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Reviewer: merelade (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 09:09 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
i'll hit you. right in the kisser!
oh em GEE, jay kay. i love dis storyyyy. i lyk that bella isn't annoying about giftssss like her mommm.
Author's Response: her mom is annoying about every thing. emma's the shit, bella is shit. see the dif?
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 09:06 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
I love it. My cousin has a daughter named Emma Grace.
Author's Response: thanks, i thought the name was very beautiful and fitting for my emma. shes so unladylike sometimes, its important that she be at least a little feminine lol.
Reviewer: lisamackb (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 08:56 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
Very interesting read... I like it. Cant wait to read more.
Author's Response: thanks! ive got a ton more written, im just waiting for it to get validated and posted.
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 08:48 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
Great chapter!! I was getting pretty teary eyed when Emma started to play Bella's lullaby. I wonder would Bella have at some point ever told Emma about her first love (Edward)? and since her father is Jacob who is a wolf, is she also aware of the Quliente legends? Does she have some idea of who the Cullens are and what Edward is?
Author's Response: WELL youll just have to stick around and find out, i promise everything will be revealed in time and ive got MASSIVE stuff happening in the next few chapters, youre going to love it, im sure.
Reviewer: masochisticlion7 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 08:27 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
keep up the good work! you've got fans!
Author's Response: thanks so much! ive spent my entire life seeking approval, having fans is beyond my wildest dreams :)
Reviewer: DreaC (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 08:18 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
I'm always so sad when the chapter ends! Your story is my brand of heroine entirely lol I love it to pieces! Emma just grows on me more and more, and Edward is so much cooler in your story than I've ever read him being! Yes he's still brooding but with Emma he's light and fun, and he smiles! She brings him back entirely from the brink of depression! She even had him playing Hendrix lol How great is that! Yay Edward and Emma! Great job, and keep them coming :)
Author's Response: thank you so much! your reviews always make me so happy, you really are getting what im trying to make the story about. more is on the way so stay tuned, and ive got HUGE stuff happening in the next few chapters so it should be a good time.
Reviewer: MJae (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 08:16 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
Love it.
Author's Response: danke, im working really hard, im so happy you like it.
Reviewer: jlugo (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 08:10 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
The lullaby. That was so sad. Poor Edward.
I really like this story, I'm excited to see what happens.
Are Bella and Edward ever going to see each other?
or is this just an Emma and Edward story?
Either way great job :)
Author's Response: thank you! as for edward and bella... well wouldnt you like to know ;) im dropping bombshells in every chapter i write, so you will find out soon enough. exciting stuff is in the works, stick with me.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 07:49 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
I'm not sure what to trhink of this story. I am sure awkward is a vast understatement to describe how Bella & Jake will react to Emma's new friend
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 07:49 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
I'm not sure what to trhink of this story. I am sure awkward is a vast understatement to describe how Bella & Jake will react to Emma's new friend
Author's Response: most definitely. we will get there eventually, but theres a lot that needs to be done before the shit hits the fan :)
Reviewer: Cloudie day (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 07:49 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
YAY!!! Love it
Author's Response: i love that you love it! more is in the queue, hopefully will be up by the end of the week.
Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 07:40 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
Oh I see now...Jake used to hold Bella's hand as a show of affection.. so it makes perfect sence for Emma to carry some of the same attributes of both parents.. How totally fantastic... Clearly Emma is completely taken away by Edward...but her ability to not it show on her face no less that is "priceless".. Why is it that Edward can hear some of her internal thinking and not others???...(hummm).. Also I am so glad that Edward is finding himself liking Emma for herself and not just as a link to Bella.. that would just be cold!!! Can't wait to see the progression of their friendship...I wonder also if Emma have the whole wolf thing going on??? (hummmm)..this chptr definately opened the door for lots of questions...Update soon!!!!
Author's Response: youre touching on SO many important things in this review, and i promise, all will be revealed in time. im working on ch 13 right now and by that point, a lot of your questions have already been answered. youre very bright! good work picking up on some of my foreshadowing. ch 5 is on the way, waiting to be validated.
Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 07:28 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
I'm really enjoying this story and am very curious to see where it goes.
Author's Response: why thank you! im working on some plot issues for later in the story right now but i have it written through chapter 12 so hang around and ill show ya a good time :)
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 07:24 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
I can't do this. I've tried. But the idea of Edward kissing Bella's daughter just doesn't sit well with me. I can't see this ending well. Obviously it's not an E&B story, and an E&E story is just wrong. Sorry.
Author's Response: well, like i said in my chapter notes, it might not be for everybody. that doesnt necessarily mean its wrong, its just different. thanks for giving it a try anyway, even if its not for you.
Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 07:23 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
He doesn't feel guilt for leaving Bella but just being able "to pick up" with Emma? If I was Bella and found out...Whew!!! Hell have to fury. I love the storyline. ;0)
Author's Response: thanks so much! there is about to be a TON of fury falling from the sky, stick around and youll see.
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 07:07 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
Wow! This has so much potential! I hope it works out! I'd like to see Edward happy, and it seems it couldn't be possible for Bella and him to get back together. It also seems that Emma is smitten, and it would crush her if he loved her mother, if things progress, that will be a huge obstacle! Hmmm... like I said so much potential! I still love Emma! Hmmm.. just thought of something, so maybe Edward can hear her when it comes to her "feelings" for him? Unlike Bella who was completely silent, if he fell for Emma, and he could at least here how she feels about him, it woudl alleviate some of the trying angst he always brings to the table! Please update soon!
Author's Response: youre half right. edward eventually figures out why he can only hear emma sometimes, and it makes a bit of sense, considering her mother is a shield, after all. an update is on the way, and big things are happening soon so stick around.
Reviewer: crazyblue (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 07:06 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
This is incredible! and, being a fellow pop culture junkie, I love the random inserts - they make me laugh out loud every time! :)
Author's Response: thank you so much! im so glad youre picking up on them, i cant help myself i have to drop them in at every turn.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 06:53 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
intriguing...
Author's Response: glad im hanging on to your interest... 6, 7, 8, 9 are going to be pretty crazy, i hope you stick around for them :)
Reviewer: TinyTangerine (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 06:35 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
For a second I thought that Emma would ask him to go to her house...
I'm still curious about how Jacob and Bella around going to react about Edward..!!
<3
Andie
Author's Response: andie, ill be honest with you, i havent even written that part yet. im up to chapter 13 and there are so many other time bombs going off that i didnt even get to the explosion that is bella and jake finding out about edward. im still playing around with a lot of things, but there is GOOD SHIT on the rise, chapter 6, 7, 8, and 9 are BANGARANG if i do say so myself :) i cant wait to get your opinion on them, ive been working so hard. thanks for sticking with me!
Reviewer: Axciom (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 06:34 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
Excellent!!
This is an original angle, well executed, I'm interested to see where it goes! Sir or ma'am, you have yourself a dedicated follower!
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Author's Response: grazie mille! i work hard to try to come up with good stuff for you guys, and im glad you appreciate it. more is on the way.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 06:18 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
wow...I love your mind. Emma is great. She's so full of life, so much like jacob. She's wonderful... Edward is amazing too.. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: thanks so much! more is coming up, just waiting to be validated. in total i have 12 chapters written and im working on 13 at this point... i estimate it will be around 20 or so, but who knows. thanks for reading, and thanks more for reviewing :)
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Birthdays and Boundaries
I LOVE Emma...bella's daughter will give Edward JUST what he needed...a thrilling freakin ride.
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:59 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.
love it! cant figure out if your going for love or friendship. cant wait to find out!
Author's Response: youre gonna figure it out, and soon. the next few chapters are pretty dynamic, im super excited to post them and hear your feelings on them, ive been workin my butt off over here :)
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chemistry
Omg I love Emma...she is bella's mom...except brilliant..wonderful.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Scented.
I like the concept. I think you and I are going to enjoy each other.
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