Very nicely citrus, dearest. I love that she trash talks him while they're getting it on! LOL, a woman after my own heart. I am a huge fan of Kevin Smith and nearly peed myself at the reference. =]

Update soon, and much love.

Author's Response:

ahhh i love that you get me. thank you so much. i popped the update in the queue, so it wont be long. and im struggling with my newest chapters so im gonna devote a few hours to them tonight. im glad you almost peed yourself.

HA! “Once you go Black… you never go back.” (Standing ovation and a tip of the hat) Well played lady, that was a perfect ending.

Author's Response: with that kind of ovation you deserve an encore! ive got an update in the queue, waiting on validation. thanks for reading!

Emma's personality is a stark contrast to that of her mother's, but as Edward said, it suits her.

Author's Response:

im glad you think so! shes got a lot of jake in her, i think.

Ohooh! Doing it without protection! Hmm.....do I see a big belly coming?

Thanks for posting.

Author's Response:

hahaha only by way of cheesecake! i put up a disclaimer in my next chapter's notes bc i dont want any baby rumors flying around. these poor kids have enough to deal with!

I love a cheesy Emma and dirty-talking Edward!  But when is Bella going to find out, or more importantly, when is Emma going to find out about Bella???  Can Rosalie tell her so Emma can attack her?  Oh, that would be great!

Author's Response:

im still toying with rosalie's involvement in Emma discovering edward's dirty little secret, i havent made anything concrete yet. but ive done some wicked tarantino shit in this story and in about 3 or 4 chapters youre gonna shit your drawers, trust me.

I'm suprised they had unprotected sex. Edward's jizz wont hurt Emma I guess!  Great chapter!

Author's Response:

ugh i know im a terrible role model but i dont think condoms are sexy. and youre right, edward has harmless jizz. thank you!

OMG!!!!!!  I'm fanning myself.  That was hot vamp/wolf sex!!!!!!!!  Im so proud of Edward!!

But back to reality..I hope this ends well.  I love them together..I just hope it works out.  Can't wait for more:)

Author's Response:

ugh i know i hope it works out too, right now im being tormented by plot complications. stay tuned.

Amazing update, hott and passionate. I adore Emma, and I totally love this  Edward.

Now, what is going to happen when Jake and especially Bella finds out about them?

Eager for more soon.

Author's Response:

thank you thank you!

That wasn't a lemon, that was the whole damn orchard. Best I have had the pleasure of reading in a while! {no pun intended.}  ;)

Author's Response:

hahahahahahaha thank you, that is very special to me.

This was HOT! Emma and Edward look good together....wonder what it will be like to meet the parents...I figure that will come up again. It wouldn't be the first time Bella lusted after her son-in-law...LOL Repost soon PLEASE!!!

Author's Response:

of course baby, you know id never let you down. the update is in the queue and theres a guest appearance by emmett and rosalie ;)

That was great!  God, her one liners!  She's so much better for him than Bella!  (Ooops did I just say that???) Can't help it! Emma is seriously one of my fave characters!  I'm concerned how she's going to react to the whole Edward used to date her mom thing....How's he going explain that???  Hurry!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

hahahahaha this is a safe place, you can say whatever you want about bella lol. i threw some awesome twists, and well get there soon enough. for now, enjoy the ride :)

Oh.

My.

Word.

 

Okay. Sad truth is that my first thought is, "What are her parents going to say when they find out what she's been up to and with whom?"

Secondly, I'm kind of amazed at Edward. lol

Author's Response:

ahh good or bad? youre killing me!