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Reviewer: kelseymarie33 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Bait and Switch
Ughh, I could quite literally kill you.
I want it...
Badly (:
Author's Response: you could indeed... but youd have to catch me first ;)
ill give it you ya girl, give me a minute.
Reviewer: Zyla Nyx (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Bait and Switch
OMG!!! OK FIRST OF ALL I JUST HAVE TO TELL YOU THAT I EFFING LOVE YOUR STORY. ITS FEISTY, FANTASTIC AND FABULOUS ALL ROLLED INTO ONE :) I ABSOLUTELY LOVE WHAT YOU HAVE DONE WITH EMMA! SHES EVERYTHING THAT WAS GOOD ABOUT BELLA PLUS YOU HAVE FIXED ALL OF INCREDIBLY ANNOYING QUALITIES AND ADDED SOME SMART-ASS! I ADORE YOU, REALLY I DO. AND I CANNOT WAIT FOR THIS TO UPDATE. YOU HAVE CURRENTLY TAKEN MY #1 FAN-FIC SPOT! IM CURRENTLY ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT!! GIVE IT TO US SOON WOMAN!
~Z
*TWIN!!! CAN YOU BELEIVE HOW FANTASTIC SHE IS!! I LOVE HER!!*
Author's Response: im so honored to be your #1! and i promise i adore you too. ill give it to ya alright ;)
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Bait and Switch
GUH. I don't even have words.
Author's Response: so were you... dazzled?
Reviewer: Cosmikou (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Bait and Switch
that's a good one !
Coooooome oooon ! let's meet mummy ! ;)
Author's Response: haha thanks! i know shes really excited to make an appearance.
Reviewer: Twihard-Twilighter (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Bait and Switch
Not fair, definately not fair!
This story is really good, I admit, I was sceptical at first, but I really like it now.
- You can't just end it there!!! No no no .. You need to write more as soon as possible!! I have a ver distinct love/hate relationship with cliffhangers, this is a good one, so good in fact that I absolutely hate it - in a good way thoug. If that makes any sence at all??
Author's Response: you dont understand how good it makes me feel when people say that they hated it at first but came around. so seriously, thank you so much. and i totally get the love/hate, i feel something very similar myself :)
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Bait and Switch
ugh! what a cliffie
Author's Response: right? im horrible boo me off the stage.
Reviewer: tashlyn (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Bait and Switch
NO NO NO!! That was so nasty of you. I want it bad, really bad. I'm loving this story. It's a great idea. Can't wait to see what happens to poor little (or should i say big:D) Edward.
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA LOVE your pun on edwards peen. i have the day off today so im hoping to crank out some new stuff but ive been a little writer's blocky the last few times ive tried. i know WHAT i want to say (for the most part) but HOW i want to say it gets caught in my throat, so to speak. also, im working on another sex scene and im trying really hard to make it different each time lol. but thank you!
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Bait and Switch
Dude! So, so very wrong to leave it there! That was just cruel! I totally loved the chapter, of course, but I need more! :D
Author's Response: i know, im SO the grinch. but i think im going to spend the better part of today writing so hopefully that makes up for it.
Reviewer: catthomas32 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Bait and Switch
Ok, I love this story. I made it to the most recent chapter and have to admit that I really thought that you were going to have Emma imprint on Bella. I am not sure if you will work that into the story where she imprints on someone else, Emmet would have been funny, but I love the way you ended your cliffie. I would like to think that the love Bella and Edward shared has changed over time where it is deep, but nonsexual. I would hope that Bella has learned to appreciate the utlimate sacrifice Edward made to leave and resulted in the real love of her life, her daughter. Now, I can also see you having some serious issues with the other LaPush inhabitants and of course daddy. The actress I see playing this role is actually the little blonde gal who was in Cruel Intentions 2 as the clueless girl on the bike who is deflowered in the back of the limo at the end of the movie. I am certainly looking forward to seeing where you take this story. Will the Volturi come back? Will Bella be turned? Does Emma imprint and does she ever get a pack? Be an alpha like the gal was in Wolf Lake? Oh the places you can go and I will faithfully follow. Excellent writing technique, grammar and mechanics are solid, and your cliffies are beyond WHEW! Happy Merry Christmas to me for finding your story.
And, yes, I want the rest BAD! :) I do hope you will maybe count this as 2 whole reviews???
Michelle in Arkansas
aka
catthomas32
Author's Response: well thank you! im still working through the bella and edward shit in my head. i know how it ends up, but i not certain on the route ill take to get it there yet. as for imprinting, i am SO against it, and i wont put it in my story. i dont think. but you know, never say never. if it starts to work for me, then i might lol. but as a general rule, i dont agree with it... its one of the issues i have with SM. if i ever meet her for drinks, shes getting a piece of my mind. wait i dont think mormons can drink. maybe she will want to meet for a grilled cheese or something. i digress.
anyway i appreciate the review and thank you for reading my story! ill try not to let ya down ;)
Reviewer: Rylee Skye (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Bait and Switch
OMFG I HATE YOU SO MUCH!!!!!
Please post sooooooon. or i'll die i swear.
~Rylee
Author's Response: i know, i hate me too. check out the forum for a teaser in the meantime :)
Reviewer: kochanski (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Bait and Switch
Woo! I'm betting somebody was a nosy Mommy! Don't hold out on us now, you've strung us along for a whole chapter waiting for this confrontation...baby don't be cruel!
Author's Response: lolol nosy mommy indeed. its in the queue and should post soon!
Reviewer: Sadiddy (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Bait and Switch
Holy shit, this can not end well. Update soon!!!
Author's Response: yeah thats what im thinking too.
Reviewer: MrsHannahCullen (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 02:00 AM · On: Bait and Switch
Oh YOUR KIDDING ME!?!?!
On Christmas Day aswell.
How could you do this to me!!
Haha fantastic cliffie!!
H x
Author's Response: lolol thank you! im overwhelmed by the response to this chapter, its awesome!
Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Bait and Switch
OME! Please update soon! Great chapter BTW!
Author's Response: thank you! im working on the update i swear.
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Bait and Switch
OMG!!!!
Author's Response: haha good? or bad? that makes me nervous.
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Bait and Switch
OMG. That was awesome.
Author's Response: thanks! i worked sorta hard on that one, im glad you like it.
Reviewer: Jay Middle (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Bait and Switch
Woo hoo! No stuttering or blushing? I'm shocked.
Author's Response: shes an old broad now, shes got it together lol.
Reviewer: MizzVixen (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Bait and Switch
Oh, hell!! I KNEW it was Bella! This isn't good. Isn't good. Bella's going to be there when Emma arrives and all hell is going to break loose. Dead bodies everywhere! lol I'm going to start calling you the Cliffhanger Queen since you leave us readers hanging by a thread with every new installment! lol No, seriously it makes for good writing and mystery. She put her lips to his cheek??? Hmmm...me thinks she still may be in love. So how's that snow in NJ? I'm from MD and I now reside in the South. I miss my SNOW!!!
Author's Response: haha you knew?! awesome! theres no cliffie in the next few chapters because even i cant handle that kind of suspense lol. and the kiss wasnt meant to be like... sexual, it was more for the shock factor, if that helps at all. ok it was sort of sexual because sex drives pretty much everything i do. but anyway...
the snow is start to melt in the dirty jerz because its been (relatively) warm the past few days. which is good, cause there was like 18 inches of it and it was hard to do anything (for other people... i drive jeep wrangler because im a closet tomboy and i was rockin and rollin in 4WD like it aint no thang in the blizzard) BUT my best friend lives in MD (rockville) and she got slammed pretty bad too. im sure shed be happy to share some of her snow with you lol.
thanks for reading!
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Bait and Switch
Oh NO! AHHHHH!
Author's Response: haha right? shit, meet fan.
Reviewer: Cissella (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Bait and Switch
Oh My JESUS!! i need more, im craving...ahhh!!! how will i manage?
btw...standing ovation.
Author's Response: standing ovation?! thank you so much! more is on the way.
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Scented.
Of COURSE I forgive you! I just started reading this like a week ago, so I never had to wait for an update after a cliffie ... Argh. I'm just an impatient bitch, that's all. :) Merry Christmas!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Bait and Switch
shit...bella....um oh dear!!! did emma let slip something at home or did jake recognise the smell of edward??? happy holidays!
Author's Response: youll find out in the next chap :) and happy holidays to you as well!
Reviewer: Gerolling (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Bait and Switch
bäm, didnt see that comming
Author's Response: haha thats what i was hoping for. im full of tricks like that.
Reviewer: lexy lujan (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Bait and Switch
dammn you! i want it! i love and hate you sooo much right now! screw you for being such a great writer!
Author's Response: hahahahaha ill take the "screw you" if it means im a great writer. thank you very much. that chapter is my favorite so far i think, i just love the ending. but then again... i know how it turns out so it doesnt give me heartburn the way it does to you lol.
Reviewer: saucyiscrazy (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Bait and Switch
I am gonna be honest...when I got dont reading this i let out a loud "oooooohhhhh shit"....oh lord! Well I will wait here by my computer to see what happens next!
Author's Response: good, thats what i was going for lol. and im glad ive kept you captivated!
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