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Reviewer: DreaC (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Blurry

All I have to say is WOW WOW WOW!  Yet another great just amazing chapter!  I love your story so much that I read it multiple times just to get my Emma/Edward fix!  My friend even sneaks on to my account and reads it when you update! (so if you get like multiple reviews, it maybe b/c i just had to read it again or my friend signed on and read it!)  I must say that I've had a really crappy day but reading this has brightened it a bit!  You are a very awesome writer, and this story just blows me away with each chapter that you submit!  Don't keep us waiting too long for the next one :)



Author's Response:

its in the queue already :)

Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Blurry

I'm really enjoying this little ride though I haven't the first clue where you're headed! Isn't Bella going to (pardon my French) shit a chicken when she finds out? doesn't Emma speak with her mother about her friends and where she's going? This is odd.

Jake wasn't keen on Edward as a rival, I wonder how he'll take to him as a son-in-law. Oh, are Jake and Bella still together? I may have missed it.

Pleeeeeeeeease update soon! =]



Author's Response:

jake and bella are still together. all will be revealed in good time my friend. theres an update in the queue already, waiting on validation.

Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Blurry

its weird for him to be getting so close to bellas daughter and how is bella going to feel when she finds out about all this.



Author's Response:

it might not work out the way you think... hell, it might not work out the way i think lol... its hard to predict how these things are gonna go, i have a perfectly fine idea and once i start writing its all out the window.

Reviewer: zahir (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Blurry

i like the idea but i just cant think about Edward without Bella... and he knows she is Bella's baby is even worst...

i want to know what is going on in your mind and how this story is going to end but i just cant take it



Author's Response:

i get how it can be hard. some people are just bella/edwardiholics. personally, i am not, and i wanted to put edward with emma, my original character... which is the closest that i'll ever get to him, so i try to make it work :)

Reviewer: MizzVixen (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:57 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

This story is going so well. She's so unlike Bella, and I can't wait to see where all of this leads. Hopefully a nice romance but what will happen when Bella finds out? Oooh, excitement!!!



Author's Response:

oh theres a ton of stuff on the way, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sunshineflwer (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chemistry

I'm very much enjoying your story. Edward is totally taken with her and I love Emma's quirky personality. She's not as shy nor insecure as Bella was.



Author's Response:

thanks! thats definitely what i was going for in the emma character, i tried to make her as un bella as possible :)

Reviewer: BiteTheBullet79 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 02:48 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

I've reviewed, you've replied.

I did ask if I'd be interested in the remainding of your fanfic. And you bite my head off. I know you said, don't watch. But I wanted to know still if it was worth to watch. Thank you very much for making it clear it isn't. Hope you get the reviews you want.

Count me out then.

Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 02:15 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

Please make more! it is sooo good! i hardly ever reveiw so ur specil!:D



Author's Response:

I'm honored. More is on the way, just for you :)

Reviewer: BiteTheBullet79 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 12:56 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

She is not Bella though! Why does Edward even come up with that crap, that she's Bella in so many ways? If he's going to like her because she's like Bella...that is sick. I see the Twilight saga as only Bella and Edward's love. Maybe Bella and Jacob's love if not hers and Edward. But Edward, cannot move on from Bella. It'd be unfair to stick him too with someone just like Bella. He could win Bella back easily, I am very sure. So why go for her daughter? It would hurt Bella. It would. She would have through enough.

I know we all have different tastes, in fanfiction, and romances. But if you are going to do a Twilight one, why stick Edward with anyone else but Bella? You may as well not be interested in the Twilight saga. I've seen 4 chapters. Can you tell me whether there is going to be a love between Bella and Edward and NOTHING between Emma and Edward? I'd like to know, because you have mentioned pretty much, that we don't have to watch it. I'd like to know whether I'd be interested or not.



Author's Response:

As I said in my chapter notes, noone is forcing you to read my story.

You can see the Twilight saga as whatever you'd like to, and I as whatever I'd like to, that's called interpretation. Whether or not you like the way someone interprets their story is called preference. If you'd prefer not to read my story, then don't waste your time. I can stick Edward with anyone I want because it's fanFICTION... that means it's made up and it can be whatever the author chooses. I happen to be interested in the Twilight saga, and not in Bella, which is why I chose to give Edward a potential romance with a different character. FF is beautiful because it gives the fans a chance to change what they don't like and explore different facets of the story and characters. People write all-human FF, does that mean they "may as well not be interest in the Twilight saga?" No. It's just for funsies.

This is not a primarily Bella and Edward story, though there is a subplot between the two. I do not think you will be interested in the remainder of my story, but I do suggest bringing a less literal and more open mind to the stories you do choose to follow through on. Twilighted.net is just fans showing their love for a story. It is not nuclear fission.

Reviewer: LaBellaBonita (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 12:06 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

I loved this.... You are very descriptive.  It felt like I was the invisible lab partner... Keep up the good work and I hope you update sooner than later.....



Author's Response:

thanks so much! ive got quite a bit written, so it should be up soon!

Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 11:49 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

yepp, Edward is in trouble with Emma. She has a lot of Jacob in her, and Jacob is very outspoken and acts on his thoughts



Author's Response:

exactly. you got it girl.

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Scented.

hehe maybe we should do a collab sometime :)

 

Love your story, don't think i don't love your story!



Author's Response:

that's definitely something we might be able to work out once i put the apple to rest!

Reviewer: DreaC (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chemistry

YOU ARE AWSOME!!!



Author's Response:

girl, YOU are awesome. dont think i dont appreciate it :)

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 03:16 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

okay I have a theory not sure if i'm right or what....but is Emma in ANY way related to Edward?  The timing seems off - I grant you but Is this a bxe story in any way?



Author's Response:

WHOA... sorry that threw me a little. INTERESTING! youve got a good brain for coming up with siuch an idea, but ive gotta say outright though, without being cryptic or sneaky, no way. in my head i have them doing things that would make that SO not ok :) its not bxe, though they might have a few... interesting encounters. try it out! if its not for you, then all you wasted was a few minutes reading.

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 01:28 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

Someone is falling in love and doesn't know it. I love it how Emma is turning the tables on Edward.

Thanks for posting.



Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing! im waiting on validation again, i have a whole lot more on the way and big things on the horizon, so stick around and i promise it will be worth it.

Reviewer: erin_cullen (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:05 AM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

i think it would be great if there was an emma POV and if bella found out bout edward and so did jake?

just a thought i love the story its different frm all the others ive read i love it xD



Author's Response:

be careful what you wish for...

 

theres so much fun stuff coming up, i cant wait for you to get a taste.

Reviewer: C_beng89 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:54 AM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

love, love, love this story keep up with the awesomeness!!!



Author's Response:

thanks! theres so much more coming and i cant wait to share it with you guys and get your opinions, i love my readers!

Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:41 AM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

Ah man, there's no more to read. :(. I really liked this chapter, and I hope you update soon!



Author's Response:

thank you thank you thank you! im updated as quick as i can, i have a ton written and i just need it to get validated so im waiting on my beta.

Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Birthdays and Boundaries

Yep, I found many current remarks in this chapter, but I still enjoyed reading it! Awesome story, by the way!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 12:09 AM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

Yeah, um Edward, I hate to tell you this, but I think you are headed to the "wrong" column.  You are going to need to have a "come to Jesus moment" because I cannot imagine, in this lifetime, that Bella is going to be remotely o.k. with you even thinking about touching her daughter.  Not to mention Daddy Jake. 



Author's Response:

youre absolutely right about that. well just have to wait it out to see what happens.

Reviewer: mimajo (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:23 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

I had a really boring day at work today and coming home to this chapter suddenly made my day 100% better. I can't wait for the next chapter. More please!!!



Author's Response:

what a great review! theres a ton more coming and im posting it as fast as i can get it validated. i live to serve you :)

Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:21 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

love it!!!!! can't wait for more!!!!! so......is emma gonna slip up anytime soon at home and "announce" her new friend?!



Author's Response:

she just might. youll have to stick around and find out what her angle is, its coming soon, i promise.

Reviewer: Tuski7 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:10 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

Is this really gonna be a Emma/Edward pairing?  Won't that sorta betray Edward's feelings for Bella?  I mean since Emma's Bella's daughter and Edward just seemed to have transfered his feelings for Bella to Emma, doesn't that betray Bella and than later on Emma?



Author's Response:

im weaving a very tangled web, for sure, even i have sorted it out entirely, but im going with it. i put emma and edward together to try something different, because hes ALWAYS with bella, and i like to be diff :)

Reviewer: inessa (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:03 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

Loved it! it was perfect in every way

keep up please



Author's Response:

why thank you! more is in the works and ive got big things happening :)

Reviewer: Rahveryn (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 09:40 PM · On: If music be the food of love, play on.

wow, not sure about this.  It was perfect and all, even chuckled at the Wayne's World Nod.  But... Bella's kid.  huh. I understand Ed's discomfort.  But like I said, the day was perfect. 



Author's Response:

edwards having almost as hard a time as you are with it. and kudos for picking up on waynes world! i was hoping at least someone would point it out, youre the only one!

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