I hate the way Jacob talked to Bella. THat was awful!
Reviewer: jmahina (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 07:51 PM · On: Bella's Bed
I'm kind of sad for Emma and the fact that this seems to be turing into an Edward/Bella story...you created such a wonderful plot with Emma and the story surrounding her.
Well i'll still stick around and wait to read what happens next. ^_^
Reviewer: JJPattz (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Bella's Bed
Yes!!! Finally! I love Emma, but I have been waiting for something of the Edward I know to surface. And that is how he feels for Bella. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: VampFan (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Evolve... O
Well written, great voice. Emma's characterization is awesome. It's just the entire premise of Edward loving anyone but Bella that I can't wholly enjoy. And the thought that she is involved with her mother's ex. Ewww. And Edward is no man if he doesn't have the guts to tell Emma himself.
Reviewer: Jenny P (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Bella's Bed
Yes, I'll marry you! (Can I wear the tux? I've always wanted to do that whole Nicole Kidman sexy thing...just sayin'.)
Anyway... I am blown away! You must've gotten like, FIVE lapdances, because this - THIS! No words. I'm stupified. I'm speechless. Just, WOW.
"I wanted to fuck. Yeah, I said it." <--- I. DIED.
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 07:12 PM · On: The taming of the shrew
Half of me expected Rosalie to tell her about Bella.
Reviewer: Topazlover (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Bella's Bed
That was fanfuckingtastic!!!! Please update soon, I might jump out of skin in anticipation!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: ilovejacob101 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Bella's Bed
loves it babe
Reviewer: jlugo (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Bella's Bed
It sucks that people stopped reading. I'll stick with you to the end just because I'm too involved to give up on it now. I love the way you write. I still can't get out of my Edward/Bella mentality. Even more so with the previous chapter and this chapter. Bella's still in love with him and it almost seems Edward is still in love with Bella. Anyways as always cannot wait for the next update.
Still Team Bella :)
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Bella's Bed
wow.
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Floored.
That was f-ing hilarious. I am cracking up right now! I was thinking, wouldn't Jacob smell vampire on her?
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Bella's Bed
Oh, Edward's a few Froot Loops shy of a full bowl, isn't he?
I loved the chapter and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: he's just following his nose.
oh and by nose i mean peen.
Reviewer: jessica730 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Bella's Bed
As much as I like Emma, I am actually Team Bella in this story; somehow his love for her still seems more real, more epic. Certainly his confusion is realistic and my heart bleeds for what Bella must be going through. I enjoy your story and feel like you have attempted a difficult and original installment to follow what we know of Twilight. I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: thank you! its hard for many people to get off the bella train, i know. its just how they feel the story should go. thank you for giving me a try anyway :)
Reviewer: Cloudie day (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:12 PM · On: Bella's Bed
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG and technically he didnt make love to anyone... he fucked them! and he didnt even fuck them senseless he fucked himself sensless! and dont worry lovey i will stay with you till the end!!!!
Author's Response: thanks bebe, that means so much... you can stand under my umbrella. :)
Reviewer: crazyfanmom (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Bella's Bed
You did it! You are so good at this you managed to make him sympathetic. I DID NOT think that would happen. Nice job! Hurry back!
Author's Response: thank you! the drastic differences in reviews are giving me whiplash. i dont know if i hate or love myself lol. but thank you.
Reviewer: Sugarpie (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Bella's Bed
I really don't like the way this story is going and i'm not sure if i'll continue to read i love your writing but this whole edward still bwing hung up on bella thing i really hate it he needs to choose and soon i mean it's really pissing me off that he might still be in love with bella after all this time when he has emma. I'm sorry but i really actually hated this chapter and almost gave reading your story entirely half way through it.
Author's Response: i will let you in on a little secret. i am team emma. i have to be, shes like my child. and i dont like this shitty turmoil any more than you do, but its conflict and its what moves a story. there cant be a resolution if there isnt a problem. if you decide to stop reading i will be sorry to lose you, but practicing plot is something thats very important to me, i dont think my writing would have much depth if everyone got what they wanted all the time. im dragging my characters through the mud and its going to get worse before it gets better. i hope you trust that i can end this the right way. but if its not for you, then thanks for reading anyway :)
Reviewer: dwuvj (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Bella's Bed
This was a great chapter. I am so happy that Edward is now confused after seeing Bella. And he is not as cold-hearted as he was in the last chapter. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE put up the next chapter soon. Like tomorrow :-)
Author's Response: thanks, im so glad you liked it. im working on some new stuff now.
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