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Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chemistry
OMG I absolutely LOVE Emma...she's brazen, intoxicating, bold, and a real true open book.
Author's Response: I love that you love her! I was really worried about introducing an original character, I know how hard it can be to accept them. Emma is very close to my heart. She's the kind of girl who is often misunderstood... people think she's rude when she's really just being honest. There's a lot more coming up, so stick around, and thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: MizzVixen (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chemistry
What an interesting concept. And however you go with this one, it will be interesting considering Bella's her mother and Emma will undoubtedly tell her all about Edward when she gets home from school. I can't wait until you write more on this gem!
Author's Response: Why thank you! Emma and Edward have a way to go before Bella gets directly involved in the story, but she will eventually, don't worry. And between now and then there's a whole lot of awesomeness so stick around... chapter 3 is waiting to be validated right now.
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chemistry
OK, so I read the first two chapters out of curiosity, wondering how it would make me feel. Edward and....Bella's daughter? And a story with an NC17 rating? So there's a romance? As much as I'd like to be open minded, it creeps me out. And then there's just the idea of Bella and Jacob procreating. I'm just not sure.
Author's Response: I totally get where you're coming from, and you know, to each his own. I figured that this story wouldn't sit right with everyone. But I'll lay out my reasoning for you: I think the whole Twilight series asks you to forgive that Edward is ancient and in love with a high school girl, and I'm asking for a bit of the same... even though she's Bella's daughter (stranger things have happened). And I went NC17 because I am a lover of lemons and I'd like to throw a few in later on. Yes, there's a romance, the best stories all have them :) Oh and the Bella and Jake thing, it's just how I envisioned the chain of events if Edward never returned... I (and Jacob) think he would have eventually wore her down. If it's not for you, I take no offense and I apologize for creeping you out. I thank you for giving it a try anyway, and I appreciate you taking the time to tell me how you feel.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chemistry
Oh, this is gonna be fun! Until she mentions meeting Edward Cullen at school to mom and dad.
Jake is going to sh*t. And Bella will probably scream and then pass out. Or be mad as hell.
So, what's it gonna be? Dying to know...
Author's Response: Now what kind of story would this be if I had ALL the fun in the third chapter? Bella and Jacob don't know yet, but they will and it will be nothing less than explosive, I promise. But we've got tons of work to do before then. I'm working on my 11th chapter right now and we're still not there but I've had some magnificent revelations of OTHER sorts. It's shaping up nicely, so stay tuned :)
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chemistry
love this story
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Scented.
Interesting start- on to next chappier to learn more..
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Scented.
love it.
Author's Response: thanks so much! stay tuned, i have chapter 2 in the queue waiting for validation right now.
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Scented.
interesting. can't wait for more
Author's Response: thanks so much! its on the way, just waiting to get validated... stick around!
Reviewer: merelade (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Scented.
I totes dig your 1918 reference... this looks like it is going to be very interesting. Keep writing and believe in yourselffff.
Author's Response: wow, your review really touched my heart. thanks to you, i really DO believe in myselfffffff now. totes mcgoats. lovies, sistah.
Reviewer: PyranicPhoenix (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Scented.
Wow, so far I love it. And I even have to point out that there are other schools named after President Wilson. I happened to go to an elementary school named after the man. But keep writing, its good so far!
Author's Response: thanks so much! i was a little nervous because im such a newbie. how funny is that about your school?! anyway, chapter 2 is in the queue and should be up shortly, so let me know what you think!
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Scented.
Interesting idea for a fic. I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thanks so much! chapter 2 is in the queue and should be posted soon, so let me know what you think!
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Scented.
Great first chapter. Can't wait for more.
Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: thanks so much for your review! chapter 2 is in the queue and should be up shortly, so i hope you stick with me!
Reviewer: jstafantasy (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Scented.
I'm intrigued and want more. :D
Author's Response: chapter 2 is in the queue and should be up shortly. im so glad you like my story!
Reviewer: TinyTangerine (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Scented.
Hey!!
=)
I like the plot on this one!! I'm curious about how this is going to develope! Please keep going and I can assure you that I'll be reading =)
<3
Andie
Author's Response: hey andie! im so glad you like my story idea! thanks for your interest... i have a few chapters built up from when i was waiting to be validated, so chapter 2 is in the queue, expect it shortly! also, feel free to toss out any ideas or suggestions you have... keep reading, i've got some stuff in the works :)
Reviewer: Heather U (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Scented.
I am looking forward to the rest of the story. You definitely have my attention
Author's Response: well thank you! chapter 2 is in the queue so be on the lookout for it, i have a few chapters built up so i can update fairly quickly. hope you stick with me!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Scented.
This is really fantastic - keep going!!!! I laughed at this line: 'Yes, I’m sexy… No, don’t sit next to me.' I love Edward's sarcasm :D Have I mentioned...keep going!!!
Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Scented.
WOWWOWWOWWOWOWOWOWOWOW
plz write more if not ill get emmett to hunt you down!:P
lol
Author's Response: haha no need for the beating, chapter 2 is in the queue and should be up shortly. thanks so much for your interest, i hope you stick with me!
Reviewer: youyou (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Scented.
Interesting idea though I hope future chapters will be a bit longer.
Author's Response: hi! thanks so much for your interest and input. i know the chapter is a bit short, and im sorry to say that the next few are a little brief as well, but the good news is that they're written so as soon as i can get them validated they will be up. i'm just sort of getting into my groove and the chapters are getting longer and longer each time. i hope you stick with me!
Reviewer: iDrinkBloodshake (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Scented.
Wow, this sounds pretty awesome. I hope to get updates soon. Tomorrow's not soon enough! :D
Author's Response: i'm so glad you think so! chapter 2 is in the queue, expect it shortly... and stick with me, i have big plans for this story! thanks for your review, and feel free to toss out ideas or suggestions!
Reviewer: inessa (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Scented.
Oh this story is off to a good start
Please don't make her a tool like her mother - she has to have a little fire in her something bella didn't have
Please update soon
Author's Response: your review made me smile! i have big plans for her... she's practically the anti-bella, im so glad were on the same page. chapter 2 is in the queue and should be up shortly, i have a few built up from when i was waiting to be validated so ill be able to post fairly quickly. thanks for reading!
Reviewer: addicted2black (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Scented.
I am loving where you are going with this. Please update soon, kay?
Author's Response: your wish, my command. chapter 2 is in the queue and should be up shortly, keep an eye out! thanks so much for your input, it really encouraged me to keep working!
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Scented.
Hey this story looks interesting. Looking forward for more!
Author's Response: well thanks! more is on the way... keep an eye out!
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