No way! Please don't take toooo long to update :)

Edward is such an a** and jerk and any other name I can think of.

Please update soon.

Thanks for posting.

Oh.

My.

Word.

 

Well, ma'am, you do seem to have created an intensely sticky situation.  I feel weird, here.  Like I shouldn't be watching, yet I'm fascinated.

Trainwreck, huh?

 

Edward seems oddly detached at this point. He is, I believe overthinking.  And though Bella IS involved, I also sense a restraint in her.

They're good people and both know they're about to cross a very definitive line.  "Something was off..." 

Um, yeah.

So right now I'm feeling really horrible for Jake and Emma.  But you've written it so that I am ALSO feeling for Edward and Bella.

That's talent.

Author's Response:

i think that made my night. sometimes i feel like i just stumbled into the perfect storm of circumstances and i fake like i can write over it. when someone else calls it talent, it makes my heart smile. thank you.

Massive amounts of Quan for you missy! thanks for delivering!

Seriously? *sigh* I absolutely cannot stand Emma and never could, but this latest chapter has me really questioning a lot of things.  

First, Edward really has NO idea what love or mate means.  He can't decide between mother or daughter.  I don't care how old he is, screwing a mother and a daughter is just effing wrong.  I know you like to push the envelope and that you hate Bella, so here is my guess on the rest of the story:Bella gets pregnant and has a daughter.  Jake imprints on Bella's daughter.  Emma forgives Edward and Bella is left all alone.  Do I want this to happen? NO. But, I wouldn't really be surprised.

Second: If Emma forgives Edward, she will be acting COMPLETELY out-of-character.  You write her to be this bad-ass strong chick... hopefully, you will continue to do so.  Once again, I'm not fond of her, but that doesn't mean I want her to be a doormat either.

Third: Bella.  Her life is just shot to hell now.  I know you hate her, so good job on making this the worst case scenario.  The love of her life leaves her and then comes back to fall in love with her daughter.  She loses her vampire family.  Now her daughter hates her for effing her boyfriend and for cheating on her dad.  Awesome.  Congratulations.  You managed to take a hard situation and make it impossible.

I'm sure you'll come up with some other random twists later on, but right now, I'm just disgusted with all the characters in this effed up love triangle.

THANK GOD!!!!  I was so afraid this story was gone forever.  Getting better every chapter.  Love.

Glad to see this update.  Very interesting and WOW!!!

I know that most will say that Edward is a bastard or worst but it takes two to tango and Bella was "screwing" her daughter's man, so is as much to blame, if not more, as she is her mother.

She is very selfish here but I can understand as Edward was her's first  and seens only love, and he didn't give her what she wanted. And we must remember, Edward is seventeen still , is emotionally torn and Bella, older, should know much better.

It takes a lot for me to be mad with Edward and I am not now, I look at this as Edward finding some closure and perhaps in the long run it would be good for Bella too, so that she could give her all to Jake, and for Emma for everything can now come out in the open.  And as for the Cullens, Edward sex life is not their business and their need to let him fix his mess himself.

Hope that Emma and Edward are able to work through this as I like them together.

Update soon.

Ohhhh! You fucking wrote I'm so proud of you!! Yay!! This is great stuff ,babe keep it up!!

Author's Response:

thaaaank you sweetness :)

WHAT??!! 

Well, in review, that was a very well-written piece of trash.  (I meant that as a compliment.  Very schmexy lemon.) 

Hm.. I wondered if it would go down this way, but I'm still a bit shocked that it did! 

And Jake; poor, poor, Jake! :( _ 

Ok, now I hate Bella, too.

HOLY FUCK!!!.... Can I say that on here??? HOLY FUCK!!! .... I wait so long for a update... and you do this to me... OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FUCK!! ... eh I love you anyways

oh my godd. im sure i've never had my mouth open for so longg. this was a jaw-droppa fo real!