Wow....just wow. I have no idea what I would do in this situation.

I don't need to get people to follow my actions or words. I can say this for myself, and know some will agree. :)

merenade, whatever it is, needs to comment on the chapter, not to a person. that's what reviews are for. as well as that silly dazzledbride

you act immature, comment on the chapter or fanfic not to a person. [: k? well done.

Oh, and in reference to bitethebullet...

HONK HONK

Awwwwwww :( I think I feel bad, but I'm excited for the next chapter so I don't know how I feel! haha.

First of all, Tanya should have died. But I realize your story doesn't really roll like that. And secondly, Emma is going to shit.

honk if you think bitethebullet needs to cool out!

 

honk.

You're amazingly witty, and I love all the parting lines. Seriously :D

Author's Response:

i love new readers! i love them even more when they review, so bravo.

and thank you. witty is pretty much all i got going for me, i'm glad it's working out. and to answer your question about emma's name, i struggled with it quite a bit. i tried to think of what bella would name her child, and i went through some austen and bronte heroines along the way. i toyed with jane but i didn't want to confuse anyone. emma's name was elizabeth at first, but she preferred just to be called liz (sound like anyone you know? haha). that didn't feel right so i changed it to her preference being "ellie" which also didn't work for me. so i let it steep a little and then came up with emma, which sort of fits if you've ever read jane austen's emma (it's not an exact match, but this girl is no elizabeth bennett haha).

and thanks for thinking my lemon is hot. it was the first one i ever wrote! it took almost 3 weeks to get it right.

thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

Yay he still smells good to her :)

Oh my goodness, I did know it. Haha. The fever gave it away. OH no....now Edward will smell bad :(

Nice parting line :)

That was like, ridiculously cute. :D

I love her little mind bursts :D

In reply to your reply, I'm not saying that I hate your story. It's like any other people who have been viewing this chapter and the last plus more, who want Bella and Edward to end up together after how you've made them both react to one another, and how you've made them go through certain things. Some have more or less have laughed or liked how Emma didn't back down and fall on the ground. She told it like it was to Edward, when she faced him. She'll get through it. They all think that, I'm sure. And then the ones who are talking about who should end up with who, in this chapter I've seen reviews such as how Bella won't be strong, and wouldn't make it a second time, and how Edward and Bella should be together.
Not everyone likes Emma and Edward together. And atm, from reading that chapter, plus seeing reviews, it seems like they're happy Emma didn't take him back.

Yeah it's your story. I'm still watching. You just dislike my reviews. Probably because I think some things are going to happen or want something to happen that you haven't decided on (?). But I wouldn't want Edward and Bella together so much, if you hadn't have made certain events happen between them. If it was just a kiss, fair enough. I'd have thought oh cool - they've got their chance - but they slept together - and I think that's gotta mean something now. So from how you've done your story, it's making me want a certain couple out of it.

If that's a problem, then why did you do it in the first place? Why create two different pairings? Yes, "conflict", but there's other ways to cause conflict, and keep it at bay with who might come out on top. You've got people wanting Bella and Edward. And even if you just randomly tipped the side for Edward and Emma fans, it'd be a very random thing to do.

Anyway, Bella pov next? Then is there gonna be Edward pov soon?

Just realise you've got two different pairings who are liked. You started it, if you want to do what you want to do, fine. But at least give each a happy ending. And not just like: Jacob and Bella sort out their marriage, Edward and Emma have good times, the end. Because it's a bit more complicated. Jacob doesn't like Bella. Bella doesn't love Jacob much - she's in love with Edward. Edward's a fuck up. Emma's too strong for him, physically and emotionally, to take him back.
That's how it the picture looks to me. How it's been painted.

Hey, if you can't think of who to stick together, and don't want to give everyone a happy ending: maybe Edward can be single and doesn't get either. =D That'd keep everyone a little bit happy!