Well I can not for the life of me figure out why anyone would unfavourite this story...

No...it isn't Bella and Edward but you had to be crazy if you thought you were going to get that after 3 chapters in.   What you have done is taken the story to a whole new place and I think it is fabulous.

Don't get me wrong....I LOVE Edward and Bella but I can also enjoy a good Jasper/Bella story.....I just want a good story!!  If we all wrote the same thing it would be a pretty boring fandom!!

Wow Bella is totally angry....and I understand it but.....wow!!  And poor Emma!!

OK, so I just re-read this, and I'm still in shock and...horny? JFC woman!

"There would be no misunderstanding about whom I made love to tonight." THAT killed me.

"I laid a line of kisses along the scar, slowly and strategically, paying homage to what it signified..." THAT actually made me tear up a little. (Don't tell anyone. I have a rep to maintain.)

You are brilliant. This fic never ceases to amaze me and I will be sitting here, rocking back and forth in a corner and singing Simon and Garfunkel until you update again. Nah, screw that. I'm off to stalk your ass on twitter :)

Wow, Sexward and Bella in such a piano situation like in Pretty Woman (there was an Edward too), then "Unchained Melody" in the playlist like in Ghost, but just why do I have to think of "Goodbye, my lover" while reading and cherishing the chapter? Maybe because I imagine James Blunt in the place of E and myself sitting on the baby grand???

Thank You for this awsome update, nice compromise having E & B humping but caught by Emma in the middle of it. Tomato, to-mah-to!

* cheering *

oh MY GOD!!!!  I didn't even see it coming....I am so ashamed!!!!  I can't believe she is a wolf.....well this is an interesting turn of events!!!

oh my goodness...who would've thunk that Edward had it in him!!!!  LOL

Grrrrrrrr.  Just read it. Boo!

Author's Response:

waaah wahh, give a bitch some leg room, im working on conflict!

I have not even read this yet, but i just have to say......YAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYY  you so made my Sunday night and updated!!!!!  Love you, Ho!

Author's Response:

hahahaha i've missed you so much, kiddo.

OMG I think Emma is going to go all ape shit on Edward now.

OMG...fabulous chapter!!!  I absolutely love this girl...she is great!!!  And I just had a complete wave of fear come over me the first time Jacob hugs his daughter after she has been out with Edward and smells vampire!!!

Once you go Black - you never go back? I can't believe you went there. You are certainly great with the one liners.

First I'd like to say WELCOME BACK!!!! AND YOU ALREADY KNOW I DON'T HATE YOU.  I equate you with Lady Gaga in the way that she's so unpredictable.  We thought her video telephone would consist of a club setting...and it was as far from that as it could be.  What I'm getting at is, this was like a totaly Lady Gaga moment for me.  I soooooo didn't expect that to happen!  I was so hoping that Eddie boy would get a conscience once he saw the c section scar, but he didn't.  (Oh and did I mention I love Lady Gaga, so the comparison was a compliment)

Now....shakes my head at Edward in shame.  Edward, Edward, Edward...at what point did you think sleeping with Bella was a good idea?  Bella, at what point did you decide having your daughters sloppy seconds was a good idea?  And I have to applaud emma for not ripping both of them into tiny little pieces and enjoying every minute of it, b/c I definitely would have if I were you.  Edward and Bella...I officially despise her, and hate him now.  I really hope they pay for what they did to Jacob and Emma!  I hope they are happy with their little incident, and I hope they enjoyed it, b/c now they have no choice but to deal with it! 

Amazing, Amazing job with the chapter.  I'm glad you're back, and you've certainly still got me as a reader no matter which way the story goes, I'll still be reading :)

Author's Response:

i got SUCH a boner at the gaga comparison, i think she's brilliant, that's the nicest thing you could have said to me. and thank you! im glad to be back and hoping to update again about next weekend. im working on it now but it aint easy being sleazy!

Oh my God, I can't believe this happened! Please don't break my little heart by making Edward and Bella stay together. I still can't believe Edward and Bella betrayed Emma like that. Yes, they had a past, but that was just the wrong thing to do, Emma is her only daughter. I'm hoping that Edward and Bella suffer in the future. I'm now really,really anxious to read the next chapter.