OHHH Edward is in really really deep shit now!! And so is Bella! So not cool! please update soon, don't keep us waiting PLEASE!

Noooooooooooo!!! Im hating Bella and Edward very much at this moment.

So what does this mean? Will Edward and Emma call it quits! Will Bella somehow get pregnant by Edward...so many possibilities....was the off part because Edward knew Bella was married...where does Jake come into all of this...WOW! Please repost soon!

Author's Response:

no prego, bella can't have any more kids, thats why emma's an only child... i burned that bridge back in chapter 3 or 4 haha.

Umm... excuse me... you can't end it there!!!! Just not fair to your readers! More please :) soon? cherries???

Let me start by saying that I don't hate you. You are the vessel through which this amazing fic is coming to us. Your writing is truly wonderful, and I really do enjoy it.

However, I think I really do hate Edward and Bella. How could they do this to Jacob and Emma? They claim they love them? They don't have a clue what love is. That has thoroughly pissed me off. And I applaud your character, Emma, for actually being the only somewhat mature one in the group and not following her instincts. I can't imagine how much strength and control it would take not to phase and destroy everyone and everything in front of her.

I think I'm in shock. I didn't think Eddie and Bellsie would do that. I hope they suffer immensely for this.

Don't worry I don't hate you! I agree RL is a bitch and I would rather live in fanfiction world.

 For some reason I did not see this coming....hmm next chapter should be interesting.

Welcome back :)  As per usual, you broke me with this chapter.  I was terrified to see that you'd updated, since there can be no happy endings with this fic (as far as I can see but you always surprise so who knows).

I wanted him to choose Bella, but him going to her like this, and her just opening her legs for him like that just made me hate them both a little, and ache for Emma - and I'm all about the Bella/Edward!  I still love him a tiny but for shielding Bella on instinct though.  Even though he's a douche.  You've completely turned me around now - I just really hope Emma has a happy ending.

You write spectacularly well, and continue to shock me in the best possible ways.  Stellar job :)

Author's Response:

that tickles me. seriously, you have no idea how nice is it to hear that. so thank you very, VERY much

Honey, I was just thinking about you today and hoping you were fine.  I'm so glad to see you back, and to have some fresh Apple to bite. 

As it turns out, your extended absence was kismet because if it hadn't been so long since I'd read this story, this line would have done me in:  "I turned my head away from Bella to meet Emma's eyes,"  But I wasn't moved for Emma today!  It was simply high-time for Bella and Edward to consumate. 

"...for the very first time in my arduously eternal existence, I decided that life was too short to miss it."

Oh thank god for THAT!  <hissing> Edward.

I'm so impressed because as funny as you generally write, you also do melancholy/love-torn/bittersweet/s'bout-time-fuckhot-sex so well!

Okay, and NOW feel free to stick the vamp wherever you like.  :-D  I'm along for the ride, anyway.  I just like to see where you go with it.  (And I'm so glad you went to that piano.)

Author's Response:

haha thanks! im glad youre hangin in there. i cant take all the credit for the piano though, i sort of ripped it off of pretty woman ;)

OMFG! What the hell are they doing?!!?! Edward is cheating on his girlfriend with her mother. That's sick! What's most disturbing though is Bella betraying her own daughter. I get that she's still in love with Edward, but this is her only child we are talking about!

My heart is breaking for Emma and Jacob. My heart is also aching for Edward and Bella even though they've roaylly screwed things up.

Author's Response:

aren't i awful?

Okay, this is getting disturbing

well now things are getting really interesting...

I feel so bad for Bella.

Oh shit, he's going to tell her! Don't think she'll take it very well.

Love, love, love that she attacked Tanya!!!

I'm not too keen on Edward's speech about not loving anyone a fraction as much as he loves Emma. What the hell! Wasn't his and Bella's love supposed to be epic? And now it's not even a fraction of what he feel for Emma? Jerk!