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Reviewer: Jay Middle (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Scented.
This is so good. It's like you injected Jake's personality in Bella. I was laughing out loud at her. Please keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Look for an update on Sunday nights usually, that's when my beta seems to be validating.
Reviewer: mimajo (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chemistry
I can't remeber if I reviewed before, so if I did I suppose I will just review again. I love this story! It is so fun to read something with a different twist to it, I cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep writing!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad! I'll keep writing if you keep reading :)
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chemistry
this is just to cute for words cant wait till her mama gets wind of her new lab partner
Author's Response: soon enough :) and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilio (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 01:01 AM · On: Chemistry
I really like it so far, interesting storyline!!! keep going!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working my butt off, more to come soon!
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chemistry
totally love it. Emma's adorable. So, I guess that she got her outgoing personaility from Jake?
Author's Response: Definitely! I'm so glad you like it!
Reviewer: DreaC (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chemistry
Um OMG! I think SHE just dazzled HIM! What? lol Loved it! I love Emma! And I can see the qualities that Edward tend not to mention, those are definitely Jacob's trade mark lol! I think she might very well be the perfect combination of the two! Gosh Great story! Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next one :)
Author's Response: I'm so happy you love Emma. She's very close to my heart and I was worried about introducing an original character. I tried to blend Bella and Jake and give her a little twist of her own as well, so I'm glad you read it that way. I'm so honored at the response Emma is getting from most people, and I'm updating as fast as possible to show my gratitude.
Reviewer: DreaC (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Scented.
I like this idea! I saw this as I was looking over the most recent list and I almost jumped with excitement! I can honestly say I've never read a story similar to this before! Instead of saying "you had me at hello" I'll say, "you had me with the summary"! From this chapter on I will be a faithful reader! Great chapter!
Author's Response: THANK you so much! There's a ton more in the works, I'm happy to be of service.
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chemistry
Oh wow! I love this! Please update soon! Man, I seriously love Emma! Wow! It seems she might bring out the lighter side of Edward's personality as well.
MORE MORE MORE MORE!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you get where I'm going with Emma, she forces Edward to lighten up and makes him almost a new vampire. I have 11 chapters written so far, so there's more on the way as quickly as it gets validated.
Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Chemistry
OMG...I am completely caught by your story... I'm snagged...and completely loving it...can't wait for an update...
Author's Response: I'm so glad! I've really been working hard on it, and it makes me so happy that people are responding to it. I bought a new computer chair today so that I'd spend more time working on my original novel... but I have the sneaking suspicion it will only encourage fanfic :)
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chemistry
nice
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chemistry
It somehow seems wrong to me that he would want her daughter...The chemistry's not the same between them; it's like she's a substitute for the real thing. I'm wondering if he's going to have any actual encounters with Bella? And is Jacob a werewolf in this story? Because I would have thought Emma would have that smell too, if that were the case...
Author's Response: All will be revealed in good time :) Thanks for your input. I'm sorry if you're not into Emma and Edward, but they're what this story is about - it's just how it played out in my head.
Reviewer: Missycullen09 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 04:26 AM · On: Chemistry
Your story is really original and i like it.
Emma is like the prefect mis of bella and jake, bellas looks and jakes cocky confidence, well done =]
update soon please =] top marks i'd say, highest ratings all round
Author's Response: That's so nice to hear, you have no idea. I've been working really hard on this story and I'm so happy to know it's well received. More is on the way.
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 02:47 AM · On: Chemistry
That was great! I'm so glad Emma's not all meek and shy. This should be fun!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so relieved that a lot of readers seem to be feeling Emma, I was worried they wouldn't accept a new character. I'm so glad you're reading.
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Chemistry
Well that's a first impression! Go girl.
Can't wait for more.
Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Chapter 3 is in the queue and I'm all the way up to 11 in real time, so I'll post as fast as I can validate. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Chemistry
LOL I think I'm really going to enjoy this piece of fic. Great start!!
Author's Response: THANKS! I'm so glad you like it!
Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chemistry
This is a good story. Is it ExE or ExB? So weird to see him w/ her daughter. :D
Author's Response: Thanks! It's Edward and Emma, I know it's weird for you, it's weird for him too, but she's pushy and she likes him so eventually he comes around :)
Reviewer: MJae (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chemistry
Different take on a story. I like it! Very interesting!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was really trying to do something unlike anything I'd seen before, I'm glad you like it.
Reviewer: masochisticlion7 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chemistry
interesting idea! I don't know how I feel about edward and emma...seems a little weird, but i'm excited to see where you go with this!!
Author's Response: A few people have expressed som hesitation about Edward and Emma. All I can say is... that's how it's working out in my brain and I tried to tackle it as tactfully as possible lol, let me know what you think as we continue on.
Reviewer: gldnkltz (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Chemistry
haha I'm loving it, so unlike anything I've read before. update please!? :)
Author's Response: Ask and you shall receive. Chapter 3 is submitted and waiting to get validated, and I'm up to Chapter 11 in the writing process. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chemistry
Wow her daughter is not like Bella! Only in the sense that he can't read her mind and she is not very graceful. I want to know Bella's reaction to Emma's new friend Edward Cullen. I am thinking that she is going to freak out when she hears this bit of news that the Cullen's are back and they are so close to her.
Author's Response: Haha I think you'll be surprised with how Bella finds it all out... stay tuned :)
Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chemistry
how cute! i love this!!! i bet bella's gonna have a duck, a cow, a whole damn farm! lol
Author's Response: I love everyone's anticipation of Bella's reaction. I haven't gotten that far yet, but I will and I think it will be awesome. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Chemistry
oooh! i love it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! There's more coming right up!
Reviewer: BeyondStarsAndBoulevards (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chemistry
I think you're doing a very, very fine job writing this story! I love it, and it's only part two! Added to favorites. Can't wait for more chapters!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! My goal in life (when life=fanfic) is to get onto Top 10 most favorited, so thanks for getting the ball rolling :) I'm so glad your into it, and chapter 3 is waiting to get validated right now, so stay tuned and please keep letting me know what you're thinking! It helps me write like you wouldn't believe and gives me perspective and direction.
Reviewer: crazyfan (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chemistry
this is really good :)
is this going to be an edward and bella story ?
Author's Response: Thank you! Where I'm at right now, it is definitely an Emma and Edward story lol, I'm working on directly introducing Bella to the plot, but I have some kinks I'm trying to work out first. Maybe I WILL play the cougar card, considering Bella is now 40 and Edward is but a high school junior :)
Reviewer: merelade (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chemistry
oh em GEE! i love emma she is so feisty and unlame (aka nothing like her mother) she clearly got some of jacob's carefree genes. i already totally LOVE her character and i LOVE that she says CURSE WORDS. cursing is like SO cool!!!!!!!!!
best story eveaaaa.
Author's Response: Emma is the anti-Bella. Cursing is the shit. Thanks for reviewing.
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