been there....sucks majorly....good job

wow bella is a bitch and she's been holding way to much anger in

what a f**Ked up ending...I love emma and totally can't wait for the wrestling match...and a horney edward is soooooooooo much better then a grumpy ass one

PLEASE UPDATE! IT'S BEEN FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this was so good i cant believe you didnt finish it. you really should you know.to bad i cant finish it for you. it gave me a great idea for an ending.

Author's Response: I want to finish it, I swear, but it is fighting me every step of the way! PS I'm intrigued that you came up with an ending! Care to share? PM me :)

I keep checking every day!!! Waiting and waiting for my favorite story to return!

Brilliant - please hurry - dying here!

hahaha i fell out of my chair when i started yell I KNEW IT. lol i was acting like an moron haha i loved it. great story i must go read more now hehe

Absolutely bloody fantastic!  i didn't see the floor borad coming at all - the werwolf yes, but not the cafe scene or the floorboard with the photos. You are Steph Myer without the Mormon hangups and an actual sense of humour!  Boy did you put out and yes you do deserve reciprocity. I am a big fan now! Please post the next chapter - I can't wait to see what happens next!

Hey Im beginning to wonder if you have abandoned this story. Its cool if you have cause I can't get myself to write shit but let me know so I can stop checking okay?

 

Author's Response:

not, not, NOT abandoned, just painful and writers blocky. i would let you know if i gave up, promises. im so sorry im a delinquent parent, ever since i got a "real job" i havent had the time or the inspiration. im trying though, i promise.

So how is my favorite FanFic Hoe doing?  I have an idea!  How about everyone remember that this is a fantastic story born in the mind of the fabulously creative Twighlit.  Do what you want, babe.  If you love E&B, wonderful!  If you love Emward, even better.  If you love Edward, Emmet and Jasper.....I've read that story and WHOA!  Crazy shit.

Anyway, just wanted to give you a little more love because it seems like people have dropped off or if they are still here they are trying to tell you how to write the story, which, I am sorry, its a little bull shitty.  Take yo time , momma!  And do what you like.

Oh, and I read and voted for your one shot that referenced my Saints.  Saw it as a sign that they would win the Super Bowl when I read it.  Thanks for the good gris gris!

Author's Response:

ugh you always know just what i need. i actually sat down tonight and logged into my reviews to try and plug my brain in and get some writing done, because i find that high praise does wonders for my productivity. its that pesky type A personality. and then i saw this and i was like shit kid, you the man, im feeling juicy and inspirational so im going to try to bang out a chapter now. and i do mean BANG OUT lets get some dirty stuff in it.

sometimes i understand where people are coming from when they tell me how to write the story. there are times when ive had to bite my tongue from doing the same thing... its mostly when im jealous that i didnt think of the idea first and feel like i could write it better. thats the pesky superiority complex, a separate entity from the type A tendancies, but i digress. the point is, as hurtful and sometimes offensive as it may be, i cant say i blame them. especially exb shippers, theyre looney about keeping it clean. ps i LOVE "emward," youre the tits.

ha and as for the one shot, when i was writing it there was still the chance of a saints/jets bowl and i tried to force the hand by writing the story. not that i particularly care either way, ive gotta say i wasnt lying about the mark sanchez in GQ stuff... but jeremy shockey is one of my all time fave players. im a NY giants girl myself, but our qb's daddy was a saint many moons ago so theyre ok in my book :)

wish me luck on making some progress tonight. love you baby!

If you're having problems because your readers are torn between liking Emma/Edward and Bella/Edward...That's to be expected. Whether it's a fanfic or not. It's like Bella/Edward are most peoples fav pairing, not everyone's, but to some they are. And since there's the impression now that Edward's torn in whether he loves Bella and that Bella still loves Edward, the pairing has begun, whether they've started kissing or not. It's pretty much another pairing in the story. And when you put in a favorite pairing and compete it with a random, unusual, new pairing...you're gonna have readers disappointed if you go down the route of Emma/Edward, and you are going to have readers disappointed if you go down the route of Bella/Edward. 

It can be fixed though, I'm sure. 
It looks like to me, readers may get a bit of both for the time being. If not that, then one set of readers will be disappointed, the other glad. Not every story has a happy ending. If you don't want to disappoint so much, toy with the idea of Bella/Edward even if they're not together for long...But if you're feeling unsatisfied a lot, then yeh go down your own route, and try and give at least Bella/Edward some happy ending even if he is with her daughter. And I've forgot about Jacob, but if it's the case where Emma/Edward are together, you can make it so Jacob/Bella are safe together, not hating one another. They both seem bitter with one another. But yeh, give readers something to like, by giving each pairing a happy ending.  

I'll still read, even though I like Bella/Edward a lot. I just hope if they don't end up together, that it's clear between them where each other stands, and can remain good friends. That'd be amazing to see though, since he's dating her daughter or should I say was for the time being. No doubt she'll kick off. I can imagine her with a huge temper. :) Although happy endings are cheesy, it's good if you want to keep everyone happy.

I just stumbled on this story, read through the whole thing in the last few hours.... all I can say is "oh snap". More, more, please!

Author's Response:

glad i got your attention. im trying, i swear, but real life is bending me over and spanking me like the bad girl i am so i havent gotten around to the update yet. stick with me :)